Secrets in Disguise~kakuzu love story~ part 7
this one may be intense but how should i know, i think i suck at making fighting scenes (^_^') anyways this one is longer than my others cause i wanna add as much as i can to this one. please rate/comment/message...or something....(Naito:im kicking ass!!!) (me:you sure are)(kisame: i wonder if you can stop calling me kisa kisa-san) (naito and me: NO *high fives each other*)Hidan pulled on the cord. I heard his scythe coming closer to me. I ducked and threw a couple of shurikens at him. They hit him directly. I expected him to yell in pain, but all I got was a laugh from him.
“AHAHAHAHAA!!! I’M IMMORTAL BITCH!!!”
I cursed under my breath as he laughed.
‘fucking jashinst…’
I balled my fist again, making the same wind around my hand. I went into a fighting stance, getting ready for wat this guy was gonna do. He jumped at me, throwing his scythe at me again. I brought my hands in front of me, catching it but it cut through my wind.
‘wat the hell!?’
I jumped out of the way, the scythe nicked my cloak.
‘I can’t let him get my blood.’
Wen I reached the ground, I did a justu and created a wind staff. Hidan quickly pulled his scythe back, carving into the ground. he grabbed his scythe and jumped my way, getting ready to slash at me. I stabbed the wind staff into the ground and pulled on it, waiting for him to get close enough.
About a foot away from me, Hidan pulled his arm back, getting ready to cut. I knelt onto the ground and let go of the staff. The staff hit Hidan square in the face (ouch!). he pulled back about five feet, holding his face.
“YOU MOTHERFUCKING BITCH!!! I’M GONNA KILL YOU FOR THAT!!”
I knew he was serious, and immediately tried to take advantage of the spare time. An idea popped into my head. I made a bat out of wind and jumped into the trees. Hidan let go of his face and saw that I wasn’t there anymore.
“YOU BITCH, DON’T RUN AWAY FROM ME!!! FUCKING FIGHT!!”
He looked around himself.
“I KNOW YOU’RE AROUND!! FUCKING SHOW YOURSELF!!”
I smirked at him from the branches that hid me.
‘as you wish.’
I jumped out from behind him. But before he could even turn around, I hit the back of his head with the bat. He yelled in pain and fell to the ground, face first. I hit his head once more to make sure he was knocked out. I leaned against the bat and sighed. i stared at Hidan and grew a temptation to hit him again. I brought the bat up again but I saw a glow through my peripheral. I looked up and saw a red glow in the trees. I heard tobi yelling from panic and water splashing through the trees. The bat vanished from my hand and then I ran toward the red light.
Wen I reached tobi, he was running around in circles, being chased by kisame. Kisame did a water jutsu. It was headed for a direct hit in tobi. I jumped in the way of the water and focused. The water hit but was topped by a wind shield around me. Tobi run to me. I opened the shield and let him in the wind barrier.
“Tobi stay close…we’re gonna make a score.”
Tobi nodded and tighten his grip on the wind. Kisame strikes the barrier, luckily not breaking it. he recoiled and I took this opportunity. I released the barrier and ran to kisame. I slid under him and grabbed his foot. I pulled it causing to him to fall forward. I jumped to my feet and stuck my tongue out at him.
“see ya later kisa kisa-san,” I looked at tobi ,“lets go.”
Tobi ran to me and I made the barrier once he was close enough to me. We ran to the forest edge. As soon as we got out, a loud explosion greeted us. Dirt surrounded us but didn’t bother us. The wind barrier just blew the dirt away. We stopped momentarily and looked looked to where the explosion came from. It was from deidara who was in an intense fight with sasori. He threw some of his clay birds at sasori, causing an large explosion. I thought it was over until i saw a puppet launch at Deidara. He guarded but was knocked back a few feet. Sasori came out of the smoke and ran to deidara.
I was so into the battle I forgot the reason why they were fighting until I heard something hit my barrier. I behind me and I saw kisame closing in fast on us. He was making a few hand seals went tobi started to panic.
