Full Moon A One Piece Story (Zolo)

First off I must tell you this story will not follow the manga or the anime. It's completly my own imagination, though I do not own one piece or any other characters apart from my own which for now is Hitomi Ookami... ok
Here's the description:
Name: Hitomi Ookami (the only thing you need to know about her name is that ookami is a name she put in herself and it means wolf)
Age: 17
Looks: Not too tall, not to short, about 5,5. You have long light brown hair and the deepest brown eyes. On top of your head sit wolf ears as you ate the inu-inu friut making you a wolf girl. You also have a tail. Your ears and tail are the same colour as your hair but your tail has a white tip. You are skinny but not anorexic and you are well *Ahem* developed. Basically you look quite innocent but when you glare you could make hell freeze over in fear.
Past: You didn't know your parents very well, they died when you were 4. All you know was that they were pirates. You were washed up on a small island on the grand line. You had to live on your own for two months before anyone found you. Well you found them. You had eaten the devil friut a week into your arrival onto the island and were using your new found powers to find food or a town. When the woman who you found saw your tail and ears she freaked out, but saw how innocent you looked and took you in. The town hated her for bringing a monster into their town and you were hated by almost everyone. They killed dear old Grandma by the time you were 12. Since then you have lived in a house on the outskirts of the village and worked at a bar belonging to a friend. He uses you as a tourist attraction and keeps you in a cage claiming it's for his own good but you know he hates you too.
Story start:
"Hey Mr Nakasawa, do I have to stay in this cage. It's too small now and I don't like it." You cried from behind your bars.
"I know that it's cramped Hitomi but you and I both know if you come out then you'll be attacked." He explained. He always used this excuse and you hated it. Unfortunatly you needed the money to buy a boat to escape this hell.
"Well can you please get me a bigger cage?" You asked, the cage you were kept in was small to say the least. You had to sit on your knees most of the time and now if you transformed into a full wolf your fur would poke through the bars and kids would pull it making you cry.
"Yes, I'll try." He said. it kinda raised your hopes but you knew it wouldn't last. Buisness was slow today, you prefered it like this, it meant you didn't have to dance on stage, even at that you were chained up so you couldn't escape the drunks. But just then the doors opened and in walked a strange bunch of people, there was, 5 humans and 1 reindeer? That was unusual. You transformed into a full wolf, so as not to be teased. They sat at a table quite near you, you looked at them and twisted your head in confusion. There was one with green hair, one with blonde hair that was smoking, a girl with orange hair, a guy with a huge nose and a guy with shaggy black hair wearing a straw hat. And the reindeer sat like a human at the table. They really did look unusual, most of them wearing summer clothes on an autum island as well. You shook your head but banged it against the side of your cage.
"Hey mister! Isn't that cage a bit small for your dog?" The guy in the straw hat asked. Mr Nakasawa nodded
"Yea, I'm trying to get her a new one soon, just she doesn't get on well with towns people. I could let her out for a while as long as your nice to her." He said , seeing the pleading look in your big brown eyes.
"Yea! I wanna play with the dog!" The one in the straw hat said, the reindeer looked at you, you looked down to avoid eye contact as Mr Nakasawa came over to let you out.
You felt so happy to be out of the cage, the boy in the straw hat came over and petted you
"What's her name?" He asked
"Hitomi" Mr Nakasawa replied
"Hi Hitomi, I'm Luffy. Wanna go play?" He asked, you licked his face but walked away to beside his table.
{Don't tell anyone that I'm really human, please?} You asked the reindeer in wolf lingo. He nodded.
"Guys I'm gonna speak to Hitomi alone for a bit." The little reindeer said standing up, you walked to the private garden out the back of the bar.
"My name is Tony Tony Chopper. Why don't you want them to know your human?" The reindeer whom you now knew as Chopper asked.
{Because they'll think I'm a monster. You guys are the first ones who've actually not pulled my fur, thrown things at me or insultd me in over a year. Even Mr Nakasawa isn't that nice to me. Everyone is scared of me} You told him. He looked at you sadly.
"That's exactly what happened to me, when I ate the Hito-Hito fruit. I was hated by all. But Luffy and the crew never judged me. They're really nice." He told you. You sighed
{Thanks.} You said and sniffed the air and listened inside the bar. Nobody else had come in. You changed back to your human form and walked inside.
"What are you doing?!" Mr Nakasawa asked you angily, you flinched afraid of what was to happen when these pirates left, if you even got that long
"Hey! Where'd the dog go?"Luffy askedlooking around for a dog well wolf. You raised your hand and pointed at your ears, and looked down sadly.
"WOW! That's sooooo cool." The Luffy said and ran over to you and started touching your ears
"So were you that wolf that was in the cage?" The orange haired girl asked, you nodded. The blonde haired guy and green haired guy looked angry, you hid your tail between your legs and ran back to your cage
"You know, no lady should EVER be treated like that." The blonde haired man said as he took a draw of his cigarette, the green haired man just flicked out his sword, you started to cry silently with your eyes closed tight. You felt someone petting your ears again, you looked up and saw the orange haired girl looking at you softly
"It's going to be ok." She told you. You then saw the green haired guy and the blonde guy closing in on a very scared looking Mr Nakasawa. Then Luffy stepped through the middle of them and punched Mr Nakasawa. You came out your cage and bowed to them
"Thank you..." You said quietly. Luffy grinned.
"You're cool Hitomi, wanna join my crew?" He asked, you were stunned, you smiled and nodded. And with that you all began to leave the bar. though it turned out Mr Nakasawa wasn't unconcious, he got up and ran at your back with a dagger in hand, You turned quickly changing into a wolf again. You pounced on him and started growling and snarling, you snapped at his face,
"You can't hurt me anymore!" You said, your voice was powerful and dangerous, he was scared but tried to hide it, he brought his arm up to hide his face, you bite his arm and dragged him outside. Once there you mauled his face a bit and left him for dead.You came back inside as a human but you had blood all over your face, you avoided eye contact with them all, it was one of those akward silences.
"I'm sorry." You told them attepmting to remove the blood from your face.
"Don't be, you just helped us." Chopper said and Luffy smiled... you really were shocked now. You felt accepted for once. You smiled at them. and with that you all left the bar and as you lead the people to your house you saw villagers staring at you and you heard there whispers. One little girl even went up to the crew
"Don't go with her. Mummy says if you go near her she'll eat you." She told The orange haired girl who had told you her name was Nami. Green hair was Zolo, Blonde hair was Sanji and Curly black hair was Usopp.
"Don't worry, she won't hurt us... she won't hurt anyone unless you are mean to her." Nami said warmly and you continued walking and finally you reached your house. It was small but ok for you. The garden was decorated with flowers and a white fence. From the outside it looked like a pretty little cottage. Inside there wasn't much, a standard kitchen, one bedroom, one bathroom and a sitting area. Out the back of the cottage you could see the sea over the cliffs. It was a beautiful place to go at sunset.