One Shot With Louis Tomlinson;)

This will be a short story for any of you One Direction fans or anyone that just wants to read this:) So go ahead!

Created by jellybeanluver123 on Tuesday, September 18, 2012

*Warning: There will be any physical activity(kissing, sex, etc) in this story. Please don't report! Thank you.:)*-----------------------------------------------------------

After getting to watch my boyfriends concert at a perfect few, I couldn't wait to get home.

Tonight is Louis' birthday along with our one year anniversay! I had something special in mind for him that would please both of us.

Yes, our anniversary is on his birthday since he thought it would be nice to ask me on that day. Which I didn't mind.

Harry and Zayn wouldn't leave me alone about Louis' birthday present. I wouldn't tell them at all since it was to embarrasing.

Liam and Nial noticed that I was starting to get uncomfortable so they made them stop before Louis came out and lectured them.

As soon as we got to the hotel we all went up the elevator. We had to make sure to get a special hotel that didn't have fans bothering and chasing them. Which I personally thought was funny.

When we went up the elevator we walked out and went to our own rooms. Louis and I shared a room while Harry and Zayn shared one. Leaving Nial and Liam.

Once we get into our room Louis shut the door and locked it then wrapped his arms around my waist bringing my chest to his.

"Finally, alone time with my girl. What do you want to do?" He asked smirking down at me.

I smiled and shrugged my shoulders. "Well, I need to take a shower, so you can wait out here for me?"

Louis gave me a pouty lip and gave me the sad eyes. "But I miss you. Can I take a shower with you?" He tilted his head to the side.

Damn, he looked hot doing that but I couldn't give in. I had to make sure everything went as planned.

"No, I want to take a quick shower and I can't do that with you distracting me." He groaned making me laugh.

"Fine, but don't take that long." I gave him a quick peck on the lips then dashed to the bathroom.

I quickly took my shower then stepped out looking at my lingerie on the counter. This night had to be perfect for the both of us.

No, I'm not a virgin and niether is Louis, but we haven't had sex with each other yet. I was ready for him now though and I could tell he was ready for me.

I carefully slipped them on. Both the underware and bra were white. They were both lace and you could see through them.

I left my long hair down and let it curl. After looking at myself one more time I was ready. I looked hot and I wasn't backing out now.

I wrapped the towel around my body then headed out of the bathroom. I looked for Louis to find him sitting on the couch watching t.v.

I quitely made my way in front of the t.v. to stand right in front of him. When I did I just stood there holding the towel tightly and lust filling up my eyes.

"Finally, you're out. Wait, why are you still in your towel?" He raised an eyebrow at me and I just smirked.

"This is why.." I then slowly let the towel drop and when it did Louis' eyes widened and his jaw clenched.

When his eyes raked my body I walked over to him then strattled his lap. I wrapped my arms around his neck and looked into his eyes.

"Damn, you look... Beautiful." He said while looking into my eyes. I smiled at him and kissed his cheek all the way to his ear. I lightly nibbled on his ear lobe making him tense.

"I want you to make love to me like you never have to any other girl," I whispered into his ear.

He groaned and his grip tightened on my hips. "Are you sure you want to do this?" I nodded my head smiling.

He smiled back at me then gripped onto my legs picking me up. I wrapped my legs tightly around his waist.

"Then get ready for the ride of your life." He then lightly placed my back onto the bed and crawled over to me.

Louis then hovered over me and brought his lips to mine. Our lips fit so perfectly together and moved rythmatically. This kiss made me forget about everything around me and made me a little dizzy.

He then nipped at the bottom of my lip which I gladly opened my mouth for him. Our tonguees danced together and fought, but he obviously won.

Louis then started to trail kisses down my jaw line and to my neck leaving my panting for air after the heating kiss.

He kissed down my collarbone and softly bit a piece of skin making my groan. I felt him move his hands up and down my sides making me tingle. My body was getting easily turned on by him and I didn't know how much longer I can wait.

I wrapped my legs around his waist tightly and grinded into him. After a few more times I felt him getting hard and he groaned making me smirk.

"You are so going to regret that." Louis growled making me giggle. "Show me what you got then big boy." I winked at him and his eyes filled up with lust.

He then unclasped my bra throwing it to the side and started to suck on one of my nipples and masssage my other breast.

Without paying attention his other hand made its way to my core and he started to slightly rub it through my underware.

When I notcied the pleasure shoot through out my body I couldn't help but moan. I tried to roll my hips towards his hand but he stopped.

"Don't move or I will punish you." I whimpered but listened to him anyways. I really needed him now. I was already wet and my core was throbbing for him.

Louis started to kiss down my stomach while still rubbing me. Once he made it to my underware he kissed my inner thighs and moved right over my area.

"Louis, please. I can't take it anymore." He ignored me and kissed my inner thigs still.

