vampire story part (1)gurlz

Hey people, I re-did this story, I have the original and the new one. Mail me and tell me which is better.
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Created by wrathXtsumi on 05/06/2008

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ok so a few of your friends and u are out at a bar and all of your friends have a ride home but all of them are drunk and your afraid of what might happen if u go with them so u start to walk home even though its the dead of night and the only thing u can

oh well whatever u picked youre going down the alley this alley is really dark and nasty u can smell really bad things here it about makes u sick, but as your walking u hear foot steps behind u, but dont take much mind to it until something or someone brus

well just then it jumps up and rips your clothes your sleeves and you fall down, but then u see the animal or whatever it is back off a bit and you turn around to see what it is, its a figure about 5"6" tall and they look at it for a few seconds and it run

when u wake up u look at a clock right next to the bed u still feel sick and a little hung-over from drinking the night before then the glares gonna OMG its 7:00pm the next day oh, no your friends never mind that their probally hung-over too and they drank

just as u were doing what ever u were doing someone walks in the room he's got silverish blue hair grey eyes wears a big black shirt with a blue jean jacket and blue jeans well kinda looks like any other 16year old boy would but he's hotter ;3 and he asks

doesnt matter what u picked but lets say u asked who he was k he says his name is kodoku what's yours put ur name here --->_____ now where am i and why am i in different clothes? i can tell you when we're down stairs ok and smilled happy

well u get downstairs and he tells u about the thing attacking you he said it was a demon your thinking?

he's something i must show u ok will u promise not to scream? "of course i dont scream i just faint" he smiles and u see 2 white small fangs sticking out what do u think about him?

are u afraid? well sort of its not every day u see a vampire ya know" "but dont worry i wont hurt u" "may i ask something" "sure whatever u want" "well how old r u?"

"well i guess it doesnt matter really u look like your about 16" (mwhahaha she thinks im 16)"thats good enough just say im that old" just then someone opens that door what r u thinking?

well srry i have to cut u off there i'll add more in the next one cya at (2)same name oh and it will be in the next few day there might be more too

I was at the bar, with a few friends having some drinks, playing games with them talking. It was a colder night and windy. I really didnt want to ride home with my friends, nobody was good enough too. Even though I may have been myself, I was wobbly wal

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