Edmund and me prince caspian 4

hey peeps! I hope you enjoy the story! This may get a bit mild in some bits so please dont report me!

Created by narnianfan12401 on Tuesday, January 31, 2012

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“ Owww!” I moaned. “ My back!” My back was aching so bad from the bed. I looked around to see the others still sleeping. I felt so wet and sticky so I decided to take a bath in the river. I made my way to the river and jumped in with my clothes on. The bubbles bubbled over my body and my tail appeared. I swam around freely in the lake. I poked my head out of the water to see Peter watching me. “ I saw that!” He cried. “ Hey!” I snapped. “ Shut it!” “ Your gonna have to tell him soon Amanda.” He replied. I paused for a moment. “ Okay then.” I said defeated. “ But you cant tell anyone especially Ed!” “ Fine!” He answered. “ Help me up will you?” I said. Peter grabbed onto me and tried to pull me up. “ God you weigh a ton!” Peter complained. “ Well its not my fault my tail makes me double my weight!” I hissed. “ Ooof!” I groaned as I landed on the grass. “ Thanks!” I thanked as I dried my tail with my powers. “ Don’t mention it!” Peter panted. The bubbles bubbled up again and my legs and dress returned. We made our way back to the How. I ran inside my tent to see Lucy and Susan still sleeping. “ Urgh!” I groaned. I crept over to Susan and yelled, “ Wake up! Telmarines are attacking!!!” Susan and Lucy shot out of bed. “ Jokes!” I snorted in laughter. “ Haha!” Susan said sarcastically. “ very funny!” I was still laughing my head off, when reepicheep came in. “ I think this little queen had too much sugar” He said. This time It was their turn to laugh. “ Come on guys!” Off to breakfast!” Reep urged. We made our way out and to the breakfast table. There were the guys sitting there. “ Where’s the food?” I asked. “ We don’t have food yet.” Edmund stated. I set off. “ where are you going? “ Lucy asked. “ Anyone wanna help me with breakfast?” I asked with a smile on my face. Everyone stood up excited and followed me.

In the ‘kitchen’………..

“ Eggs!” I ordered. Susan gave me eggs. I cracked them and put them in the bowl.

“ Flour!” Peter handed me flour and I put some in the bowl.

“ Sugar!” Lucy handed me sugar. I put a spoon of sugar in.

“ Spoon!” Edmund handed me a spoon and I mixed the pancake mix. “ You are literally a kitchen wiz!” Edmund exclaimed. “ I know right? “ I joked as I was mixing. I got the huge, flat stone on the fire to heat up for a few minutes. “ We’ve got fruit here right?” I asked the other. “ Right here!” Caspian said as he came in with a basket full of fruit. “ Great then!” Replied as I poured a couple of blobs of pancake mix onto the stone. “Okay” 3 minutes is all they need to be properly cooked. ‘ll get everyone else at the table while you guys keep an eye on the pancakes. “ Okay!” They replied as I walked off.

EDMUND’S POV:

Amanda walked off leaving the 5 of us there to look after the food. Caspian walked away as well when he knocked over a bag off flour on Susan. “ sorry! Sorry! I didn’t mean to!” I panicked as he came over to brush off the flour. “ Your sorry huh?” Susan joked. She picked up an egg and smashed it on Caspian’s head! Just at that moment Amanda walked in wih more berries and she threw the whole basket at me! “ Food fight!” Peter yelled. We all grabbed everything we could and started to fight. An egg came flying towards my head and I dodged. I turned to see who did it, it was Amanda. “ Your gonna pay for that!” I said as I ran to her with a handful of flour. We ran outside. “ Your gonna have to catch me!” Amanda called to me. We ran onto the woods. We fell over and I landed on top of her. We laughed like lunatics. I crushed my lips against hers. Pretty soon we were pretty much making out on the ground.

MY POV:

“ I say we take this to my tent.” Ed with a smirk. We ran into Edmund’s tent and he pushed me on the bed. He got on top of me and started to kiss me. His tongue slid into my mouth. He slid my dress off when suddenly, “ Guys! Where are you?” Susan called. We pulled away. “ Why is it always Susan!?” I cried. Edmund smirked and we made our way to breakfast. There was a whole heap on the table. “ You guys aren’t that bad!” I commented. “ Susan and Peter helped stack them on our plates. There was one last one. It was black and burnt. “ Who’s having that one?” Peter asked. We all looked at each other.

“ Not it!” I nabbed.

“ Not it!” Edmund called.

“ Not it!” Lucy cried.

“ Not it!” Caspian yelled.

“ Not it!” Peter dibbed.

“ Your it!” I said pointing at Susan. “ Oh what!” Susan groaned as she picked up the burnt pancake. Everyone laughed at this. We all gobbled down our breakfast fast so we could practice. “ Urgh!” I’m literally full!” I moaned. We stood up and grabbed our weapons. The boys and I were practicing our sword fighting while Susan and the Narnians practiced their archery. Lucy was spending time with DLF and Reep. I’m thinking of a number between 1 and 100” Lucy said to the two. “ Who cares about your stupid game!” Trumpkin snapped. “ 50?” Reep guessed.

“ Are you ready Manda?” Peter asked. Manda…..that was what my mum used to call me. “ Amanda?” Edmund said clicking his fingers in front of my face. I snapped out of my thoughts. “ Are you ready?” Caspian asked . “ ready when you are.” I replied getting into position. Caspian swung at me and I blocked. Next came Peter. He snuck up behind me. I turned around and disarmed him. I sensed someone behind me so I turned around and knocked them down. It was Edmund. “ Getting better.” He commented as I helped him up. “ I’ve always been good.” I smirked.

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