A sort-of HP story-- re-written

Created by ThornsOfPain on Sunday, October 29, 2006

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Character name: Jennifer (Jinx) Winters.
Year: same as Harry
hair: 2 inches above elbows, face framing la-yers,straight black with an unusual natural blue streak.
eyes: grey
Blood: mudblood
House: Slytherin
Body: fit, athletic, about 5'1"
General Info: Absolutely Gorgeous, ussualy only wears slight black eyeliner to define eyes, smart, funny, uneasily angered, determined, cunning, seductive when she wants to be


horrible... you copied me!!! (T_T...wtf???)
Awesome...well cool...so far.
By now no one would even look at me, though I dont blame them, iI'd be scared of myself also. Even the new kids.
The kids who knew me would rush towards them like a magnet, but this time they didnt. they were asleep thanks to the sleeping powder I found in the office.
His name was Sam Roberts, The bully kind, I suspect.
Though in a polite way he came to me "name, pretty girl?"
"Jinx Winters" I said glaring into his eyes. Knowing that all the sisters had gone to bed he swung a fist at me. I tilted my head as the fist went through my hair and looked at him amusingly.
"Good night" I said and went to bed leaving him mad.
The next morning i woke early to see an snowy owl fly through my open window. dropping a small parchment it flew away.
Even though i was sure this was some kind of joke i packed my most precious belongings of the charm my previos only friend before she was adopted a nekalace from my mum and my jornal.

typical... (then y dont u leave already????)
its pretty good.. so far..
That noon I stayed in my deserted room singing to the song my previous friend and I had come up with to the band.
"Echo. We all are connected
a lighthouse a voyage
for historys sake,
would you please take notice-?"
Just then Sister Agatha came "Jenni- er Jinx Winters dear you have a visiter"
Jinx followed her obeyingly to the headmistresses room where she saw an old man with a very long beard. Not showing her puzzled confusion she walked to a chair but didnt sit down.
Jinx didnt bother to listen, in fact she didnt want to listen to their rowing when she knew the old man was going to win that old hag.
She was right and eventually for once she was actually surprisedat what the old er
Dumbledore just said."Miss Winters, I see... yes im afraid so a few years late for training but no worries."
"training for what?"
"Witchcraft and wizardry. You are a witch, Jennifer or if you prefer Jinx."
A witch? Bloody hell! But why am I a year late ? what happened that i could not go? Oh right, I just got to the the orphanage 4 years ago...
"Jinx is fine er.."
"Proffesor Dumbledore"
"Proffesor?"
"yes. and when answering the other teachers its yes sir, no sir, or proffesor. Now if you hold my left arm please?"
And pop they were in a different place.
"Where are we?"
"The Leaky cauldron. You will be staying here for the while then Tom will help you to the train station where you go to the train nine and three quarters. All your needs will be in that trunk over their and you also now have a new grey owl which you will name yourself. Well here is your ticket and i shall be going now. do you have any questions?" he added after turning twice.
" er no, I'm good. er see you there?"
She saw a twinkle in his eyes as he nodded and dissapeared in a Pop!
"OK" She said walking over to the owl. she began to stroke the beak when the owl opened it and started pecking softly against her fingers. And she gave a small smile, the first time she smiled in along time.
"How ya doin Katrina?" Jinx said softly The name was her mothers which made Jinx wanted to cry. Katrina made a soft hooting sound.
There was a knock on the door, "come in". In came a lady in fuzzy hair with a tray of food setting it on a table. "thank you" Jinx said of habit." Your welcome dear" the lady said heading out with a bewitched broom and dustpan.

Jinx and Katrina went or flew over to the food and started eating. Jinx ate without a care unlike in the orphanage when she was on her guard of spiked food. Here no one knew her.

When Jinx finished her food she watched the owl peck at the raw fish. Jinx chuckled a little and rolled the owl a mmeatball she missed.
To Jinx's surprise Katrina ate the peice of meat as it seemed happily Jinx guessed as the owl gave a coulple of happyu hoots.
"Seems like you hadnt eaten in a long time too" Then Jinx gave another small smile. THe tray slowly disapeared and Jinx went to the trunk as the owl went back to the windowsil sleeping.
She took out her mother's locket and put it on the small table next to the bed. "night mum, night Katrina" Jinx whispered blowing out the candle.

