I remeber...(edited version)

this is my first poem so be nice...and if u do have comments on how to make it better message me...
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Created by kjsoccer13 on Sunday, July 13, 2008

there we were on Valentine's day
both of us had our eyes full of tears
how did it come to this...
you chose him over me?
you looked so happy
you said your in love
you would tell me
we will still be friends
I was broken hearted
you had said you loved me
butyou were thinking of him
i couldnt even look at you
i grew numb on the inside
you never noticed that you hurt me
you were to happy with him
telling me you found "the one"
over time i grew stronger
you grew weaker
abandoning your morals
turned into a different person
you fell in to his web
of crooked little smiles and lies
he had you around his finger
but you didn't care
like the time he cheated in disney world
and i called you up to talk about it
you said i was jelous
called me a liar
then he broke your heart
like i said he would
you didnt believe me
til you were wrong
he tore you apart
without a second thought
so you came to me
with tears in your eyes
"you were right he treated me bad
oh why didn't i believe you
how did it come to this
y did i chose him over you?"
you said how could he do this
when you were both so in love
dont you remeber
you left me too...

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