|Forrest Kline| Shimmy Shimmy Quarter Turn |01|

Created by HeroxZero on Saturday, May 13, 2006

[Main Character]



Name: River Anderson
Age: 18



[Best Friend]




Name: Vanessa Newman
Age: 18



[The Guy]




Name: Forrest Kline
Age: 20



[The Guy's Best Friend]




Name: Jesse Kurvink
Age: 20




[Setting(s)]




Laguna Beach, California




Cancun, Mexico


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"So when are we leaving to go to Cancun?" asked Vanessa.


"At around four," I said trying to find my boyfriend through the people milling around waiting for their parents to find them.


"Who you looking for?" Vanessa asked.


"Anthony." I answered spotting him neat some of his friends. I grabbed Vanessa's hand and pulled her behind me as I pushed through the crowd to get to Anthony.


"Hey," Anthony said as we came up to him and his friends.


"Hey," I said back to him.


"Hay is for horses!" Ethan, Anthony's best friend said. Vanessa suppressed a laugh while I raised an eyebrow at him.


"So when you guys leaving to go to Cancun?" Anthony asked.


"Around four is when the plane takes off so probably around three." I answered.


"Cool, so you'll be leaving in around two hours." Anthony asked.



"Yeah," I said. "Uh, Anthony do you think O could talk to you?"


"Yeah, sure. Go ahead."


"Alone."


"Oh, oh yeah. Yeah, sure." He said and nudged Ethan and winked at the rest of his friends.


We walked to the football field where people were taking pictures, and walked around the track that surrounded the field.


I took a deep breath and began, "Anthony. I've been thinking about this a lot and-"


"I totally agree." He said looking down at me.


"You do?" I asked smiling.


"Yeah, I mean I deserve to go to Cancun with you, not Vanessa. I mean, hello, I'm your boyfriend." He said.


"Actually, that isn't even close to what I was going to say." I said frowning up at him.


"Oh, what were you going to say?" he said stopping.


"What I was going to say is I think we should take a break." I said stopping also.


"You are breaking up with me?"


"Well yeah, I'm going to be in Mexico the whole summer and you might meet someone else and I might meet someone else. So then we wouldn't have to worry about cheating." I said.


"What-ever," he sighed and stalked off back to where his friends were. Just then Vanessa came running up to me shaking her hands in a disgusted way.


"Ew, ew, ew, ew, ew!" she kept on repeatedly saying while shaking her hands.


"What?" I asked grabbing her by the shoulders to stop her.


"Ethan! He touched me!" she said. My hands shot off of her like I had gotten shocked. My face went into a look of disgust and I tried to speak but all I did was gag.


"I know! He is so gross!" she exclaimed making a family passing by look at us.


"Where did he touch you? Did you slap him?" I asked.


"He squeezed my butt and yes I slapped him then ran over here."


"Well, let's go before they get even more pissed when they find out I broke up with Anthony." I said leading us away from the football field.


"We gotta stop at Tower Records real quick 'cause I need to get Avenged Sevenfold's new cd. I dropped it yesterday and it got all scratched up," I said turning into Tower Records.


"Ok, cool. I need a new cd anyway." Vanessa said pushed her sunglasses on top of her head.


We split up when we got inside. I went to the 'A's and she went to the new releases.


I found Avenged Sevenfold, then looked for City of Evil. I grabbed it and walked up to the cash register here Vanessa was chatting up the cashier.


I handed him the cd and paid all while him and Vanessa were talking.


As we were leaving Vanessa waved at him then turned back to me and said," Wasn't he cute! And guess what else! He is going to be in Cancun the whole summer too!"


"Awesome," I said unlocking my car.
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