“Tobi calm down. just keep up with me.”
I ran with tobi right behind me. Then all of a sudden we were surrounded by water. I stopped then tobi bumped into me. I tripped forward a bit, making me lose concentration for the barrier.
“SHIT!!!”
I stood up and looked around, trying to find a way out. The only way out was too high for only one to jump over. I looked to tobi who was looking around nervously. I heard something coming close. I focused some wind around my hands.
“tobi, on three, jump on my hands and launch you out of here. As soon as you’re out, forget about me and go start to the goal pillar. Got it?”
Tobi nodded and took a few steps back.
“1.”
The sound was getting closer and closer. tobi started to shake. I laced my fingers together.
“2.”
I started to shake too. My mind wondered if this will even work. It better or were toast. I bent my knees.
“3!”
That’s when kisame jumped into the water wall. Tobi rushed to me. Lowered my hands and tobi jumped onto it. I grunted while I pushed him up. the wind on my hands pushed him up and above the water wall. I heard tobi yelling as he fell back down on the other side. I heard a thud and the clang of the flag. Tobi groaned. Kisame grabbed his bandaged sword thing and went to hit me. I made a wind guard around my arms and crossed them over my face, stopping the attack for a moment. I looked behind me to where the thud came from. I had to yell over the roar of the water.
“TOBI ARE YOU OKAY!?”
“YES NAITO-CHAN!! TOBI IS OKAY!!”
“GOOD! NOW GO TO THE GOAL!! I’LL BE FINE!!”
I heard tobi grabbed the flag and run off. I looked back at kisame who was giving me a creepy smile. He was to close for comfort so I pushed my arms forward, trying to make him rip again. Unfortunately he caught himself and went for a punch. I ducked and tried to get him in a headlock. But he was so tall I couldn’t reach.
‘DAMN IT!!’
Kisame took the moment to counter. he got a hold of my arm and pulled me in front of him. he brought my arm behind my back and pushed me down to one knee. I gritted my teeth. I quickly brought my foot back and hooked around his. I pulled forward causing him to fall forward. I slipped away from his grip and out before he could fall on me. He jumped up and went for a punch. I caught it and went for his stomach, but was stopped due to a loud explosion. The water wall fell, and I saw how the area of the goal pillar was clouded up with smoke. Zetsu walked into the smoke. Moments later he yelled out.
“SCORE!”
I let go of kisame and ran toward the pillar. I used a wind justu and blew the wind away. I was shocked to wat was in front of me. Tobi was on the ground knocked out and flag still in his hand. The pillar was glowing blue with the blue flag touching it. I traced the flag to who was holding it, which was kakuzu. he stood there staring at tobi then at me. I groaned and fell down on my butt, really tired.
“damn it we were so close.”
“not close enough.”
I glared at kakuzu who just stared back at me. I stuck my tongue out at him and scooted over to tobi. I shook him gently. He shot up, almost hitting me on the head again. He looked around wildly then looked at me.
“Naito-chan… tobi is sorry he didn’t get the score. Is Naito-chan mad? Is Tobi still a good boy?”
I smiled gently at him and petted his shoulder.
“It’s okay tobi, Im not mad. and I don’t care if you got the score or not. Im just happy your okay and you managed to get here at least…and tobi is still a good boy.”
Tobi jumped up and down happily and hugged me. I laughed a bit. I looked at zetsu.
“so that’s 1 to 0, right?”
“OBVIOUSLY!!”
“I just wanted to make sure. So wats score we have to get to win?”
“we decided to make it a 2 out of 3 type of game, so you guys can get some breaks thrown in.”
I nodded and tobi let go. I fell back down and watched the cloud roll by. Deidara came by and hovered over me.
“you look really tired, un.”
“I did wake up early and had to run around getting the game set up. AND that bastardy, jashinist Hidan gave me a head ache.”
“I understand, un.”
