--{The Cry of the Fallens}--{Chapter 1}--{One Step}--

Created by mistress-sama on Friday, December 16, 2005


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One step... have you ever notice now
we need just one more step and we will reach our goal. One step, and we will be
home, one step and we will be in safety. One step... can change our lives.



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Full moon is hiding behind a dark cloud. The stars are too
afraid to show there faces tonight. On a dark hill a woman with dirty white
dress, is running between the death trees. Running, running away from the fear
that is inside her heart.
Every 5 minutes she turn to see if someone's behind
her, but the dark fog don't let her see too far. Not knowing if It is
still behind her, she kept running to the top. But before she reach the door,
something hid the little moonlight that was not taken from the darkness. She
look up and from fear she couldn't move. One step was between her and the
sanctuary. One step, and she was going to be saved. One step... and now she was
going to be alive.


Darkness fall and takethe life away. A big house, with
a sanitary instead of garden, with tombstones instead of rosebushes, with crying
angels instead of blooming trees. It seemed like life was gone forever.
But
wait! What is this? A group of innocent young souls was standing in front a big
gate. Souls with fear deep within, from the scene that was now in front there
pure eyes. Everyone were scared. Some of them were showing it, other were hiding
it. Hiding it deep inside, acting calm, like this was normal. Just like you.


"And this is a vacation?!" you say, looking at the big house.
"This
is just like Dracula's castle!" a boy from behind scream from excitement.
He push you so that he can go in front
and see it clearly. He started taking pictures. This was Freaky Freddy, a boy
with black hair and brown eyes, hiding behind a glasses. His hobby was reading,
and as it seemed, Dracula was his favorite book.
"Shut up, Freaky!" a strong
tall boy, with blond hair and green eyes, said.
"Mr. Stephens, don't talk to
your classmate that way." the teacher said. She was fat (really fat) and short.
You could easily say she is a boll if you see her in the darkness.
"Freddy?
Does that mean there are vampires?" a girl with curly, golden hair asked.
"Yes.
Fully possible, Ms. Heller. Fully possible." Freddy answer, like an archeologist
to his young student. The girls scream.
"Mr. Franklin, there are no such
things as vampires. Let's go!"
You all had to pass the dark sanitary to
get to the big front door. The atmosphere was heavy. It was giving the feeling
like a bone hand will grab you and pull you in the grave. Finally the front door
was in front of you. The teacher knocked and the door open.


Now like in the scary movies, the house must be dark, with
only 3 candles to light the big room. Spider webs and dust everywhere. Broken
windows, old carpets, broken floors and stairs. And the most scary thing of
all... the silence.


But this is not a scary movie!


Yes, the house was old, but it was so bright. It was a hotel.
Just in front of the door was a big staircase, with red carpet. On the one side,
you see a check-in desk, and behind it, a short old man, with white hair, was
showing his pointy nose over the check-in book. He had stepped on a chair so
that you can see him over the tall (for him) desk.
On the other side, there
was a red furniture, and a short coffee table, with magazines on 23 languages on
it. A girl, about 17, with long hair, dark as the night, with cold, like ice,
eyes and very fashion clothes, was reading one of the magazines. Next to her,
like an angel pure, a girl with white clothes and golden hair was hiding behind
a Spanish magazine, like if a mortal look at her, he will crash her beauty.


But then, you felt a presents in the dark corner. You turn to
see nothing except the shadows hiding there from the candles. You make a step
forward and saw two beautiful blue eyes staring at you. You wanted to see the
owners face but there coldness full your heard with fear and you couldn't move.
You were just looking at them, lost in time, thinking of nothing. One step and
you was going to see the eyes. Just one... more... step.


Continue in the result...
--{}--{}--{}--

"If he human?" Why we say that? Do we
really think that
he is a monster? Because he is different? We are all
humans... we are all mortals... we are all the same, most of the ways...



--{}--{}--{}--


"Ms. _____!" you herd the angry voice of your teacher. "For
the last time, you will be in room 205."
You snap out of it and look at
her.
"Yes, sure." you say and turn again to see the eyes but they were gone.
You made a step, and another one but there was noone... anymore.
"I said, Ms.
_____, wail you were daydreaming, that you will be alone in a room. If you are
scared to stay alone at night, you may sleep with me and Ms. Alistair."
"No
thanks, I'll fine." you say and took your key.


You enter your room. It was... normal. Nothing special. Light
room, with blue covers, with curtains, one bed, a bedside table, a bathroom
and... a locked window? The window where blocked (locked) with wooden boards and
on it was drawn a window that shows a sun garden.
{Sun garden is Eden - the garden where Adam and
Eva lived before they made the sin
]


After you unpacked you when to take a look around. You wanted
to see the place, but deep inside you wanted to meat the blue-eyed person. You
were walking around the hall. It was really big. At the one end you saw a
staircase. It was dark. It seemed that noone was allowed to go up there. You saw
the blue eyes in the darkness. Maybe she will help you to find him, since
she seemed to be the only one that had ever saw his face. You made a step
but someone pulled you back. You turn to see... cold blue eyes!


"I
wouldn't go there, if I were you." the owner said.
Left without breath
you could say nothing. You were just looking in his blue eyes. You didn't
even matter his long blond hair and his strong hand.
"Hey, kid." he say
again with his cold, calm voice.
You then snap out of it.
"What?" you say, like you had just waken
up from a beautiful dream.
"Don't go up there." he say and let you go.
"Sure.
I'm sorry. I didn't knew."
He say nothing and just leave.
"Wait!" you
scream after him. He stop but don't turn. "Can I know your name?"
"No."
he said coldly.
"Please. I want to know how to call you?"
"I don't
think you'll use my name. I don't think well meat again."
"Please. Just
a name... Even if it's not you're real one."


"What was that?" you thought. "That's not me! I'm
cold, and will never say such thing. Why I feel so week in front of him?"


He turn at this words.
"If we talk again, I'll tell you
a
name." he say and left.


You were looking how he was leaving, and you were thinking...
nothing. You're mind was blank.


"Is he human?"


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