sure, last time i read ur poem i rated a 5!
no way.
if i like the poem
no, nothing personal, i usually just dont feel like rating
~~~CUTZ IN THE AIR~~~
Hurt before this and lost today
Warmth of eyes were gone away
Wanting love U'd never say
The rain outside and the pouring rain
The thoughts of you and all you drain.
Feeling you is feeling pain.
I'm empty now and ur ok
On this concrete floor and there i lay
The loss of dreams and beat to this..
How could pasts make me miss
Just the longing passion in a kiss
Floating black clouds and mysterious eyes
Artic hands and frantic minds
Blood and smiles more loud notes
Screams of love scratch our throats
Scribbles of hearts ur name in mine
Whispered words we couldnt define.
Experiment me and find me new
The poems i wrote the future we drew
I'm scared and lost you all but knew
The lies ive told to keep you from truth
I'd die without you but thats just fine
No longer the hands that intertwined
Green and Blue oceans of hate
Staring in those eyes till late,
Who has to kno the secrets we shared
The down and alone, the love impaired
I've fallen in love after and before
I want more but i'm never sure
Stroking strings songs insecure
You gave me a love that never matures
You were changed but always same
My first kiss is urs to blame
I'll say no if you take me back
Before i have a last panic attack
I fall in love with someone new
I cant love them without wanting you
Theres somthing more about u that i dont get
Its my obsession of you i just cant quit
Our feelings were cold and dull
I hate myself for lack of gull
All those times i never recall
Are the ones ur not in at all
Days of holding smiles into hearts
The days when love flew off the charts
I'm selfish angry and sensitive present
The words i speak are all but pleasant
Ive become less like me and more like you
I'm hating myself but despising you
Hate just means more obsess
Heart full of pain and mind full of stress
I wish youd want me so you could feel
When i shoot you down the pain unreal
But id kill myself after those tears
The reddend eyes and mascara smeared
Red Handed betrayal would lead me wrong
The urge to kiss is just too strong
Youd push me away and i would die
The strength youve taken has left me dry
Fake smiles i show to keep my friends
To hide the pain i must pretend
Left me in a state to kill
My eyes are closed and my body still
I havent felt wut i should be
Wut the hell is wrong with me?
I'm fine in day during light
But the shattered hearts rebreak at night
I kno your sitting there thinking of her
Shes oh so better oh ur so sure
I cant hate her but i swear i do
She wont take away my i love you
I gave you mine give it back
U stole my heart and now i lack
Shaking cold and tears of many
Dreams of you come in plenty
Take me back on impulse please
I'll beg you now on my knees
Just so the feelings buried deep inside
Leave me forever to never arise
I'll put my mask on and fight this fight
I'll make those left turns right
I look out my window only to see
Your glaring eyes staring right through me
It cuts the air of peace and sound
All goes black when your around
There is only just one cure
For this pain of that i'm sure
I have to find someone worse
Someone to break this unwanted curse
I found him the other day
But before i loved him he was taken away
Hes better than you in every way
I wish hed come here forever to stay
His eyes were warm and welcoming
His words were filled with sheltering
But I wasnt his and he wasnt mine
I wouldnt be with him for all of time
He had his speacial and only one
He didnt admit it but she had one
He texted her and smiled as so
He didnt have to say i just kno
He felt the way i wanted to feel
He felt the feelings thatd help me feel
Ive got the hope and youve got pain
I kno its there with longing and disdain
Watch me smile when its no more
Your ugly mind that i adore...
boo ur mean please just rate? i worked really hard...:(
