~... An Ominous Mind ... 2 ...~

*steps forth from the shadows*Sorry that this one is so dreadfully short. It has basically two reasons. 1) Originally in the written version chapter two and three were together one chapter, but it would be way too much for one post. So I cut a part off and called it chapter two. 2) Chapter three is kinda violent. (as you maybe will notice at the ending of this chapter where basically I hint that it will be. (you'll see, you'll see :P)) So for those who really don't like it when things get bloody (and still

Created by CrimsonGatesOfParadise on Wednesday, April 26, 2006

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~... 2 ...~

I looked down from the top of the cliff


Exactly as I had expected


The tomb was heavily guarded
Not that I would have had any trouble knocking out the guards,
but I had only come to observe


The plan was to wait for a little while
Until everything had settled down.
I would strike sometime after the new pharaoh had claimed his throne.


When they thought they were safe
When they would expect it the least


This afternoon I had been too rash and impulsive
A mistake I wouldn't make again


The moonlight got reflected by my eyes
I could only smirk


"Fool"


Like lightning I whipped around and grabbed the man by his throat


"You really thought you could sneak up onto me unpunished?"


I looked into his eyes and saw only shock, confusion and fear


They are always shocked,
But I won't blame them
They have enough reasons to be afraid
And it would be an insult if they were not


I want to be feared


The man still stared at me in terror


The perfect toy


I unsheathed the knife
The cool moonlight was reflected by its blade


"I asked you something."
My voice was as cold as the moonlight itself


The man trembled
He tried to speak, but could only gasp for air


I let go of him and he collapsed onto the ground
Still fighting to get his breath back


I sat down on a rock, holding the knife loosely in my hand
And I watched


I watched, fascinated by his attempts to get himself together


After a while he seemed to be able to think clearly again


He slowly got up and looked back at me
Shock and confusion had faded
And they were replaced by doubt


Terror and doubt


Should he run away?
What would I do if he tried?


Should he attack?
His gaze got attracted by my knife
I probably would kill him before he could even turn around


Should he warn the guards?
Then he would have to explain how he got here


He saw the look in my eyes
The amused smile that played around my lips all the time he stood there


And then he realized


He was doomed


He turned around as swiftly as possible and took to his heels


One... two... three steps...


I let him walk a little while longer
He would think he was saved


Eight... nine... ten


The knife cut through the darkness


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In the results is a 'funny' convo for you to read :P Ah en please vote and message and such ^^;
OK ^-^ *clicks*
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Thanks for reading, please vote... blah blah.

Oh I know... there WAS a funny story in here... point was that is wasn't funny at all and that was why I cut it out -.- (sorry, chapter three and up already have their own funny stories, but this one didn't have one yet... so I had to make one up... and that didn't work -.- I'm not funny on command... or funny in general -.-)

*takes off hat, bows and disappears in a poof of smoke*


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