The Start of Something New...| A D.N.Angel Story |...The beginning...

|| Chapter One ||
The Beginning...
~ 3rd P.O.V. ~
Dark has been running for a while before he finally stopped. Panting he bent down and picked up a silver bracelet with an Angel charm on it. "Hmm...I wonder where this came from..." Dark said, intrigued by its intricate design. --Well...you should probably leave it there, someone might come looking for it.-- Daisuke thought to Dark. "Yeah, Yeah..." Dark replied. He gently set the bracelet back down and sat on the ground. He had been running from Krad, who had stopped him from stealing the 'Staff of Quicksilver'. Just then he heard a noise and turned around. The bracelet was GONE! --Where did it go?-- Daisuke thought in shock. "I don't know....but we aren't alone..." Dark said, shock himself for he had been right next to the bracelet. How did he not see someone take it?! As Dark said that he saw the heel of a shoe disappear down the tunnel in front of him. He then ran after who ever that was. "Hey! Wait, Stop!" He shouted to the figure ahead of him. The figure stopped and turned around slowly. when the figure fully faced him, Dark stopped dead in his tracks as his heart skipped a beat. He saw most beautiful girl he had ever seen looking straight into his dark purple eyes. Her eyes were the most strangest he's ever seen though, the left one was dark purple like his and the other one was peircing yellow like Krad's. Uh....um....heh....who...uh...are you?" He stammered, but the girl amazingly grew silverish-grey wings suddenly out of her back and flew out of the hole in the ceiling, not saying a word. --Who was that Dark?-- Daisuke asked. "I don't know but.....she looks so familiar...." Dark said.
Satarel flew through the midnight sky carrying with her, her treasure. The angel charm bracelet her mother had given her. She had been so stupid. How could she have lost it so easily AND be seen? She was getting careless now-a-days. "Never again..." She whispered to herself.
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Here is Satarel, just imagine that the left eye was dark purple and the right was peircing yellow, and the wings a silverish grey color. Rate and/or Message. Thanks! =^-^=