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FullMetal Alchemist - A Talent Beyond Compare - 6

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Created by Doggiedemon987 on Friday, March 10, 2006

(in case you an idiot, im re-doing the sceen of Nina for the person i based this story on Katie, whis username is CrimsonchimeraKT, a dedication to Nina) The next morning you woke up feeling more tired then usual. you stuffed your head under your pillow and tried falling asleep. you felt a tap on your shoulder and you groaned angrily. "what? is that how I get my good morning from you?" you just grummbled when you felt yourself being striped of your warmth... you curled into a ball, still keeping your head stuffed under your pillow. "for crying out loud" you heard the voice say again and you opened one eye lid slightly. trying to adjust into the light. you saw Edward, sitting by you bed with a glass of what looked like ice water. before he dumped it on you, you squealed. "DONT YOU DARE EDWARD ELRIC!!" Ed jumped at your sudden outburst and dropped the water on the floor. "COLD!" Ed squealed and jumped onto you bed. you noticed his feet were bare and he was shivering lightly. you pushed him off the bed and into the cold water. "heeey! your gonna pay for that Katie!" you stuck your tounge out at him and watched as he got up, grumbling about his clothes being cold and wet. you steped over the puddle ed made and opened the blinds. the clouds were dark and dreary and they loomed over the mansion. you sighed sadly. "oh well, a dull, depressing day" you say as ed looks out the window. "huh, funny. It was sunny when I got up" you glanced at your clock. 11:47. "WHAT!! WHY DIDN'T YOU WAKE ME UP SOONER!" Ed fell over but the gust of wind that flew form your mouth. he frowned and got up quickly, only to argue with you. " I've been trying to all morning!" "with what!?" you asked and ed pointed to a stick laying lifeless in the cold water. "you mean to tell me... you've been poking me with a stick for about 2 hours trying to wake me up?" "yup" ed replied with a hint of laughter. you shot him a deadly glare and Ed's smile vanished into bliss. he had a scared expression on his face by the look you gave him. 'oh crap, whats she going to do to me now?' but he didn't stick along to find out because he ran out of your room so fast, a slight dust trail flew behind him. you picked up the stick and ran out into the hall way, throwing it at Ed as he just turned the corner, hitting him in the back of the head. "WHAT THE HELL WOMAN!?" Ed screamed and you waved your pointer finger around at him. "put that stick back were you found it before I shove it up your ass!" Ed picked up the stick, grumbling about something before he fully turned the corner and left the hall way. you sighed heavily and rubbed the back of your head. "I better take a shower. I feel gross" you report to yourself. you walk into your bathroom and turn on the shower, stripping off your clothes. you step into the shower and you tilt your head back. you closed your eyes, you couldn't help but feeling relaxed right now.
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A half an hour later, after reporting and arguing to Ed about you taking the day off, you roamed the house, getting a little bord. you came across a room with double doors, the color of ivory, lined with a gold design. you looked to you left, then you right to make sure that no one was around. you opened the doors, your mouth dropped at the beauty. a large ball room, with angel designs on the celling, that looked as though, even painted by angels. (it lookss like the ball room from the Disney movie, Beaty and the Beast, only in Anime form) you looked at the items around the room. the only things in this room was a grand piano in the center, and a Violin and Cello in the corner by the window. closeing the doors behind you with a loud thud, you walked swiftly in the room, your shoes echoing in the praticaly empty room. you made your way to the piano, which felt as though it took for ever to get to because the room was very large indeed. you finaly made you way to the Brown Grand piano. you touched the white and black keys fondly. you loved music, and playing it may I add. (I play Piano and Violin) you made a few note with the piano. you then cleared your voice, knowing the one song you haven't sang in a while. (Song: You Raise Me Up by: Josh Groban. you sound Like him in a female voice while singing. your voice is sopure, just like his. incase you didnt know, its the song playing right now)
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When I am down and, oh my soul, so weary;
When troubles come and my heart burdened be;
Then, I am still and wait here in the silence,
Until you come and sit awhile with me.
