Ray Kon one shot : show me a new world

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Created by marchell on Sunday, July 05, 2009

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The young girl stood looking at her new surroundings every thing so different from what’s she’s use to no cares, no buildings a lifting nightmare to her father dragged her to the middle of no where with his job thy where on a small round ‘I am tired of walking’ she said her red hair hanging in her sparking green eyes ‘stop complaining Eliza we’re almost there’ her father said walking in front ‘haven’t this people ever hear of “cares”’ she said annoyed ‘yes but its not good for their environment ‘ here father sighed he bought his daughter with his he was to be a doctor working for a small village here but it seems that Eliza wasn’t having fun at all ‘when are we going home’ she monad looking down the mountain thy just walked up ‘when thy time here is over no step nagging and give me a hang with the bags’
her father said and sighed ‘you’re the one dragging me down here you can drag our bags to’ she snapped the guilt kept walking and lead them down a small path to a village ‘ doctor mark ! greetings’ an old man walked over to them Eliza just watched the paths and small houses here and there kids where running and playing …..but no mall all she saw was about 3 shops small and old looking ‘its good to be here’ her father said giving a slight bow ‘this is my daughter Eliza’ doctor mark said and Eliza gave a smile but a fake one being polity but wishing thy where on the first plane back home ‘nice to meet you Eliza I hop you’ll enjoy your time here my niece will show you to your places you’ll be staying at after I hop you join me doctor mark we can show you around our clinic’ the old man said and her father nodded ‘Mariah come here’ the old man called and a girl run over with long pink hair and winked ‘yes …….oh your the doctor ^_^ nice to meet you and uncle said that you brought your daughter ……I thought she would be …….younger ?’ Mariah said looking at Eliza who frowned ‘I am 17 get over it’ she said ‘Eliza be nice’ her dad said behind her following to a small cottage

‘I HATE THIS PLACE’ Eliza shouted throwing her bag in the corner ‘it’s a bump… no nothing ‘ ‘ you’ll get use to it -.-; its not that long that we have to be here I have to go to meet up with the village elders you go have a look around town make some friends’ her father said and walked out ‘ friends…….friends! pleas’ she sighed and token a book ‘I had friends before coming here china why the hell…’ she started walking the places was quiet and kind of beautiful mountains

She started walking down a small path to where she heard the sound of rushing water ‘a water fall’ she mumbled to herself the places might be in the middle of no where but it anit all bad she sighed walking down maybe a quick swim? She thought looking down the water but then froze seeing some one under the water fall she token a step closer for a better look and felt a slight blush when she saw him he was right under the water fall standing it looked like meditating he had long black hair looked like it was in a phony tail and strong muscles’ she blushed even more as thought ran throw her head then his eyes opened tigerish golden eyes looked straighter at her but then “SHIT!’ her foot slipped and she sided stumped till she fell into the water

The water was deeper then Eliza thought then suddenly she felt some thing pull her up ‘are you okay?’ a calm voice asked she opened her eyes it was the boy that was under the water fall his face close to hers she was in his arms ‘yea……..I…..yea I am fine’ she finely spat out he smiled his hair was wet he jumped after her ? ‘ careful the grounds abit slippery’ he said letting go of her feeling embarrassed she crawled out o the water ‘I haven’t seen you here before a tourist?’ he said lifting his brow ‘pft no I wish my dad’s working here for abit’ she said dryly ‘thought something like that don’t get many tourists around here you know’ he smirked and aloes walked out of the water he was a lot taller then her ‘I am rei’ he said holding out his hand to her but she just crossed her arms ‘I am bored of this places already’ she said annoyed ‘where you from then’ he looked at her up and down ‘a city you know big buildings, cares malls’ she said explaining to him like he never seen one before ‘actually yea I know what you mean I been around’ he smirked ‘right….’ She started walking ‘your going the wrong way’ he said behind her ‘pft I don’t know what you mean I know the way back to the cottage’ she said confident ‘are you sure?’ he smirked and she turned looking at his eyes ‘yes! She snoozed ‘well your going the wrong way the cottage is the other way’ he smirked and pointed he looked at the way ad felt humiliated realizing he was right

‘how was your day?’ mark asked his daughter walking into her small room ‘horrible I want to go home’ she said sulking ‘its not that bad’ he said softly and she sake her head ‘what about my friends?, the internet some connection with the real world! My world’ she said about to cry ‘this is our world fro now ………why don’t you explore it you might come to like it’ he said leaning on the door ‘look I heard there an lot of kids your age why don’t you g with them on a hike or something? Just how do you say “chill”’ he sighed ‘dad you know I love you but never say “chill” like that again’ she rolled here eyes and pulled the brush throw her red hair ‘just think about it ……..and my day went great thanks for asking’ he said and left the room

