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Created by xquizygurlx on Monday, December 11, 2006

My Utopia

I have been having these dreams recently. They are hard to explain but, easy to remember. They always take place in a green, bright, and pleasant town on a hill. The dreams seem very real, as if I am present at that place and time. I am not the only one there. There are also people and animals. There are green grassy hills as far as the eye can see. But I have never in the dreams tried to see if they ever end or if there is anything beyond them.

There are houses and farms. The houses are mainly small two-story 3 bedrooms. But the farms are big, they usually measure up to 10 000 sq. ft. In the dream I live in a house. The house has big long windows; they are always open so when I stand near them I can feel the cool breeze on my skin. When I step outside, all I see is a big grassy field with children running around chasing farm animals. I can tell that it is not present time because, there are no cars and the houses are old fashioned. The place is almost like an old fashioned town, where the majority of the population works on the farms.

One night, after I had the dream I woke up. My heart pounding and sweat all over my body. That night in the dream someone had killed two cats and a dog and the whole town was hectic. But soon after three guards appeared out of no where and took the man. Soon they all disappeared. After that dream I suddenly realized that this unknown country side town is my utopia, because of their love for animals!

I do not know the name of this town therefore I am going to call it "My Utopia". In my utopia violence is forbidden. If anyone tries to hurt anyone or anything, three muscular guards appear and take them away. Where do they take them? It is still a mystery. In my utopia, there is no war. Everyone lives in peace and quiet.

In my utopia, everyone is kind and caring with a great personality. All the town people have animals and that is my favorite part of my utopia because, I love animals. Also everyone is alike yet unique in their own way. I think that the people of my utopia are the best part. I still havent learned about all of their interesting personalities that is why I always look forward to these dreams.

Another fascinating remark about my utopia is the wonderful weather. As I have already mentioned, it is always bright and sunny. The sun is always out and the birds are always singing. There is no climate control so that is the natural weather of my utopia. The suns always out even during winter when it snows. But there is no rain. And I like that because whenever it's raining I feel depressed.

The first few times that I had the dream it seemed like the town is very preliminary but soon after, I realized that everyone had high-tech facilities is their homes and outside. I started to pay attention and soon learned about the "receivings". "Receivings" are very much like gifts. They are in crates that fall from the sky with a parachute. There is one sent to each house every week. Where do these come from? It is still a mystery like most things in this town.

I use to think that the people of the town weren't that smart but then after talking to them for a few times I slowly began to notice that they are very well educated in science and math. After finding this out I came to a bigger understanding that this is my utopia, this is my perfect place. But not only are they very well educated they are also all amazing in art which is seen through the colourful houses and clothing.

If I were to pick out 5 things that I love about these dreams and this place, one would be the people. The people are all unique. It's as if they all come with their own background music which helps you tell what they are like. Two would be art, I love art and the people of this town love art and they are very good at it. Three is the grassy hills; the hills never seem to end. No matter how far and long you look at it, all you see are trees, flowers, and grass. The fourth thing is the sun. The sun is always big and bright. But not too bright to hurt your eyes but it is always shining upon the town. And lastly would be the animals. There are animals everywhere you look. There are farm animals, house pets, and wild animals. It is a very beautiful sight.

At night before going to sleep I always in my head repeat the quote "I want my utopia" and I hope that when I fall sleep I see the wonderful dreams of my utopia. There are still many mysteries about my perfect place, which I havent figured out yet and thats what makes it all so interesting and exciting.

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