He squatted down and poked my forhead.
“you didn’t have to go all out you know, un.”
“but I didn’t. im only tired cause like I just said I woke up early.”
I tried to bite his finger, but he pulled it back just in time. I sat up and looked around. Everyone was in sight except for hidan. Sasori walked up to me.
“wat happened to hidan.”
“he’s probably still knocked out in the red side forest.”
I pointed to the red side into the forest. Sasori nodded and walked toward the direction. I looked around for a bit, then I had a feeling someone was staring at me. I looked up and saw how kakuzu. his green eyes started to pull me in again. I stared straight into his eyes, trying to see if I can find out more about him through these windows. Then I heard him say something.
“wat the hell are you staring at.”
I felt a jolt go through my body. i felt frozen then realized that I haven’t blinked at all. So I just sat there a little longer, still staring at him without saying anything. Then I pretended something got in my eye.
“OW OW OW!! Damn it….i lost the staring contest.”
He made an annoyed faced.
“you’re so childish.”
“so is your face.”
He glared at me while I just smiled. I heard rustling and a loud naggy voice. I stood up and looked behind me. Hidan had his arm crossed and was cursing a storm. Sasori just kept on walking. Hidan was about 4 feet away wen we made eye contact. He pointed at me very pissed.
“YOU STUPID, MOTHER FUCKING WHORE!!! I SWEAR TO JASHIN, IM GONNA SACRAFICE YOU TO HIM!!”
I winked at him playfully.
“let’s see you try.”
I stuck my tongue out at him while he went into a cursing fit. Zetsu walked up to us.
“breaks over, get to your spots.”
I nodded and walked to the blue side. I made eye contact with kakuzu who just looked straight at me. I brushed my shoulder against him playfully. I heard him whisper to himself.
“bitch…”
I turned around and smiled as he walked back to his side. Deidara, itachi, and tobi were getting closer and I called them in. I leaned in toward them and whispered.
“okay, itachi, you get the flag this time, accompanied by deidara. tobi and I will guard the flag. Trust me.”
They nodded at looked at the red team that just stood there in their spots. zetsu looked at both teams, then at the pillar.
“GO!”
tobi ran into the forest, while I guarded the forest edge. Deidara and Itachi ran to the red side. Kakuzu and sasori ran to the blue side. Deidara jumped up and kicked sasori, but caught it. Itachi managed to get to the red side forest without being noticed. Kakuzu was getting closer to me. I made some hand signs and a large gust of wind blew from behind me. Kakuzu covered his eyes and slowed down. but he was still getting closer to me.
‘can nothing stop this guy?’
I released the jutsu and took out an explosion tag. I quickly tied it to a kunai and threw it at him. he saw it and brought his hand out in front of himself. the tag exploded and I smiled. i was about to leave but I felt something rumble under me. I looked down and a hand launched out from under me. I took a few steps back, then I think kakuzu kicked the back of my knee, causing me to trip forward. I hit the ground and he grabbed my wrist and hooked it around my back. The hand that came out of the ground went to kakuzu. His tentacles grabbed a hold of the end of the hand and sewed itself into his arm that was missing it. My eyes were wide with amazement.
‘how did he survive that explosion…’
My thoughts were interrupted went he pulled my arm up a little. I groaned in pain.
“DAMN IT, GET OFF OF ME!!!”
“no can do. You’re a threat to my team.”
I struggled but the pain shot threw my body. his hold was strong. I tried to kick him but it turned out he was sitting on me.
“GET YOU FAT ASS OFF OF ME!!”
He just pulled my arm up more. I gritted my teeth. At this rate, he might even dislocate my arm from my shoulder. I need help now. I heard something to in front of me, so I looked at saw tobi running toward us. Kakuzu was looking at me still, it’s a good thing tobi didn’t get noticed yet. i looked back at kakuzu from the corner of my left eye. He stared back at me, then he looked up, only to be met by a fist in the head. Kakuzu, let go and was knocked back about three feet. I sat up and looked at tobi in amazement.
