The Lost City of Atlantis - 1 - Vacation Across the Sea

About You: Your name is Rakayla (friends call you Kay) and you are 16 years of age. You have light brown hair and bright blue eyes. Your quite the little beauty though, you yourself fails to see that, and when it comes to school, your focus is the work, nothing else really matters....even boys.
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"Coming Mom!" You yell down the stairs to your awaiting parents. You grab your suitcase and lug it downstairs while giving a cheery smile to your folks. This is the trip you have been waiting for all year! The infamous cruize that your parents promised you since you were thirteen. You all pile into the car, and all the way there you sing along with the radio. After nearly half an hour drive you and your parents finally arrive. You look out your window and set your eyes upon the huge, white ship that is calling out your name.
"Mom, is that the ship we're going on?"
You ask your mother excitedly.
"Let's see. We're sailing on the 'Atlantis'."
Your mom informs you. You look closely at the ship to find the words 'Atlantis' written on the side. (side note: I have no idea if they name cruize ships, I've never been on one. So forgive me if they don't) You smile to yourself at the thought of sailing on the huge ship. This is gonna be great! You tell yourself.

After a couple of minutes of waiting in line, getting the tickets and such sorted out, it's finally time to board the ship. You follow your parents onboard, and can not help but just soak everything in. The inside of the ship was delicate and beautiful. it was almost like a fairy tale, being on a ship that seemed as if it were made for royalty. You pushed and wondered with your parents in an attempt to find your room. Finally, after nearly an hour of searching you found just the one you were looking for. The room was rather small, almost too small for your comfort, but decent none the less. The room containted two beds and a bath, as well as a tiny litte balcony that looked out over the ocean. "Beautiful" You say quietly as you stare out at the ocean, just watching the waves roll to and fro.
"Honey, come get your things put away. I left some drawer space for you." You hear your mom say from behind you. Knowing how much you packed, there must not be much space left You think, while giggling lightly.
"yes mom." You say aloud in response. You sort through your clothes and items putting them away in a neat fashion, nearly until dinner time. Just as your stomach is starting to grumble your parents announce that it's time for some fine dinning. The fine dinning took place in a small on-board seafood resteraunt. Your order the lobster, one of your favorites, and eat every single last bite. After dinner you retire to your room. Your parents go up on deck to look at the stars, but you decide to be content with your little balcony instead. As you stare up at the dark night sky you silently wish that this trip would be filled with adventures. Ones to make this trip completely memorable. As you wish off into the distance a heavier breeze begins to pick up. You consider for a moment going back inside, but you quickly ridicule yourself for being a wimp. So, you decide to stay on the balcony, brave the wind, and continue to stare at the sky, and the vast ocean beneath it. All at once a huge gust of wind come crasshing towards you. You begin to lose your footing and slip and fall right off the edge!!
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You scream at the top of your lungs as the balcony fades from your view at an alarming rate. Is this the end? Am I gonna die? I think to yourself as you continue screaming hoping that someone will hear you and notice you have fallen. After what seems like an eternity of falling you hit the water so hard it make your nearly pass out. You strain to stay awake as you hold your breath beneath the water. The water is dark and frightening, you can see nothing, but can hear everything. The sound of creatures moving about fills your ears. Just as you are about to black out, you see a faint light coming towards you. Closer...closer....the darkness take over you and you fall into unconciousness.

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