[.There are more than Seven Sins, you know.]x[.FMA.Greed.]x[.Part1.]

Er, well...I'm just trying this out. I've come up with some great ideas for it, but I want to know what you guys think of it before I take it any further. So I ask that for those of you who read this -- PLEASE message me. You don't have to vote, but messaging WILL help me out. I need to know what you think - ideas, questions, anything. Please. Thanks. ^.~

Created by KairiHakubi981 on Wednesday, January 04, 2006

Name: Indecision (You'll be getting a new name later.)
Age: Unknown (Looks 25 or so)
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 135 (If anyone complains about the weight, I'll pop em one. >_< ; THIS is even under weight for her height and age, so if any anorexic little twig has a problem with that, BITE ME. *smile* Okay then, glad we cleared that up. ^_^; )
Hair color/style: Black/Falls to the bottom of your shoulder blades. Your bangs reach to the corners of your mouth and are divided on either side of your head.
Eye color: Violet (like the rest of the homunculi)
Clothing: (Pre-Devils Nest: A plain black t-shirt thats barely your size just a bit to big - and a pair of baggy, torn jeans. Your hair is messed up fairly bad from all that traveling, you know and your glasses are still bent from the last fight you got into.) Youll find out what you wear once you get to the Devil's Nest when it happens. ^.~
Oroborus: On your left cheek, starting just under your eye.
o.o; Yay. *reads*
D: I don't like it. (Me: Get out. Dx)
You sat in an alley of a small town outside of Dublith, glowering at the ground at your very bare feet. You knew life wasnt supposed to be like this - you see people every day who are better off than you. But because of this stupid mark on your face, they treat you differently.
'Like dirt,' You thought coldly, scrubbing at your skin with your already soiled shirt. With a sigh, you attempted to straighten your bent glasses - things you had found that you didnt need, but you kept them anyway, because a young man once told you they made you more attractive. You scuffled your feet lightly as you stood and began walking, further towards the back of the alley. You had never been in this town before - your habits of getting into fights with the homeless, or random street brawlers had led you here. You heard a lightly chuckling behind you and turned, seeing a man standing in the doorway of what looked to be an underground establishment of sorts. The sign above the door way read 'Devil's Nest.'
'Devils Nest, huh?' You thought, pondering the name. Another chuckled escaped the man and you found yourself glowering at him. "Whats so funny?" You asked in a dangerous tone. The man looked up at you with piercing golden eyes, his hands in his pockets as his smirked.
"Oh, nothing much," He responded casually, examining the fingernails of his right hand, "It's just that you look like you could use a place to stay."
Your eyes narrowed suspiciously at him. This was beginning to sound like some sort of scheme. "Look, buddy, I dont have time for stupid games-"
"That mark on your face is pretty unique, isnt it?" He continued, as if you hadnt spoken, still examining his hand. "I'll bet you get treated...differently, because of it."
Your fists were now involuntarily clenching and unclenching themselves as you resisted the urge to knock this guy out. "What would you know about it?" You spat, now full out glaring at him. He smirked as he turned his hand over to examine his finger nails again, his palm facing you. You gasped a bit as you saw the circle on his hand.
"That...isn't that a transmutation circle?" You asked, any anger you had felt previously replaced with curiosity.
"Yep, sure is." He sighed and let his hand drop back down to his side. "So, whaddya say, doll? You willing to come with me, and meet some more unique characters like yourself?" He winked slightly as he slid his hand back into his pocket. You eyed him nervously, but stepped forward none-the-less. His smirk widened, and he turned to start down the stairs of the Devil's Nest.
D: Was that guy that was laughing at me Kimblee? (Me: ^^; Yes.)
o___O; Long, much. (Me: o_o; Was it? D: I'm sorry.)
^^; Thanks for reading this little trial of mine. Please message and let me know what you think! (Or I suppose if you're really TOO lazy to message, you can rate...and that'll at least tell me how little or much you liked it. o_o;)

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