You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains;
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders;
You raise me up, To more than I can be.
You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains;
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders;
You raise me up, To more than I can be.
You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains;
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders;
You raise me up, To more than I can be.
There is no life, no life without its hunger;
Each restless heart beats so imperfectly;
But when you come and I am filled with wonder,
Sometimes, I think I glimpse eternity.
You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains;
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders;
You raise me up, To more than I can be.
You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains;
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas;
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders;
You raise me up, To more than I can be.
You raise me up, To more than I can be...
...
.:Ed and Als POV:. while roaming the hallways, Ed turned to Al with a pissed off tone. "you know, i ont know why she wants to take the day off today, she can be so spoiled" Al sighed heavily. "give her a break Ed. your've pushed her hard into this work. you should just let her.. huh?" "what is it Al?" "Listen.. I herd a loud 'Thud'coming form that hallway" Ed looked down the dark hallway and motioned Al to follow, which he did. "Listen... a Piano.." Al said pressing his head against these doubble doors engraved with gold designs. "shhh" Ed commanded as he heard a female voice sing so heavinly. Al sigh. "its katie..." Ed sighed as well as he and al slumped down to the bottem of the door with their backs against it. Ed closed his eyes, lost in a bliss of katies heavenly voice. an angels voice that only one who was immortal could sing. "Katie..." I simply said as she said those last words. "... you raise me up, To more the I can be..." .:Yours POV:. you sighed as you finished. Amazed at what you just performed to yourself, and tried to think of another song on the piano, but none came to mind. you walked ver the violin and ran your fingers over its engraved design. you haven't felt a violin for a long time. it was destroyed after mom and dad died when you dropped it form a tree while playing it. you positioned yourself, and played Bratja, (translation: Brother. its on the FMA first soundtrack. song number 32. for those who have the first DVD, its the music in episode 3, Mother, right after ed gets his auto mail and he and al are training. that music ok? message me for a link so you can listen to it)once you finsih, you herd a noise comeing form outside the door. it sounded alot like "wow.." you arched an eyebrow and tiptoed over to the doors. opening both of them, out tumbled Ed and Al. you eyed them suspiciously as they tried to come up with a fast excuse. you scilenced them. "How long were you there?" "from the begining I guess" answered Ed. you smiled and closed the doubble doors, Ed in Al now acompalying the room with you. Ed sighed at you. "Katie.. you know your really good at this. playing music that is." you turned around and smiled. "Yes. Ive been playing since I have 4. it's a good way for me to express myself, let it all out in a beautiful way, and a way that could make other people understand. If i'm sad, ill play sad music, making other people know how I feel." "you know. every year, theres a Military ball. If you become a state alchemist, you can play the piano there-" "no no no. I couldn't" Ed and Al guided you to the piano and sat you down. "yes you could" they both said and you looked at the keys once more. you pressed down on a few, creating a note. you ended up playing Serenade, (from Fruits basket. the song that is played in the 25th episode at the cemetary when Hana-jima tells Tohru to go save Kyo when she find out the secret. its also in the credits. nce again, gimme a message for the link) Ed watched as your beautifly long fingers glided across the key bord and Al say down, listening to your music. Eds eyes then moved to your face. your face walk calm, and you eyes were some what closed. you smiled at each note that came from this insterment. Ed smiled along with you. he toom a seat at the bench, as if saying he wanted you to teach him music. 'I want to express myself as she does in such a beautiful manor' Ed thought, trying to memorize which keys your pressing, but he instantly forgets. he's so in awe that he cant think straight. hes just blown away by your talent beyond compare...
