Searching For Truth - a YYH\Hiei story~Chapter 24~

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Created by hieilvr33 on Friday, March 17, 2006

No delays this time! ~~QUIZ START~~ "What?! Why couldn't I have the dragon?" Hirotai screeched, seizing your shoulders and shaking you. "Tell me now, wench!" You pulled out of his grip and smirked at him. "I've already given it to someone... my mate." You said. You turned your back to Hirotai and lifted up your hair, revealing the bite mark on the back of your neck. Hirotai glared at your friends. "Which of you has my dragon?" Hiei smirked and turned his head to the side, revealing some of his bite mark as well. "You stupid girl!" Your sister said, standing up and glaring at you. "Now Father and the koorime shall perish!" "Not likely, Sasuki." You said calmly. "They're already safely outside the kingdom and at Koenma's palace. You wouldn't dare risk going to get them though... the Spirit Defense Force would stop you before you could get close." You savored the look of despair on her face. She turned and looked helplessly at Hirotai. "What now? The plan is ruined!" "Screw the plan! She's weak... I'll kill her anyway!" He said, launching himself at you. You rolled to the side and grabbed the knife from Kiada's outstretched hand. You hacked off your dress and kicked off your shoes, ripped off the veil and faced Hirotai. You saw Hiei start to unsheath his katana, but stopped him. "No Hiei... this is my battle. I don't want anyone to interfere." Hiei nodded and stepped back. Hirotai again turned to face you, but you were ready this time. He came at you with a spinning kick aimed for your head, but you crossed your arms and blocked it. You went after his neck, knowing it was his weak spot. Hirotai saw through your move, and managed to catch your arm and hurl you over his shoulder. Your head spun for a moment, but all your training in the Assassin's Group came back to you. You stood quickly, but couldn't find Hirotai anywhere. You finally felt his presence behind you, and knew he was planning on attacking. You dropped down into a backwards summersault, but pushed up into a handstand in the middle of your rool, catching Hirotai under the chin with your heels. You felt the bone in his jaw give a tiny bit
(hieilvr33: This move in gymnastics is called a back-extension roll. It's effectevness in fights is unknown to me.)
Hirotai stumbled back clutching his jaw, which you knew you had fractured. Hirotai glared at you and moved in for another attack. He began throwing kikcs and punches fast and hard, moving a lot faster than last time you watched him fight. "Dammit! At his old level I would have been able beat him, but he's gotten stronger and faster! I don't know if I can do it!" You thought as you dodged attack after attack. You finaly managed to take the offense, kicking and punching just as he had.
Go me!
Hiroati doged all your attacks effortlessy. You were becoming really irritated with him, wanting him to just drop dead. You finally got a punch in, hooking him right in the stomach. Hirotai doubled over, but looked up and smiled at you. "Looks like your as strong as ever, Kimi... but that's not going to help you!" You felt something wrap itself around your arms and legs, holding you in place. You looked down to find black shadows wrapped tightly around your arms and legs. You looked over and found Sasuki was controlling them, her eyes glowing a greyish color. You growled at her, but before you could say anything, Hirotai had landed a punch right in your stomach. He then stepped back and drew a sword out from a scabbard on his side. "Kimi, this is where I end it all... but I don't think I want to see you die yet. I think I want to see you suffer more!" You stared wide eyed at him as he walked towards you, smiling like a maniac. You watched as Hirotai stabbed your arm, the sword going in your arm and coming out the other side. You didn't feel any pain until he ripped it out, causing your skin and muscles to ignite in pain so intense you had to scream. "Kimi!" Hiei cried out...
Can you say ouch?
~GANG'S POV~ You wathed helplessly as Hirotai stabbed Kimi in the arm, causing her to scream out in pain. "Kimi!" Hiei cried out, and tried to run to her. He stopped as Hirotai quickly stepped behind her, raising the sword to her throat. "I don't think you'd want to do that Hiei. You see, right now I hold her life in my hands. I can torture her and let her live a little longer, or I can end it all right here and now. Which shall I do? You wouldn't want to see your mate die, would you?" Hiei stopped and stared Hirotai down. "Hiei... you can't interfere." Kimi said slowly. She smiled at him, her eyes blaing with determination. "This is still my battle." Kimi said. Hiei swallowed hard and stepped back, although his face clearly told everyone that he couldn't stand the position he was in. The gang watched mournfully as Hirotai continued torturing Kimi, cutting and slicing her skin, tears streming down her face...
YOU'RE ENDING IT HERE?????
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ALRIGHT, HERE'S THE DEAL PEOPLE: I have joined the school swim team and will have practices 5 days a week from 3:15- about 5 pm (My school gets out at 2:50). Between that, robotics, and homework I won't have as much time to write quizzes. I would like to thank all of you who have been patient, and would ask that you please continue to be so. Thanks a bunch my friends!

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