ohhh... wait isnt Katrina a hurricane???
Two days later a man nameed Tom took her to the train station where he showed her how to get to platform nine and three quarters.
"Thanks alot" she said hastily.
"my pleasure"
gratefull that your trunk was light as you saw the others you head onto the train. Quickly you find an empty department and sit.
You take out you journal and begin to draw, you never know what you are drawing but in the end you know it will always turn out good.
When you have nearly finished you notice that it was a boy you were drawing, with a scar on his forehead.
Just then the door slid open. "mind if we sit here?The others are so full" said a girl with fluffy brown hair
"erm sure, go ahead." as the girl came in two other boys came with her. "Um, i dont recall giving you two permission to come in her." you say.
" They look at you surprised then a little mad. Just as the boy with brown hair was about to open you say" just kidding, where i'm from you can do whatever you want"
with a weak smile knowing that a full smile wouldnt look good on your pale bony face. They chuckled nervously also and sat down
"Im Hermione, And this is Ron and Harry" She said gesturing.
"Jinx Winters. nice to meet you"
You continue drawing. When you were finished you were actually surprised.
"Can I see?" Hermione asked. You hesitated because you were usually pranked upon but seeing her kind face she handed her the drawing.
"Harry, it's you!" The boy named Ron exclaimed taking the journal so he could see.
"yeah, it is. bDid you draw this or is that quill bewitched?"
"I drew it by hand.Even though I've never seen you before in my life." I said taking the book back and putting it in my bag.
"What do you mean you've never seen him before? Everyone knows him." Ron said.
"Not me."
Just the you started feeling hungry and started looking for those crackers you had in you bag but you guess Katrina snaked it into her own stomach.

wow... another typical story.... (sigh, well idk--- y dont u try doin better?? -_-)
"just then the door slid opened to a plump lady "anything off the cart dears?"
This made you turn away to the window. You start to wonder what Katrina is doing right now, if she was getting along with the other owls.
"Jinx?" You turned your headto Hermione who was calling you."You want some? you look like you havent eaten since merlin's time" holding out a few pastries.
"yea thanks" You say and take some
You take a big bite and wondered how something could be so good but you kept a straight face and finished eating.

Harry's POV

Have she been kept away hidden from everything she was also? And her name, Jinx, it couldnt be her real name right.
She looks so pale and fragile, yet she acts like she would still be able to survive a hurricane without protection.
She looks so strange.
"erm What house will you be in?"Hermione asked/
"I think it was Slithr sumthing"
"Slytherin!" We all cry in hate.
"whats wrong witth it?"she said suprisingly indifferent
Seems like shes in her own world, but all the better, i think.
"er Ron? does she look somewhat familiar to you?" you say.
"No, I clearly dont remember anyone with blue hair." Ron says.
"But doesnt she look abit like.........never mind. I'm just tired"
"well were there."

For once we didnt see Malfoy when we arrived, but I hadn't noticed. I was troubled at what Jinx was making me feel so uneasy and why she was so familiar.
I couldnt have known her, she would have recognized me also.
Maybe she did recognize me, but just didnt show it. "Looks a bit depressed, doesnt she?"Ron muttered low enough so only me and hermione could hear.
I loked at his cheeks full of chocolate frog then looked at Jinx to stop myself from laughing. In fact she did look abit depressed. No- more like Really depressed. I wonder why.
She was listening to one of those mp3s that i had seen Dudly recieve one time for his birthday. It was awfully small. "What are you listening?" I asked seeing she only had one earpiece on.
Hermione looked up from her book she still hadnt finished during the summer.
Jinx took off the ear piece and looked at us. "Im sorry, What?"
"Who are you listening to?" Hermione asked, suprising me. I never would have know that music would ever cross her mind, neither would mine or Rons.
"Oh, its an American band. Linkon Park." She said blankly. Hermione nodded not wanting to look bad that she was confused. " Cool, whats the song?"
The door slid open to Ginny's frecled face. My stomach urched.
No! No! you do NOT have any feelings toward her. You cannot THINK that way!
"Hi Ginny!" Ron and Hermione say. Ron looked irritated.
" Numb," You hear Jinx say. Ginny nodded. "Ginny," she said sitting down next to her stretching out her hand.
" Sorry, but shaking hands arent really my thing. You can call me Jinx" she said looking from Ginny's head to her face.
Ginny smiled, " Shaking hands arent really my thing either. Bye guys, gotta go find Dean. Oh and have you seen Malfoy? That bloody Pansy's nagging me for about an hour i think."
We shook our heads but Jinx just stared of course. Ginny looked at her, "you'll find out soon enough." she said and Jinx nodded solemnly.
Ginny walked out and Jinx began to put her earpeice back on when I quickly said, " Can you make it louder, so we can hear? We've never heard from Americans before."
she gave me a look. "I'm American. So sure, this one's called In the end, so if you start to think it sounds horrible scream and I'l lower the volume, ok?" We nodded. After all we had abvout another twenty minutes.
She turned the volume louder and we quietly listened without a comment. The words were really depressing, and I couldnt find how she could like them so much.
Finally the train lead to a stop. "Lets take the same boat, " Hermione said. Jinx shrugged and muttered a sure.
When we finally got to the Main Hall We and Jinx seperated into our tables. But before we could, George and fred pooped out of nowhere. "Hiya Harry!" George said merrily.
"How were the muggles this time of year, did they fall for the wand?" Fred asked.
We all knew they had dungbombs in their pockets, I think even Jinx was suspicious when the twins finally noticed her.
"Hi! You're new here arent you? "
"Dont, worry, get lost, were there-"
"get pranked, were there-"
"And nomatter what, we are always in the middle of a crowd." they both finished together.
"I think I can find my way aroud here," Jinx said indifferent.
Fred frowned.
"What house are-" but before fred could finish, Dumbledore's began his welcomes
"Welcome back students...."

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if u dont--- i might find a way to track u down...
Thanx for Reading! =D

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