Did He Really Hear Me Cry?

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Created by tigergirl1000 on Monday, May 29, 2006

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I got into trouble,
And my heart was done loving.
I was sick and tired
Of people and their shoving.
One night,
All I did was cry and cry.
I planned my death over and over,
And was ready to die.
Tonight was the night.
Tonight I would die.
Now I was finally ready,
But then I saw a guy.
'Who are you?' I asked.
'A friend,' he replied.
He came closer to me,
And embraced me in a hug as I cried.
'It's ok,' he told me.
I knew he was trying to help me,
But all I could think of
Was that my life couldn't be.
As he held me close,
He told me everything would be alright.
He told me to live life
To it's fullest and make it bright.
Seconds later,
A bright light shown around him,
And soon he was gone
And the room became dim.
I thought for a moment.
'It couldn't be,' I told myself,
But it was true,
He was truely God and in my heart, he proved himself.

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