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That night, you slept soundly. there was a cry in the night tht awoke you from slumber. you sighed and got up, walking into the hallway and into the room it came from. Nina sat in her bed, crying. you sighed and smiled as you glided over to her. she looked up at you, but said nothing as tears took their turns falling out of her adorible big blue eyes. you stroked her long brown hair, which was loose from its braids. "Nina? what wrong?" Nina could only shiver slightly as a big "BOOM" of thunder echoed in the room. you were so tired, that you didn't notice the storms. "I can't sleep. Im scared of the thunder" she quivered. you sighed at Nina, whos eyes were glistened with tears. "Now now. there really isn't anything to be afraid of-" there was another boom and flash of lightning as Nina clung to you for dear life. you wrapped loving arms around her as your stroked her hair lovingly. "Rain is just a way to make the beautiful day you see in the morning..." you sat Nina on her lap and began to sing to her... (Song; Lullabye for a Stormy night by Vienna Teng. read the lyrics, because in between, i put in some of the story ok?)
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little child, be not afraid
though rain pounds harshly against the glass ~ Rain pounded against her large glass window and nina clung to you harder~
like an unwanted stranger, there is no danger
I am here tonight
~you oved some hair from her bangs and wiped away some of the fallen tears that stained her baby soft skin~
little child, be not afraid
though thunder explodes and lightning flash ~lightning flashed threw the window and Nina burried her face in your shirt~
illuminates your tear-stained face
~you wiped away Ninas tears with both of your thumbs and you re-wrapped your arms around Nina~
I am here tonight
and someday you'll know
that nature is so
the same rain that draws you near me
falls on rivers and land
on forests and sand
makes the beautiful world that you'll see
in the morning
~In your mind,you visioned a garden, the morning dew dripping off the plants and you smiled as Nina smiled back~
little child, be not afraid
though storm clouds mask your beloved moon
and its candlelight beams, still keep pleasant dreams
I am here tonight
little child, be not afraid
though wind makes creatures of our trees ~Trees swayed in the night, casting shadows on the walls. Nina held onto you again, but you pointed to the cherry blossem tree outside her window~
and their branches to hands, they're not real, understand
and I am here tonight
~you felt Nina fall asleep in your arms as you put her down gently, walking towards the giant window. the rain stoped, and the wind blew slightly, causing the moon to re-appear. you took a deep breath~
for you know, once even I was a
little child, ~you visoned a small child, who was crying in a corver of her room. it was you~
and I was afraid ~you saw your reflection as you touched the window with your finger tips. you saw another figure in the relflection and saw it was Ed. you smiled, but you didn't turn around, acting as though he wasn't there~
but a gentle someone always came
to dry all my tears, trade sweet sleep for fears
and to give a kiss goodnight
~Nina reopened her eyes and she saw you walking over to her. you sat down and she sat in your lap agian. your craddled her in your arms~
well now I am grown
and these years have shown
that rain's a part of how life goes
but it's dark and it's late
so I'll hold you and wait
'til your frightened eyes do close
~Nina sang along scilently with you~
and I hope that you'll know...
everything's fine in the morning
the rain'll be gone in the morning
but I'll still be here in the morning... ~Nina slowly closed her eyes as did you, falling asleep by her side~
...
.:Eds POV:. I saw Katie fall asleep besides Nina. i tiptoed over to her and I scooped her up into my arms. I carried her back into her room, but i took my time, enjoying the fact that she was in my arms for the moment. I brought her to her bed and I set her down on the bed. I nuzzled my left cheek (on his face) against her right cheek (again, on her face) lightly and I smiled. her skin was baby soft, and I felt her smile underneith my face. I brought my lips up to her forehead and kissed it lightly. I smiled broadly at her, petting her hair fondly. I slowly walked out of the room, watching her as I slowly closed the door behind me...
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Ok, Im really sorry I didnt put in the other quote for "what!? the exam is next week! i thought it was in a couple of months" but I never ad time to put it in. so it'll be in the next one. heres a preview for the next story~ "keep him entertained in the mean time ok?" "You'll see..." sound cool? I had to change the quotes around because i had them up for ht wrong chapter. please rate and message and the next one will be out sooner~ Bri

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