Yeah, Funny Story! I Just Lost My Virginity To My Brother. {Chapter 1}

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Created by Death0Flower on Monday, May 30, 2011

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I woke up on a cruise ship that was sailing over the Ocean towards Tampa, Florida.

My family was taking our spring break on this lovely cruise ship, but the cruise was now over and it was heading home.

I dragged myself out of bed; not at all surprised that my sister: Gwen, and my dad: Louis weren’t in the room, they were probably at breakfast already. Since I slept late they usually left without me, and would later return. Besides I am 16, I am old enough to be left alone in the cabin for a few hours.

I walked into the bathroom and brushed out my wavy black hair and straight bangs, and then applied make-up to my face and around my brown eyes.

As I walked out of the bathroom the door to the cabin creaked open.

I woman with flowing brown hair and blue eyes poked her head in.

“Excuse me? Can I help you?” I said rudely to the stranger; after all she just poked her head into my cabin and I don’t even know who she is.

“Oh,” she said looking flustered, “Is Louis Havens not here?”

I narrowed my eyes, “No, he’s not. How do you know him? What do you need?”

She just looked down, “Nothing, just tell him Sofia stopped by…” She muttered and then she walked away.

“Strange…” I muttered as I picked out my outfit for the day: A deep red low cut tank-top and short Daisy Dukes.

I slipped them on and walked out of the cabin. People were buzzing around the hallways. In the room next to mine I could hear muffled moans and a short scream. I threw up in my mouth a little bit when I thought about what was going on in that room. As you can obviously tell I am still a virgin. I am proud of myself for retaining my virginity this long, most people at my high school, Trenton High (It’s not a real school, that I know of anyway), aren’t any more.

I continued down the hall; still trying to get that awful image out of my head, and then I came across the dinning room doors.

My dad and sister were sitting at a table towards the right; I could my sister’s long blonde hair from here. Gwen had blonde hair like my mom, but brown eyes like me and my dad. Sometimes people didn’t believe us when we told them were sisters.

I walked over to the table; at the same time pulling my hair into what I assumed was a neat pony tail.

“Hey, Blaire!” Gwen said as she waved at me. Blaire was my name, and I liked it because I had never met anyone with that name before; the name was unique. And I am very unique, as you will soon find out.

“Hey!” I said as a sat down across from my family and grabbed a pancake off of the plate my dad had prepared for me, incase I had decided to show up for breakfast this morning.

“Oh, dad!” I said remembering the stranger that intruded in our cabin. “Some lady just opened up the door of our cabin this morning and asked to see you. She said her name was Sofia.”

My dad’s eyes widened, “Oh. Well. I’ll have to contact this Sofia person later. I have no idea who she is. I wonder if the ship has her phone number…” He said as he got up and hurriedly left.

“Well, well, well.” Gwen said. “Who is this Sofia lady, and why doesn’t dad want us to know about her?”

I smirked devilishly, “Well, That’s just what we will have to find out.”

My sister smirked back as she took out her cell phone.

She dialed a number and waited then she said, “Gwen Havens… Person Examination… Sofia… Currently on the Tropics Get Away Cruise Ship… Relationship?... Job?... Okay… Thank-you.” And then she hung up the phone.

She looked at me and I said, “Well, what did you find out?”

“Well, she is a single mom and has one son. Her last name is Ashwood. And she lives surprisingly close to us. She is in a relationship, but no ones is sure with who.”

“That’s interesting, but what does dad want to do with her?”

Gwen shrugged, “I don’t know. I mean it can’t be through work considering she is a chef at a elegant restaurant.”

“We will just have to pry the information out of dad eventually, I guess.”

She nodded.

That’s when I saw him.

He walked into the dinning room; one of the hottest guys I’d ever seen.

He was looking at the fruits deciding which one he wanted.

I dumped my food onto my dad’s abandoned plate and walked over to him.

I pretended to look at the fruit, but then I decided to talk to him.

“Hi,” I said, “I am Blaire, Blaire Havens.”

He smiled and held out his hand, which I shook.

“I’m Blake.”

I smiled at him, “So what have you been doing on this ship?”

He shrugged, “Moms been out every night meeting some guy and I’ve been in the room sleeping, swimming, or hanging out in the lounge.”

“Nice,” I said as we sat down with our food.

“So, how old are you?” He asked.

“Sixteen, you?”


I nodded an older guy.


My English teacher would kill me if he heard me using the word nice.

He hates that word; he says it’s too boring and simple.

For example why use nice when you could use, fantastic or awesome?

“Um, Blaire?”

I snapped out of my reverie, “Yeah?”

“Nothing, you just kinda zoned out for a minuet.”

“Oh, sorry. I was thinking about my English teacher: Mr.Crafa.”

He smiled and shook his head, “You daydream about your English teacher? That’s just a little bit creepy.”

I laughed, “No, not like that! I just used the word nice in my head and I was remembering how our teacher doesn’t like us to us the word nice because it’s not exciting and descriptive enough.”

He blinked, “Wow, you think about things like that during the day. You must be an extremely unique person.”

“I am!” I said as Gwen approached the table.

“Hey!” She said as she sat down, “Do you mind if I sit?”

Blake and I both shook our heads and she smiled, “So who is he?”

They both made their introductions, and drifted into a pointless conversation.

Suddenly my sister looked at me, “So, sis, we should be going. You know if we want to investigate further in this woman.”

I nodded, “Nice meeting you Blake!”

“Wait!” He said, “Give me your phone.”

I handed my Iphone to him and he added his number to my phone, and then he handed me his which I added my number to.

“So, who is this woman you are investigating?”

I smiled, “Some lady named Sofia.”

He got a puzzled look, “My mom’s name is Sofia.”

“REALLY! What’s your last name?” My sister asked.


Gwen and I gasped, “That’s her.”

“What are you investigating my mom for?”

“She poked her head in my cabin and asked for my dad. And when we told dad he got really nervous and left.”

“That’s odd. Can I come with?”

I shrugged, “Sure. Lets go.”

Then Gwen, Blake, and I exited the room.

“Lucky! You got the guy!” Gwen whispered as I laughed, she was fourteen and we usually competed over who each guy we met liked better. Their has so far been any clear winner of which one of us is more popular with the guys.

“What are you guys laughing about?” Blake asked.

I calmed my laughter down, “Nothing.”

He didn’t look convinced but let it drop.

Then I heard my dad’s voice around a corner that lead to a deserted corridor.

“That’s dad’s voice.”

Blake nodded, “And I can hear my mom’s.”

He was right. The same voice from this morning in the cabin could be heard from around the bend.

“-Tell them. We can’t keep pretending this doesn’t exist! If we are going to make this work then they need to know.” Sofia’s voice said.

Then my dad chimed in, “I know, I will but not now. Blaire and Gwen don’t need to have to deal with this right now.”

I turned to the others and whispered, “Lets butt in now.”

They nodded and we rounded the bend.

“Don’t need to know what dad?”

Dad and Sofia looked at us, their eyes wide, in was it possibly fear?

\If you guys think the title is fake because she doesn't have brother, you should read the information in the chapter before this. It explains that. She is going to have a step brother! But still read the info, it helps a lot! :D

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