We landed down with the others and got off the griffin. “ Thanks girl!” I said to the griffin as I stroked its head. It purred in return and took off. Edmund and I saw Trumpkin struggle to stand up. He suddenly collapse and we ran over to him. “ Ed.” I said. “ Get one of the stretchers.” “ Edmund got a stretcher and we put him on it. We carried him the whole way. I saw Peter and Capsian were fighting. “ Hey!” Caspian shouted at Peter. “ I’m not the one who abandoned Narnia!” “ Amanda!” Peter said. “ You’re here! I think there’s something you might wanna tell us!” I felt guilt come over me. Lucy looked at me knowing what he was talking about. Everyone was staring at me.” What’s he talking about?” I Edmund whispered. “ Maybe its just Edmund you need to explain to.” Peter snapped. I looked at Edmund, then Peter, then lucy, then Caspian. Then I took off onto the woods with tears in my eyes.
EDMUND’S POV:
“ What the hell was that for!” I yelled at Peter. “ Your little girlfriends is keeping something huge from you and you still care?” Peter snapped. I growled at him and went after Amanda. I wonder what Amanda is keeping from me. I guessing right now she’s either singing or crying. I finally found her sitting on the edge of a cliff. I was right. She was obviously singing.
What have I done?
Wish I could run
Away from the ship going under( Sound familiar?) She sang in that angelic voice.
Just trying to help, out everyone else
Now I feel the weight of the world is, on my shoulders
What can you do when your good isn’t good enough
And all that your touch tumbles down
Cos my best intentions keep making a mess of things
I just wanna fix it somehow.
But how many times will it take
Oh how many times will it take for me
To get it right? To get it right.
She turned around and saw me watching her. “ Oh.” She mumbled. “ Hey.” “Are you ok?” I asked. “ Yeah I’m fine.” She replied. I went over and sat next to her. “ So what is it your keeping from me?” I asked her. She didn’t say anything. “ Are you cheating on me with Peter?” I suddenly asked. “ What!” Amanda cried. “ No!” “ Well then what is it?” I answered. Amanda let out a sigh. “ Okay. This whole time.” She started. “ I’ve actually had my powers.” I wasn’t surprised. “ I wanted to keep it from you because I thought you would stop talking to me.” I added. “ What?” I said. “ I love you and I will never let anything like that come between us!” “ Really?” She asked. “ Really.” I replied. I pulled her into a hug and she cried into my shirt. She was so warm. We eventually pulled away. “ Hey.” I said. “ yeah?” She replied. “ Do you love me?” I asked. “ Of course I do.” She answered with a smile. I pulled her closer and we kissed. After a few minutes, we pulled away. “ Owww!” Amanda moaned. She grabbed her head. “ Are you alright?” I asked worried. “ I just had a vision…..Caspian, the how….The witch!!!!” She cried. We got up and ran back to the How. We saw a bird woman , a dwarf and a werewolf with the others. Caspian’s had was held out with blood. “ Just one drop” The witch said sweetly. I hate her more than ever.
MY POV:
That retarded witch was trying to get to us again! She wanted Caspian’s blood so she could kill us all. This woman really gets on my nerves. “ Get away from him!” Peter cried. “ Peter.” The witch said with an evil smile. “ I missed you so much” What a dork! He was totally falling for what she was planning. I jumped infront of him with my sword raised. “ Ahh.” She said with a cold tone. “ Its our little queen of the sun and the sea!” “ This ends now witch!” I hissed. The witches face droped like stone. It turned into a cold snarl. “ Not if I kill you first little bitch!” She snapped. She reached for me when suddenly, the glass shattered. Standing there was Edmund. “ I know. You had t sorted.” He said to Peter before he stormed off. I glared at Peter and went after Edmund.
Finally some excitement after all that mushy stuff. I hope you liked my story! Please comment or rate!