Your Cold&Im Broken(Shippuden)30

so im back!!!!after two months absence from this story,my apologies:(,so where on a whole new journey where the storyline really gets pulled in motion.Sasuke will be a big part in the next few chapters and actually will become the main character along with you ofcourse and your paths will meet much more.Im going to start this chapter where Sasuke and Orochimaru have their showdown,so enjoy and sorry again for the long hold up.

Created by luvless12 on Monday, February 13, 2012

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Orochimaru sits up on his bed,sweat dripping down his face as he begins to cough,Kabuto places his hand on his back for support.Orochimaru lifts his head up taking in deep breaths,"Im...so close(coughs)..just alittle longer."Kabuto removes his hand standing up straight,he looks down at a card thats in his hand,"Yes,its been awhile since the chunin exams,forest of death...three years have gone by since then.."He pulls another card from under it,"That young Genin that appeared before you has sure matured alot since then.",Orochimaru held his hand to his mouth"I knew the moment that boy turned his immature Sharingan on me,,such magnificent eyes even then.."Orochimaru smiled snickering sadistically."Anyone to develop Sharingan that age most be special....i knew that he would prove to be even a greater treasure than Itachi.Oh yes i realized at once he was the perfect choice.Especially when i saw the pain he carried within him."

"I knew eventually he would come seek me out looking for more power..","Yes i remember,it was for that reason you gave him the cures mark and stayed to watch the Chunin Exams."Kabuto shuffled through more cards in his hand.Orochimaru thought back to seeing Sasuke fighting at the Chunin Exams and licked his lips,"What more can be said he was perfect,having the stregnth and will to fight off the curse mark,having the sharingan and also knowing the will and wisdom to use it."Kabuto went over to the table near the bed mixing different spices,"Its true,theres nothing like combat to exhilarate a ninjas development.You were wise for letting him continue on in the Chunin Exams.."Kabuto stirred up the the spices and walked overing handing Orochimaru the cup,he looked at it bleakly and took it."Your right there was no one in this world who could teach him any further or understand the darkness in his soul.."

He smirked and drank the medicine,Kabuto smiled,"And theres no one else who could make him more like you."Kabuto took the drink out of his hand placing it on the bedside table,"Its almost time for me to get your next dose of medicine ready,we wanna make sure your as strong as possible for the transferance ritual."Orochimaru thought back when he fought the third hokage and how his ritual was delayed because he took away his ability to make hand signs.Orochimarus lips curved at the thought that he wouldnt have to wait much longer~finally i will have the body i need...your body Sasuke~Orochimaru started coughing again grabbing hold of his covers while covering his mouth with his right hand.As he removed it Kabuto could see the blood flowing out of the side of his mouth and the sweat wasnt letting up either."Lord Orochimaru.."Kabuto looked concerned,Orochimaru turning to face him with piercing eyes reminded Kabuto of a deadly snake and faultered back accoupl of steps.

Orochimaru stared at him,"Whats the matter with you Kabuto?",Orchimaru began coughing up a storm again,"That cough doesnt sound good...are you alright?"Kabuto ran back over to his side,"Yes im fine...soon i will have the perfect body."he said trying to compose himself but then began coughing again much worst.Kabuto kneeled on the floor rubbing Orochimaru's back."You need to take the level ten medicine or theres nothing left i can do for you."he said with concern.Orochimaru slung his head breathing heavy,Kabuto got up walking to the bedside table and picking up the tray with medicine."Ill go get the other medicine."he said while walking towards the door,he opened it and then exited.While he was walking down the hall he could hear Orochimaru laughing hysterically and looked back at the door smirking and continued walking.

Orochimaru coughed between laughs,the moment was almost here,the moment that he would claim Sasuke's body for his.He started coughing up more blood hanging his head down holding on tightly to the bed sheets as he looked back up he saw a blue energy coming towards him in a straightline like a sword.He held up his arms as they pierced through them,he looked puzzled at the closed door infront of him.~This chakra nature is a different form than i have ever seen...who is?~he narrowed his eyes.A sword sliced down all around the door and shattered apart revealing Sasuke,his katana was resting on his shoulder while his left hand was hodling the chidori even though the shape was different."Ofcourse its you,i knew youd come for me soon."Orochimaru hissed,"Theres nothing more you can teach me Orochimaru,now you will see i can be heartless...even to you."the curse mark started to go across the left side of his face while he activated his sharingan.

Sasuke began to walk in the room while holding his chidori in place,Orochimaru's arm started to shake as it was still being pierced.He struggled as he started moving his arms to the side letting the chidori pierce into the wall,he looked back at Sasuke the left side of his face was tattoed with black flames and he couldnt look away from those crimson eyes.Sasuke looked back at him emotionless,"Orochimaru,im stronger than you now so i dont see the point of me handing my body over to you.",Orochimaru gave him a deadly glare,"A bold statement from a nursling Uchiha..."he said through gritted teeth."Hn...yes a nursling Uchiha was the only kind..you could handle."Sasuke smirked."You were there in the forest of death to see if this nursling showed promise right?So you layed claim to me,you thought youd bind me by using this curse mark."

