Open The Door

I wrote this after my dad got pissed at me and litterally threw me outside and locked the door. It was really early and I missed the first two periods of school. I just kept pounding on the door but no one came. I felt like shit that whole day. But you wanna know the worst part? It was my birthday.

Created by cherryhater101 on Thursday, March 22, 2012

Please let me in daddy
It's so cold out here
I'll be a good girl
I swear
Please unlock the door
I'm late for school
I didn't mean to make you mad
I try so hard to be good
I didn't wanna make you yell
Please just open the door
I'm pounding my fist so hard
It's turning bright red, daddy
I'm crying and people walking down the street are staring
It's just dawn and the air is cold
I feel so alone
Was I really that bad
You were the one screming
I tried not to be loud
I don't want any more of this abuse
Your pushing me over the edge
I just wanna be warm
Please open the door
Please, I'm begging you
I'll try to be the perfect daughter from now on
Just please, don't make me late to school again
Don't leave me out in the cold
Open the door
Let your good little girl in

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