Beauty is More Than a Pretty Face [Kurama Story] *Forced Submission* `20`

Sorry it's taking so long to put these out again... I've been knee deep in scholarships and grant apps that my heads about to explode (and my fingers might fall off)!!! That and I'm pretty much at the end of what I've written so I need to write more before I have a major brain fart and forget what I have planned.... But don't let me keep ramblin' READ MAH STORY!!!!

Created by xZeroHavenx on Thursday, July 09, 2009

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~Recap~
You are discussing your ancient past with Koenma and trying to put the peices of this puzzle together, but it seems far from finished. You are also trying to figure out if you have any powers by asking Koenma...

“I’m afraid I can’t tell you anything about that. It’s up to you to choose what you will do and how you will use your powers.”

You sigh and rub your temples, “I read that in a fortune cookie once… It didn’t make since then and it doesn’t now…”

You walk out of the room and wander the halls. You find a balcony that overlooks the river. You hear a loud noise and turn to see this huge man sitting behind you. His face is covered by a bamboo screen. His size scares you and you nearly scream.
You stumbled into Emporer Enma's throne room. You and him get to know each other al little before Boton comes to get you...
You get onto her oar and she flies you to the gang.
You sense something, it’s something bad. You don’t know what it is, but all of a sudden you get a terrible headache and fall off the oar. You land right in front of Kuwabara. You’re writhing in pain, rolling around. Holding your head trying to make it stop hurting, Kurama rushes to you and picks you up.
You've passed out and arehaving another flashback of your past...
You finally see the man that captured you, but he didn't only take you. He took Yoko as well. As a sort of leaverage so you'll do what he wants.

“Next time I say do something, you’ll do it. Or I’ll kill our other prisoner…and you wouldn’t want that.”

He turns and you see Yoko, unconscious, being dragged into the cell next to you. You don’t move. You’re body is frozen in fear.

“I see that you understand now…”

~QS~
You sit up and bow your head. This is a terrible situation. Why you? Why did they have to capture Yoko as well? Why couldn’t they leave him…his men could’ve fixed him up. You sigh and tears flow down your face once more before the man walks out. You rush towards the front of your stall and call out to Yoko. There is no answer.

“Yoko…please wake up!!” you shout and slam your fist into the wall, “this is all my fault…”

You collapse onto the ground and cry into your hands. You feel someone’s hand on you and turn quickly to see Yoko. He’s beaten up pretty bad, but still alive.

“This isn’t your fault. I promise you that…” he smiles slightly and you wipe your tears.

“B-but…” Yoko leans against the wall and you do to. It’s like you’re leaning on him. A smile comes to your face as you feel warm inside.

“Well…I’m glad that you’re here.” You tell him and he lets out a small chuckle.

“That’s an odd thing to say, seeing as we are both captives.”

You laugh and sigh, “I know…but I’m really glad I’m not alone.”

You set your hand down by the bared door. You sigh and rub the ground. You draw a fox in the dirt on the ground and Yoko chuckles, “I see you’re never too bored to draw…”

You laugh and stand with your fists clenched.

“I’m getting out of here!!” you demand and Yoko stands as well.

“No… I have a plan. We need to stay here for awhile longer.”

You nod and plop down on the bed, dust flies into the damp air. This causes you to sneeze and Yoko laughs at you.

“I’m glad you’re having such a good time…” you hear and your ears fold back.

“What do you want?” you ask and turn to face your kidnapper.

“I need you to do something for me.”

You sigh and walk towards the barred door, “What?”

Your ears are still folded flat. He grins and points to a man.

“This gentleman is interested in purchasing you… If you are good and do as I’m told, I will not sell you. If not I will kill Yoko then sell you…”

You cross your arms and grin, “then when I’m sold…I’ll come back and kill you, slowly and painfully.”

“How much did you want for her?”

You laugh and glance at Yoko. He grins and you nod, “Okay…I’ll do what you want.”

He unlocks the door and you walk out. You bow politely to the other man and he smirks, like he knows something you don’t.

“This way please.” You nod and begin walking. As you are walk out of the dungeon you glance back at Yoko...

End
(sorry this one was short... The next one'll be long(but not too long), I promise!! :D
Next time...
We begin to see figures of AIjou's past come to try to take her future away...
The eye's of a fox never lie, and they never take their eyes off of their treasure...
So stay tuned for another episode of Beauty is More Than a Pretty Face!!!
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