"Im an Avenger,i want my revenge...i wanted it so badly i was willing to give up my body for it but you wanted the sharingan right?But how to get it..Itachi was out of the question so you came after me,the baby of the family isnt that so.And they say your the genius out of the Legendary Sanin,your nothing but a wretch,your level of genius to an Uchiha looks pretty ordinary.Besides that i dont like your style(referring to the experiments on people)."He narrowed his eyes at Orochimaru"You disgust me.."he ran up on the bed moving his chidori to the side causing Orochimarus body to move also,Sasuke was about to stab him with his katan until Orochimaru shot out of his won body.Sasuke turned around facing a giant serpent with a head the looked similar to Orochimarus but more snake like,his body was also made up of tiny snakes.Sasuke dissolved his chidori letting Orochimarus body slide on the side of the bed as Sasuke turned fully around facing the now Orochimaru.

"The giant white scaled snake..never would of recognized you so thats your true form,in order to keep switching from body to body you experimented endlessly so this is what youve become."he said with a hollow smile cored on his face.Orochimaru moved to the side trying to get a good angle,like a snka ewould do to its prey.He looked down at Sasuke standing on his bed,"Now Sasuke,you are mine give me your body!!!"he came striking foward mouth wide open,Sasuke jumped out of the way and snakes started dispersing from Orochimarus body striking towards Sasuke.He cut them with ease with his katana and did a back flip sliding backwards near the entrance,more came at him and he kept cutting them down fliping and jumping out of the way.He then haulted next to the nearby wall and placed his katana back in its holder,more snakes started approaching.Sasuke removed his arms out of his sleeves revealing his nicely toned chest;) and snakes began wrapping around his legs making their way up his torso.
His curse mark started taking full affect changing his whole appearance,the snakes completely wrapped around Sasuke's whole body.Now Orochimaru was just waiting for his chance"A snake that crawled on the earth dreamt of once soaring through the sky knowing well its impossible,still hoping beyond hope it kepted its eye on a baby bird that it nurtured in its on nest never realizing that the snake is now the prey because the bird is a hawk ready to soar the sky."Sasuke appeared out of the now cut up snakes due tohiswings now staring up at Orochimaru inhis complete for of the curse mark."Sasukeee!!!"Orochimaru screamed releasing more of his snakes at Sasuke,now that Sasuke has wings he was able to have a better opportunity of dodging and striking even at better angles.He used his chidori manipulating its shape into a sword cutting dozens of them down at once,Orochimaru went for him again and Sasuke charged towards him as well.

Sasuke cut Orochimaru limb from limb even as more snakes were making way to him,they werent in the way because they got cut down as well.The top part of Orochimarus body collasped to the ground and the other part as well,Sasuke stood between them as his wings started to close in and the curse mark was leavng his face"So thats it?...well that was disappoitning"suddenly Sasuke fell to the ground on one knee,his breathing started hitching and gas was coming from out of Orochimarus torn body.Laughs were being heard coming from Orochimaru,"Looks like its starting to take affect,the fluids turn into to gas numbing anything it touches,i can see it already weakening you.Now let me take you!!"Orochimaru opened his mouth,Sasuke still bent on one knee showed no type of concern as he was engulfed.

Sasuke looked around his surroundings the sky was a light purple and the ground was moving looking like inside of someones mouth."Where am i"he asked puzzled,he heard laughter and saw something rising from the ground,"This is where the transferance ritual will be held...shall we begin"Orochimarus face was finally revealed out of that gooey body tissue,Sasuke just looked at him blankly.Orochimarus tongue stuck out longer than usual as the body tissue started wrapping around Sasuke.Around Sasuke appeared more bodies that were once taken by Orochimaru,Sasuke shifted his eyes to the side and back at Orochimaru.Orochimaru started inching towards Sasuke,Sasuke not taking his eyes off of him,staring him down with his sharingan pleased Orochimaru and only made him more happy.He finally got close enough and his body tissue started taking hold of Sasukes,eyes still on Orochimaru Sasuke used his curse mark and it started turn it all black springing out leeches of his on.

Orochimaru looked on shock as his body tissue started turning black and Sasuke's leeches bit on to Orochimaru."But how...this cant be,i created this universe i control everything"he said in disbelief.Soon enough everything around them began to turn into Sasukes powers and Sasuke was releaved from any type of body tissue as he stared down Orochimaru.Orochimaru looked on still in shock but filled with rage as he started ranting on about being immortal,he saw a giant monster created from Sasuke coming towards him and engulfing him completely.Meanwhile,Kabuto was making his way back down the hall when he noticed Orochimarus door was destroyed he moved up to the side of the entrance and peeped in seeing Sasuke.His shirt was back on and he looked as if he had no marks on his face,then Kabuto's eyes roamed towards the ground seeing Orochimarus dead body.

Kabuto took a gulp and Sasuke looked towards the entrance,"Is that Kabuto?"Kabuto stood up standing in the doorway,everything grew silent and Sasuke walked pass him without glancing his way.Kabuto just stood in his position and looked towards Sasuke accusingly,"Just answer one thing?"Sasukes steps came to a halt,"Just which one are you?"Sasuke turned facing him with a smirk,"You tell me..Kabuto"he activated his sharingan showing Kabuto everything that happened within the ritual.After it was broadcasted to Kabuto he started to tremble with disbelief,"Then Lord Orochimaru is dead?...no it cant be,its more like..."Sasuke cut him of rasing his eyebrows,"I have obsorbed him completely and nothing at all remains."Sasuke continued walking down the hall as Kabuto just stood their in utter disbelief.While in the a long distance Naruto,You,Tsunade,Jiraiya and Itachi(From different locations)were looking up at the sun that blazed red,each getting your own uneasy feeling about what might accurd.


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