Mai betrayal

So in this youre the observer and the reviewer (please ^-^)
Darien is a doctor; Serena is a desperate housewife lol (kinda) with her little daughter and human tornado Rini. Then theres all the scouts...
Okay so whatever you picked the story is about to start.


1. Oh let me get a Pepsi first

2. Duh I want a cherry coke

3. na Im not thirsty just start the damn thing

The sun rises in the middle of the beautiful city on a Monday morning. Serena is first to awaken. Naturally she is lying in Dariens arms. She closes her eyes to go back to sleep when a little girl wearing a bright pink nightgown comes racing in.
The pink haired girl pulls on the curtains, revealing the view from their large apartment window.
Ah 7 already? Darien mumbles.
Serena murmurs something into her husbands soft white nightshirt.
He pats his wife on the head and sits up. Rini comes bounding on to the bed and wraps her chubby little arms around her fathers neck.
Morning Daddy she squeals. Darien kisses his baby girl on the cheek.
Serena forces herself up. Rini pulls on her long blonde hair which is a mass of blonde untied locks.
Oww Rini Serena moans.
Darien laughs. Now sweetie dont hurt mommy like that
Rini appears confused. But Daddy you told me to she says with a cute little grin.
Serena gasps and ruffles her devilish mans ebony coloured hair.
You she says with her hand cupping his face. They then share a kiss.

AWww that is so sweety pie serena and darien ness (me) ah yeah....?
"UH Rini is a brat..."
Yes yes kissy kissy ness now on with the betrayal (me) Oh how lovely
Okay so later on that day
In the doctors office ^o)
Darien sits on his swivel chair and types in some medical info on one of his patients. Three young men are in the waiting room. One has messy blonde hair and looks very bored to be there. The other has brown hair and large chestnut coloured eyes. They wear baggy school uniforms.
Hey Lady The scruffy blonde says to the dark haired female on reception.
Yes The neatly pressed blue haired woman replies.
When is that Doctor Shields guy gonna be ready to see us?
He couldent be too far away Ami, the receptionist replies.
Just then a tall blonde woman with bouncy curls walks towards the reception desk. Her lips are cherry red and her white coat rests just below her knees. The three guys fix their eyes on each movement she makes. The observe her tight black pantyhose and listen to each clomp of her heels as she walks.
Hey any patients yet? The blonde asks.
Ami smiles and hands her a file.
Noone today but you dont officially start here until tomorrow
The blonde sighs and rests against the desk.
The guys scope her figure from behind and grin.
Check it out
Ha she must have gone to spank me university one of them mutters.
All of a sudden Darien appears.
Ami informs the males that they may go in now.
(god knows what it was for)

1. STD theyre dirty hah

2. I dunno I dont care..get to the affair

3. Meh you decide

Anyway whatever it is the boys have, the drag themselves in to dariens office.
Darien lifts the bangs away from his forehead and smiles at the new blonde doctor before going in.
She sweetly smiles back and winks at the teenage boys.
They in turn go bright red and Darien closes the door.
Thanks doc The brunette one of the trio says on his way out.
No problem Darien replies, handing them a script.
The blonde boy then leans in beside Darien and whispers.
Hey whoever that new hot doc is Youre one lucky man if you know what I mean
Darien rolls his blue eyes and sends the boy over to reception to pay.
However the thought of the curvaceous new doctor did have him thinking.
He hoped he would be seeing more of her
Later on that afternoon as Darien busied himself in his surgery looking up patient files and such. There was a slight knock at the door.
Come in He says. His attention remains on the computer.
So this is where the Dr Darien spends his time? A soft voice asks.
Darien immediately looks up to see the tall blonde female in a white coat standing by his desk.
Her smell is alluring a strong rose perfume that fills the room surrounds him.
Im Mai, Dr Mai Valentine She introduces herself.
He shakes her smooth hand. He notices the shiny red polish on the tips of her delicate fingernails.
Although he had only just met her, Mai Valentine displayed something intriguing. Her purple eyes held a deep secret that Darien was curious about. As his blues met hers there was a moment of silence.
In that moment he blinked and his mind took him to the end of his bed, with her lying on top
Wha He gasps. Sweat drips from his face. He had never had that happen before, other than anyone apart from his Serena.
Mai places a warm hand on his forehead.
Are you alright? She motions.
Darien jolts and moves off his chair.
Uh yeah thankyou He quickly replies.

1.Oooh no
2. Naughty boy
3. Aha its already started hasnt it?
I better go Mai says with a cute smile.
Uh sure see you tomorrow Darien replies.
As the door shuts, Darien slumps onto the white bed which is for his patients.
He rubs his eyes and sits himself up. Trying to contain himself he looks around his neat and tidy surgery and inhales once.
Just then the door flings wide open.
Thinking it is Mai again, Darien jumps off the bed and presses his white coat by his sides. He smooths his black hair into place and awaits a bouncy blondes arrival
His eyes droop when he sees Serena enter. She is wearing a bright pink baby tee and blue flare jeans. Her hair is in pigtails as usual.
Hey hubby She squeals.
Hey Sere Darien smiles

1. Oh what will happen?

2. Gee poor Darien NOT
3. Id frown too if I saw Serena (meatball head)
Thats chappie one
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Youre a sweet romantic serena and darien shipper and you dont like what this new doctor mai is up to. keep reading but i worn you..bring some tissues its gonna be sad.


Well you are interested in what is going to happen between mai and darien but you do have a liking for the darien and serena pairing...although you think rini is a brat..stay tuned for more


You dont like serena that much or rini and are itching to see darien fall for someone else...youre a little harsh but then gain i am the one writing the story so how nice can i be???