As Time Runs Out(NCIS McGee Love Story)20

Created by LipGlozz08 on Sunday, October 25, 2009

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Tim's P.O.V~
Typing furiously into my laptop,I desperately searched for the location where Kristen's phone was.Over and over,my computer beeped,signaling that there was no such number."We'll find her,McGee.Just give me a minute to crack the code."Abby assured me.I frowned."You heard what he said,Abby.Every 15 minutes that passes,he's going to hurt her.And now we can't find him.It's just perfect,isn't it!"I yelled.Abby's eyes narrowed."Excuse me for trying to help.I should just leave you on your own,but I know your upset so I wont."

Several minutes later Gibbs moved quickly to my side,Tony,Ziva,Ducky and Palmer close behind him."You get a location yet?"he asked.I shook my head,continuing to type.Abby looked at me and then to Gibbs."Her kidnapper put something in her phone.Whenever we try to trace it,it says her number doesn't exist,which we know is a lie because McGee was just talking to her."Gibbs frowned."Obviously.Anything else?"Abby smiled."Yes.I talked to her coach,the world famous AdrienLa Boussière.La Boussière,that's such a cool last name.I wish I was French,their names sound so cool,I-"Gibbs cut Abby off."Abby!Missing girl here.Continue."Gibbs growled.Abby smiled."Turns out at the Olympics,this guy...."Abby typed into the computer and a man in his 30's popped up."Bet thousands of dollars on Kristen's horse,the Flying Dutchman,to win."Gibbs looked at Abby."She wasn't riding the Flying Dutchman."Abby smiled."Exactly.At the last minute,Kristen switched horses.He lost hundreds of thousands of dollars because of her.I would say he's a little more than mad."Gibbs kissed Abby's cheek."Good work,Abs."I felt his eyes looking at the back of my head."She can take care of herself for a while,Tim."The fact that he used my name shocked me.What shocked me even more was that the computer beeped in approval,coordinates appearing on the screen."I found it."I said incredolously.

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