Crimson Tears:A Vampire Story Part 4 (For Girls)

Hey hey hey! I must say sorry all for not having this out when I said I would so I'm going to try to post another one today but it's kind of hectic around here and so I don't have alot of time to post a new one and answer messages. Not to mention someone deleted what I already had typed up so I had to do this one from the top of my head. So please just bare with me. Also thank you all for rating and all of the wonderful messages I've been getting :D

Created by SilverRavenPheonix on Friday, March 17, 2006

You walked to Kries and sat on the barstool. "How much longer till we can get out of here?" you
whined. "exactly 1 minutes and 15 seconds" you sighed and looked around again for Asher. "Where
could he be? This is so unlike him!" you wondered to no one. "I'm sure he's fine and just busy
Stormz now come on lets go clock out an you can come to my house." she suggested trying her best
to reassure you. You just simply sighed and agreed.

I wonder where Asher is and whats keeping him.....
You grinned to yourself. Kries just mearly hopped up, smacked you on
the head and went to the tv and put in a movie. "Looks like we're staying then" you said to Asher
who looked a bit nervous. You frowned and kissed him on the cheek and immediatly the look went
away and was replaced with a smile. So there the four of you sat through all of the movies..

Get on with it!
"HEY!!" some chic yelled from farther down the bar. "Demetris let go I have work to do." you
finally managed to jerk your hand away from him and dashed down to the woman. "I'll have an
orgasm." You just simply nodded and took longer to mix it than necissary. When you finally
finished at the simple task you did your best to avoid Demetris so he couldn't get a hold on you
again. When time came for your break you ran around the bar and straight into the employees
lounge to find Kries's sitting there drinking a coke. She looked at you with wide eyes when you
had come running into the room. "whoa who lit a fire under your ass?" you groaned and sat down,
"some ass vampire named Demetris is out there hasseling me and Asher still isn't here." you just
simply replied. "oh.." she looked at you a face that said she felt sorry for you. "OH! theres a
message for you on the board." she said pointing to the cork board on the wall. You got up and
looked at it finding a message saying Asher had called and said he would be a bit late in picking
you up. "great just fucking peachy." you groaned and sat back down in your chair. "what?" Kries
looked at you as if trying to read what it was you were thinking. "Asher's going to be late" you
pouted. "Well why not call him and see whats going on?" she suggested trying to be helpful. "I
don't know where he is so I can't, and besides if he's busy I don't want to be a pain." you
sighed and looked to Kries pleading for some kind of help. "Well if you want I can stick around
bar?" "Yeah, I don't know what good it'll do though. but thanks." you sighed again as you looked
at the clock. "Joygasm time to go out and dance with the devil." Kries just giggled under her
breath. She stood up and practically dragged you out of the room. "come on honey as you said it's
time to dance with the devil himself."
Saved by the bitchy customer.. For once I am happy to see her :D
"You know a beautiful woman shouldn't frown like that" a voice said a little ways down the bar to
you. You looked up and saw the man you now knew as Demetris. "Well seeing as it's my face I'll
frown if I want. What do you want?" you asked as you walked up to him remembering the warning
you had recieved from Asher about him being trouble. "Mmmm I think I'll take a beautiful
bartender, maybe you infact." he grinned as you frowned more. "Sorry thats not on the menu and
I'm taken." You smiled to yourself when he frowned. "If your speaking of that halfwit Asher,which
I assume you are. He's not worth your time. Just a weakling really. Now me on the other hand I am
one of the strongest you can find in this city." you just rolled your eyes and filled another
drink order. You wondered when Asher would be here to keep you company until your shift ended.
You felt a hand on your wrist and looked up, the hand belonged to Demetris and you tried to jerk
away to no avail. "Demetris let go of me now" you growled, you were seriously not in the mood to
play games with him. "Oh but why? I mean to have you, willingly or not." he had a look in his
eyes that said he wasn't playing. You just simply swallowed and prayed that Asher would be here
soon.

Ewwww let go!
And thats it for now.. Sorry it was so short and spacey but like I said above it was just off thr top of my head so yeah.. I should have another one up soon so yeah. remmy to rate high and message :D
I want more!!!!!! *runs to rate high and message*
~Blood Moon~ "Hey! I'll take a Bloody Mary!" laughed at the bar. You just mearly groaned and
mixed his drink. You hated this place, if you didn't need the money than you would've just quit.
You looked around the place, it was all done in glowing neon blue light, the rest was all black.
There was a dance floor in the middle of the place, the bar was on the side and tables and chairs
filled the rest of the space. You shook your head. Not to mention the jerkoff who ran the place
seemed to think he was a God. But for making $15 dollars an hour just for bartending you dealt
with it.
Wow my job sucks
"And my beautiful bartender returns!" Demetris said with a widening grin. You just glared at him
and looked around the bar, hoping against hope that Asher would already be there. No such luck.
But you did spot Spaz heading towards you. "SPAZZY!" you squeeled and ran out to pounce on him.
Spaz caught you easily and looked at you confused. "The last time you did that you were drunk and
thought that I was the lead singer from Vast. so what is it this time?" you leaned closely to his
ear and whispered to him "there is this guy at the bar and yeah just-" you were cut off by
Demetris "And here you had me thinking you were just Asher's." You quickly got out of Spaz's arms
and hid behind him. "I am just Asher's Demetris, so just leave me alone." Demetris just grinned
"well then, I'll leave you be... For now, but I will be back" He looked over you again and walked
away.

My Hero!!!!!!!
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Hope your enjoying the series :D Remmy to rate high and message ^_^

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