The next few days then bye slowly Eliza spent most her time reading in the small room or outside under the trees her father was busy with patients every one in the town was friendly and always greeted with a slight bow with wash weird she didn’t see a single cell phone , pc , or even some good fusion sense she sat listing to her iPod as the pink girl walked over ,,,,,,,,,,ugh its what’s her face….Mariah Eliza thought ‘hey you dad said you where here’ she smiled showing sharp teeth ‘nice of him’ Eliza mumbled turning the page of her book ‘aren’t you uncountable in toes shoos ?.....why don’t you come have some fun with us?’ she suggested but Eliza didn’t seem interested ‘is this the doc’s kid’ a green haired short kid appeared out of no where ‘yup ^_~’ Mariah said this is now annoying Eliza just a bit to match ‘rei spayed he met her’ Kevin said stroking back I his neck ‘but didn’t say she looked like this’ she implied ‘and exactly what dose “this” look like’ Eliza said closing her book ‘calmed down jeez’ rei said walking over it was him just he was wearing a shirt now but his muscles still visible ‘come on we’re going into the forest it will be fun’ ray smiled at Eliza and something inside her twisted like thy say “butterflies”

Thy all went hacking all the way up into the green …….every thing green Eliza have never been in a places like this ‘are you okay?’ ray looked back at her she was dragging at the end of the line she was tired and her high heels weren’t helping the case match ‘just fine thank you’ she said determent to go on and prove she doesn’t need….hell…..’ahh!’ she cried her foot got couch and fell over a root of a tree not only breaking her heel but aloes spraining her enckeal it felt more like broken ‘its not broken’ Mariah assured her looking at it but the burning pain was still there ‘what a wussy’ Kevin said rolling his eyes and Eliza growled ray then pulled her up ‘come on I’ll give you a piggy back to town’ he said and she just looked at him suspired limping down all the way would take to long’ he said and crutched so she could get on she felt a slight blush over her cheeks and got on his back holding on ray stared walking down’ I’ll meet up with you guys latter’ he said and walked Mariah gave a jealous stair after them but managed to wave ‘okay ray! See you in a bit!’ Mariah called

‘this is .ugh thanks’ Eliza said blushing as ray put her down on the sofa in the cottage then looked at her encheal ‘don’t worry about it pretty swollen’ he said and wrapped a wet towel around her encheal the rest of the day was spent talking and joking between them he was a nice guy to Eliza easy to get along with the hours turned to day

Ray token her on a tour throw the village every thing so different from what she knows he kept laughing with her not at her when she asked stupid questions and especially when she wanted a internet café

Eliza and ray soon become the greatest of friends and he token her every day with him into the forest she would watch him train and had show her around the places ‘you look tired’ she teased sitting down next to ray who was seating ‘yea lee gave me a work out racing throw the forest this morning’ ray said and token a gulp of his water ‘Eliza token of her shoes ‘ hey your look tired yourself’ ray teaches taking the hair off her cheek leaving Eliza red from blushing ‘yea ….I helped my dad out abit’ she was trying to get the confidence to confess to him she liked him but that was just to out of the reach ‘ray. I huh …….AHHH” she shouted as a sharp pain shot throw her leg ray looked shocked as thy saw the snake she mast have set her foot down on him after taking off her shoes ‘ ARE YOU OKAY’ ray looked drained and shocked she was griping her foot ‘no …….no it hurts’ Eliza said her eyes filling with tears thy where far from the clinic ray was shocked and panicking ‘hold still’ ray said staying calm and kneed next to her ‘what are you doing’ she said throw the tears ‘I’ll suck the poison out’ ray said placing his lips over her enckeal her couldn’t blush it hurt to match ray tasted the foul poison in his mouth spiting it out and again places his lips on her encheal till he tasted blood ‘ray’ she said faintly ‘hey you’ll be okay come on’ ray softly picked her up in his arms and started walking down the way back into town as fast as he could ‘hang on el’ he whispered in her ear ‘ray……..I…love you’ she said softly so soft that she barely heard it herself

‘hey Eliza your awake’ her fathers smiling face was over her ‘what happened’ he sat up ‘you got bitten buy a posines snake …….you fainted from shock’ her father said getting off her bed ‘you scared me ………you where lucky Eliza and I was surprised to see that ray kid carrying you in he was nearly crying’ her father admitted ‘Eliza…….if you still want to go home we can leave its up to you now’ he said walking to the door ‘oh and you have a visitor’ he said as ray stepped in ‘hey how are you ?’ he said walking to her but she jumped up and wrapped her arms around his neck ‘thank you’ he said then blushed realizing what she had done and let go instantly he was just as red as she was across his cheeks ‘your not going to leave are you ?’ he looked at her and she shake her head ‘I don’t know yet ?’ she said softly ‘don’t ……..don’t go Eliza’ he said and token her hand nervously and she healed it back ‘I want you to stay with me’ he mumbled ‘yes…………. I want to’ she blushed and his places his lips softly on his kissing her lips’ I love you Eliza I didn’t know how to say it’ he blushed and gave another kiss ‘I love you to’ Eliza mumbled into the kiss she was going to stay with him with ray

‘you kids want something to drink?’ her father called from the kitchen try both blushed ‘be my girlfriend ?’ ray asked and she nodded and hugged him ‘yes always’
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