I'll never let go

So yeah,most of my friends say this is pretty good. So I posted it,enjoy.
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Created by gothgirl225 on Thursday, July 19, 2007

Together and forever he promised to her
with his clever words her heart trusted him
but yet did she know what was coming
oh my
one fine day
she walked in happy as can be
until she saw him and his mistress on the bed
she pondered for a minute before she yelled out
you devil how could you?
he smiled
she ran away crying
and heard him continue
at the balcony 60 feet above
she let her tears fall to the ground below
before doing a thing
he woke the next day
walking to get the paper
when he saw a red spot on the floor
he walked toward the spot until he gasped
dear he thought how could i?
with loud sobs he hugged her corpse
a woman heard and quickly called
they came to get her but he cried out ill never let go

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