My YuYuHackusho story part#2 (once again, please read and message me!)

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They jumped into the cool, refreshing water, and started to splash and play.(I know it sounds like they're 5 years old, but c'mon everyone gets to act like an idot once in a while!) " Hey, MARCO POLO everyone!" Lynn shouted joyously. So, it turned out that Kurama was 'it' first, but he won quickly since he has very acute hearing. " Hiei you're!" Kurama siad, throwing him the blind-fold. And to everyone's surprise, he eagerly put it on. " MARCO!" Hiei shouted. " POLO!" everyone else shouted. He came after Kuwabara first, who incidentily wet his pants out of fright.( They made him sit out for the rest of the game) Then, he went for Lynn. She luaghed and tried to get out of the way, but Hiei grabbed her around the waist and pulled her down under the water. She was surprised, but held her breath all the same. Once they were submerged all the way, Hiei took off the blindfold and moved closer. He kissed Lynn softly on her lips. Lynn wanted the light kiss to go on forever, but she was running out of air. They quickly broke apart and broke through the surface.(of the water) Every rushed forward, asking if they were o.k., since they were underwater for so long. "Yes," Lynn panted, while giving Hiei a small smile," Never felt better,"
They got out of the water when it started to get dark. Yuskie ,amazingly, managed to start a fire. They roasted some marshmellows and hotdogs they had brought along. (Lynn, ofcourse, didn't eat the hotdogs since she was a vegitarian) They talked about the up-coming turnament that was going to be hosted, unbalivably, in America(no offence to non-americans) And, since they were all from Japan, they asked Lynn all about it. They already knew all about obvious thing like; the Statue Of Libirty, the Grand Canyon, the Florda Everglades, numeral national park, ect, But, they didn't know if it would be hot or cold, what the animals would be like, and stuff like that. "Well," said Lynn after a moment's silence," it all depends where in the U.SA. it's going to be, cause we've got everythin; mountains, tundra, tropics woodlans, plains, deserts, everything. " I think it's in some place called Indy-any, or something," botan said lamly. " Indiana!" Lynn exclaimed," That's where I live!" " Yeah, but that's only for the first half," Botan explained," After that, they move it to North Cary-linia for the finals", " Don't you mean North Carolina?" Lynn asked starting to luagh at how they didn't say the names correctly.
Later that night, Kieko suggested playing truth or dare. Everyone agreed. And since Kieko suggested it, she got to go first,"O.k. Kurama, truth or dare?" He thought for a second, then said," Dare," Kieko also thought for a moment, then" I dare you to....slow dance with Yuskie!" 'Waht? That's not fair!" Yuskie burst out hotly. "Oh, yes it is! You have to!" Kieko said, smiling at him. Everyone laughed histarically when Kurama and Yuskie danced, and they luaghed at themselves afterwards. "alright then, truth or dare Hiei?" Kurama asked when he regained control of himself. Hiei took no time in answering" Dare," Kurama thought, then," I dare you to.....kiss Lynn on the lips," he finished with a small smile on his face. Hiei blushed, then said," Alright," He beconed for Lynn to scoot a little closer, then they kissed. Lynn thought that she must be the luckiest girl in the world to get two kisses in one day, and from Hiei at that! They both seemed to be in their own world till, " Uhhh, you two can stop now," came Kurama's voice. Everyone was laughing, and Yuskie and Kuwabara were whistling. They both blushed four different shades of red. "It's your turn Hiei," Lynn muttered. "oh, Truth or dare Lynn" "Truth" she answered with-out hesitation. " Do you have a boyfreind back in Indiana?" he asked quietly " No," she answered, looking him strait in the eye.
That night they decided to go back to the hotel to sleep. Well, all except for Kuwabara, who had been dared to stay at the beach alone for the night. " 'Night Hiei," Lynn blushing a little, then, quick as a flash, she kissed him on the cheek and hurried into here room. "You o.k.?" Kurama asked, having watched the whole thing from the living room. " Never been better," Hiei replied, smiling as he went inside of his room.
Lynn woke up to the sound of foot steps outside her bedroom door. "Get up Lynn, you have to train today, remember?" she heard Hiei call out. "O.k.! I'll be up in a minute!" she called back groggly. She hurridly got up and got ready; she tied hair back in a pony-tail, washed her face, and got dressed. She wore a white t-shirt, and a pair of blue-jeans ripped at the knees.(It happened from learning how to roller-blade,lol!) "I'm training with you first," Kuwabara says confidently. "O.K., but it's your funeral," She muttered under her breath. They all walked out onto the lawn after eating breakfast. "Ready, set, go!" Kurama called. Kuwabara made his trade mark spirit sword, and Lynn decided to try to use the earth. She concentraited, but nothing happened, so she just decided to use regular old spirit energy. She put her hands infront of her, and willed for her energy to come out. Then suddenly, a beam of energy streaked out of her hands and hit Kuwabara squarely in the chest. He was knocked out cold. " Oh, gosh I'm soo sory!" she cried, rushing forward. "It's o.k! That's what you're supposed to do." Kurama told her reassuringly. Next, she fought with Kurama. "Rose whip!" he shouted. And, to her amazment, a long thorny rose came outof his hand. Lynn suddenly threw her hands up in the air, and started to radiat energy furiously. Two balls of what appaered to be light formed in her hands. She closed her eyes and shot the light-energy instinctivly where Kurama was. Usually Kurama could dodge just about anything but, this light was travling at ...well, the speeed of light! It hit him and knocked him over. "O.K. let's take a break everyone!" Yuskie called.
Lynn stumbled over to a tree stump, and sat down. " What's wrong?" said a famillair voice from behind her. Lynn sighed, and said, " Hiei, awhile I was fighting kuwabara, I tried to use the power of earth. But, nothing happened. And, when I was fighting Kurama, I used the power of light with-out even knowing it! I don't under stand what's going on..." hiei considered her for a moment, then bent down so they were at eye level, and siad," You're still adjusting to your powers, you can't expect yourself to be able to control all of your powers on command. Don't wory, you'll get the hang of them soon,"
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