“where have you been hiding that?”
Tobi hugged me.
“IS NAITO-CHAN OKAY!?”
“yes im fine. Thank you for helping me. Now go back to the flag and guard it. I’ll take it from here.”
Tobi stood up and helped me up as well. I waved at him and he ran back into forest. I looked back at kakuzu. but bumped into something. I looked up and saw kakuzu standing right there! I tried to jump back but his tentacle things wrapped around me, binding me. It tightened its grip around me. I focused and wind blew point blank into his face. Some dirt was in the wind and it got into his eyes. I smiled as he let go of me. I kicked him away around four feet away from me. I ran up to him, creating the wind around my hands. I jumped into the air and fell straight toward him. he saw me in time and jumped to his feet. He prepared a punch but I slowed down my fall. I landed behind him and went for a punch to his head. Kakuzu caught it and punched my stomach. I choked at the sudden pain. I hooked my leg to his and tripped him. he fell back with me on top. I went for a punch again, then he tried to block it. I stopped that punch and my other hand punched his stomach with as much power as I can. He choked as well. I smiled, getting ready to kick him in his sensitive area. He saw it coming and countered, put me into a headlock. I struggled to get out but he just held on tighter. I looked up and saw deidara on a giant clay bird flying over the field.
He had the flag and kisame was trying to get it back by send water jutsus his way. The bird dodged with grace. Sasori then came into the picture by throwing a ball at him. the ball burst into a purple smoke, poison. I grew worried about deidara.
‘he better get out of that cloud, or he’s dead.’
The bird flew out with deidara standing on it, unharmed. Itachi came out of the forest being chased by Hidan. Itachi turned, and while still running, did a fire justu. A giant fire ball went Hidans way. He just went around it, but was met with another fireball. Hidan was distracted so Itachi took the opportunity to help deidara. Itachi ran up to Kisame and kicked him ten feet into the blue side. Deidara flew down to itachi and handed him the flag. Itachi ran the rest of the way to the pillar and tapped the flag against it. the pillar turned red.
“im saying it this time, SCORE!!!”
Kakuzu cursed under his breath and let me go. I turned my neck in circles as well as my arms. I looked at him.
“you didn’t have to be so rough.”
“either that or end up killing you.”
I shook my head and went into the forest to get tobi. I reached the location of the flag in about 2 minutes. Wen I got there, tobi was leaning against the flag sleeping. I couldn’t help but laugh. I walked up to tobi and poked around the area where his ear is supposed to be. He woke up immediately and jumped up to his feet. He looked around and then down at me. He started to hop.
“Wat happened Naito-chan?”
“we got a score due to Itachi and deidara. I want us to talk about our next plan for the final round. Im sure we’ll win this one.”
Tobi nodded and grabbed my hand. He technically dragged me out of the forest and up to the pillar. The other members were already there, resting. Tobi let go of my hand wen we were about 10 yards from the pillar. I whistled to deidara and itachi to come over. They walked over and looked at me.
“so wats up, un.”
“I have another plan.”
“wat is it, un?”
I brought all of them closer to me and whispered it to them. Four minutes later, I finished my plan debrief and looked at them all.
“do you understand wat to do?”
Deidara and tobi nodded. I looked over to itachi.
“basically we just leave you alone with hidan for at least five minutes…”
“exactly, probably sooner if he falls for the same thing twice.”
We looked up at the red team who were talking about something as well. Zetsu sat on top of the pillar.
“Final round, next score decides the winner. Ready?”
The red team got into fighting stances, and so did blue team. I looked over to Hidan, who was eyeing me as if I were his prey.
“GO!!”
(chapter 8 is the final part of the capture the flag game. It may turn out long as well but it’s too soon to be sure. Ill have an update in at about (hopefully) next week. Byz X3 (naito:OMG HIDANS GONNA EAT ME!!!) no he isn’t, calm down)
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