A Twilight Poem

Hey guys, My very first DECENT poem, i hope you like...any feed back at all would be intense! This poem is based on the book Twilight by Stephine Meyer...the most addictive book ever written...New Moon is it's sequel and Eclipse the 3rd book is out next year...i highly recommend you read them...despite your normal taste of story please give these books a try, Meyer is very talented! Love youa sll...again ANY feed back, good or bad would be greatly appreciated!
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Created by DemonicPyromaniac on Sunday, October 29, 2006

His white face stares back at me
I feel I'm meant to fear
But I can't help but think
That this was way too clear
His harsh black eyes stare back at mine
My soft brown eyes can't handle
I feel my body begin to shake
Like wind blowing a candle
How can he do this
To little ordinary me?
He turned my world upside down
So I can no longer see
What's meant to be clear
What's meant to be right
So I will no longer fight
And I will let him take me
To a place where all is night
His eyes turn to a topaz gold
I feel like I can't breathe
I try to move my feet
But I can no longer leave
A smile spreads across his face
And up into his eyes
He's messing with my head now
They're filled with sensless lies
His eyes are turning red now
I have a feeling of dread
His smile is turning meancing
As he starts to lower his head
My heart is beating faster
My breath catches in my throat
I feel the blood run down my neck
Eternal night, Hello
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