After a few more kisses his finally softly kissed my core through my underware then slightly grabbed them between his teeth and pulled them off.

I then noticed that I had everything off but he didn't. I reached to pull off his shirt but he stopped me.

"I told you not to move." He said looking into my eyes. "But I have nothing on when you do." He looked at himself then smiled at me. "Fine."

He took off his shirt and I drooled over his amazing body. He was definitely fit and I'm glad that this was all mine.

After throwing his shirt to the side he pulled his pants off, leaving him in only his boxers. He then went back down to my core and kissed my thighs.

Before I knew what was coming I felt Louis slip two fingers into me making my moan and tilt my head back.

He moved his fingers slowly making me whimper. I tried moving my hips but he stopped me. "Louis, faster, please."

Instead of listening to me he pulled them out, but I then felt his lips connect to my core making me gasp. He moved his tongue inside me at an amazing speed making me arch closer into him.

He got my signal and grabbed my thighs and pulled me closer to him. I tilted my head back and lot of a low moan. I could feel my climax building up inside me.

Louis could tell I was about to release then right before I was about to him stopped. I gasped and frowned. "Louis! I was almost finished!"

He smiled at me then kissed me softly. "I'm sorry babe. I don't want you finished just yet." After saying that he took off his boxers.

When he did my eyes widened. His was huge and I had no idea how that was going to fit inside me. He must've noticed my worried expression because he gave me a passionate kiss.

"It will be okay ____. If you don't want to do this then we can stop." He looked right into my eyes but I shook my head. "No, I want to do this."

He smiled at me then kissed me again. This kiss was rough but passionate and it felt amazing. Before he could do anything else I softly grabbed onto his manhood.

Louis then grunted into the kiss making my smirk. I slowly stroked his full length while Louis pressed his forehead to mine with his eyes closed and his breathing off rythm.

When I gripped it a little tighter and moved a little faster he let out a low growl which sounded really hot. I think it kind of turned me on even more.

I could tell Louis was close so I immeditately stopped. His eyes flew open and looked at me with annoyance. I gave him my innocent look.

"Why did you stop?" I smiled at him. " I didn't want you finishing yet." He smirked at me. "Oh, you're so getting it now."

I then felt Louis poke at my entrance making my hips jerk up. The feeling was amazing and I wanted him all in me now.

Louis held my hips down and slowly and softly poked his head at my core. I tried moving but he wouldn't let me.

"Louis just take me now, please." I groaned. Louis' eyes filled up with lust then he slowly put his head into me making me moan from the pleasure.

When I thought he was going to put all of him through he pulled back out. I groaned and flipped us over in annoyance. Louis looked up at me shocked then smirked.

"I like a woman that takes control. You must really want me." I laugh then grab his dick and slowly put it into my entrance. Once his head went through I slowly sat all the way down on it.

A moan left our mouths at the sudden feeling soaring through out our bodies. I start rolling my hips then move up and down. Before I could do anymore Louis grabs onto my hips then thrust into me.

My back arches and I throw my head back at the sudden speed, letting a loud moan escape from my mouth.

Before I could think about what was happening I found myself underneath Louis. He started to slowly thrust into me making me groan.

"Go faster Louis." I groaned out. I wrapped my legs around his waist again and move my hips with him, meeting every thrust.

"What is that?" He then thrust into me really hard making me moan out. "Louis! Go faster!" I groan out louder then I expected.

He then speeds up and thrust into me harder to. My body started to go numb from all of the pleasure an I could barely think anymore. This was all amazing and I couldn't hold back.

I could feel my climax building up inside me once again and Louis could tell. "Say my name babe," Louis growled into my ear.

He then raised my hips up and thrust into me hard making his whole length go inside me and hit my g spot. I throw my head back and nearly scream. "Louis! Oh baby!"

Louis thrust into me the same way sending me over the edge. My body slightly shakes and my back arches letting Louis in deeper. My head goes back and my eyes close while I moan out Louis' name again and feel my core clench around his memeber so tight that he could barely move.

Louis groans and thrust in faster and harder then he ever has. He lets out a low groan/growl. "You're so fucking tight ____. I love it."

I keep moving my hips riding out of my high and helping Louis come. He then groans again and I knew it was coming.

He smashed his lips onto mine and began to passionately kiss me while his body tensed up a little then came inside me.

We both groan together at the feeling. Louis thrust a few more times in me then slowly pulls out. Laying right by myside. "That was amazing."

I smile and nod my head then cuddle into him underneath the sheets. "I know. Happy anniversary/birthday babe."

He kissed my forehead and chuckled. "Happy anniversary beautiful. I love your present." I giggle. "You're welcome."

Louis hugged me. "You took the pill right?" I nod my head then yawn. "Alright, good night baby."

I smile and slowly start to drift to sleep. "Night." What an awesome anniversary!


Well this is it! There will be no chapters or anything. Sorry! Hope you liked it:)

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