My Favorite Melody

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Created by TwiDawnLight on Saturday, November 10, 2007

I stay here and lay,
and watch the children play,
as I gaze at the bright sky above.

I hear the sweetest tweet,
as I close my eyes to sleep,
then open my mouth to sing along.

Our song is so bright,
so filled with morning light,
in this place I feel I belong.

But then the song is done,
the bird flew to the sun,
and with it my heart flew away.

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