THIRTEEN Minutes in Hell -Naruto Style!- [[Detailed and SUPER LONG]]-1

I put practically ALL the characters I could think of! Have fun! Also, I don't discrimate them, so just go along with it. ^^ Pretend all the dead characters are alive! XD Also, I'll make other parts later, I could only fit a certain amount because of how long the results ended up. O__O;

Created by cafsk8er on Monday, August 27, 2007

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After a long day at school, you decided to walk home, though, when you're about to walk into your grandmother's store, you feel someone pull at your wrist, causing you to fall onto your butt.


You let out an irritated groan and look up to see Kankuro and Temari standing above you, both of them with huge grins. You never really talked to Kankuro, but Temari used to be good friends with your older sister. She lends you a hand and pulls you up, smiling. "Hey, ______!" She grins. You stare back at her with a blank expression, wondering what she wanted. Usually she didn't talk to you unless she wanted something, it was small things, though, so it wasn't a big deal.

"...What do you want?" You asked, shifting your eyes to Kankuro, who was staring at your chest. You frowned and crossed your arms, blocking him from looking at you. Dumbass, you thought.

"Well," Temari sort of sang. "We were playing a game, and we sort of... need more people."

"And what exactly is this game?"

"13 Minutes in Hell."

"What kind of game is that?"

"Well, 7 Minutes in Heaven was too short, so," she glanced over at Kankuro, who was still trying to peak at your chest. "We wanted to make it longer, besides, everyone is there!"

"No thanks, I have homework," You smile, beginning to walk through the door, but Temari and Kankuro both grab you by the arms and drag you to what you guessed was Ino's house. The whole way there you fought with them, trying your best to free from their grasps but it didn't prevail. When you three bursts through the door, your eyes widened, amazed at how many people were actually there. "You can't be serious," You mutter, staring at all the familiar faces. Some you liked, some you didn't know, and some you hated. "I thought you said you had a little bit of people! This is a lot!"

"Technically I said: 'We need more people'," Temari countered. You shot her a glare as everyone stared at you, making a scene.

"This isn't fair!"

"Life isn't fair," Temari sighed, letting you go. Kankuro was still holding onto you and you narrowed your eyes at him, causing him to let out a nervous laugh and let you go. "Now let's get started!"

She ran into another room, coming back with a small bag. Inside were pieces of papers, probably with the colors everyone had. She shoved it in your face, motioning you to pick one. You lick your lips a little and stick your hand in, shuffling through the papers when finally you pick one!

Though, before you look at it, you look at Temari with a concerned look. "What if I pick out a girl?" "Don't be silly! This one's only for boys! Just pick one!" Ino yelled from across the room. You always wondered why she was so loud, but she was a good friend to you, so it didn't matter. You let out a small sigh and stare at the color it was:


Red

"So what color did you get?!" Temari asked, curious. You stare at the paper, a huge red star drawn in the middle.

"Red," You sigh, crumpling it and shoving it in your pocket. You looked around the room and saw Jiraiya stand up, causing you to let out a small scream. Hell no!, you screamed in your head. Though, you felt a tap on your shoulder and turned around to see Neji, letting out a sigh of relief. He sighs and walks over to the closet, immediately taking refuge in a corner. You were about to refuse going in there with him, but Temari pushed you in, knowing how you felt about him.

Ever since you talked to him for the first time a few years ago, you always had a small crush on him. You never told anyone but Temari about it---well, that was a lie. Temari actually caught you staring at Neji when he was training and wouldn't let you live it down. At first you would always deny it, but after a while you slowly began to accept it. Temari slammed the door shut behind you, giving you a thumb's up before you turned around and let out a small huff. You kind of stood there awkwardly in front of Neji, unsure of what to do. He didn't bother moving; he just sat there with his eyes closed and arms folded neatly on his chest.

This isn't going anywhere, you thought, frowning a bit. You rubbed your fingers on your temples closing your eyes, though, when you opened them, Neji was standing right in front of you, his eyes blaring into your own.

"Listen, _______. I know this is a bit weird, but you don't have to do anything you don't want to," Neji told you, he tried to sound calm, but there was a bit of anxiety in his voice. You stared at him, noticing that he thought you didn't want to kiss him, and you laughed a bit. Neji looked back at you with a confused face. "Why're you laughing?"
"Because I want to kiss you," You grinned, suddenly pressing your lips against his. Neji stared at you in shock for a moment, unsure of what had just happened. When he finally processed the whole thing in his head, he began to kiss you back, his arms wrapping around your waist, pulling you closer to him. His tongue ran across your bottom lip, begging you to let him explore your mouth and you let him. Neji pressed you against the door, his tongue trying to gain dominance over yours, but since you were determined to win, you fought back. After a few minutes, you two broke apart, gasping for air.

"I didn't see that coming," Neji admitted, not mentioning anything about 'destiny'. You let out another small laugh and crashed your lips onto his again, catching him off guard, causing you both to fall to the ground. You felt Neji's hand run up your leg, stopping on your upper thigh. He didn't touch anything too personal, but you could tell he wanted to do something more than just making out.

"Time's up!" Temari yelled, her eyes immediately bulging at what she saw. She knew you liked Neji, but she knew, or she thought she knew, he liked TenTen. Guess not, she figured, having to pull you two apart. You stood up, walking out of the closet in a daze. You couldn't believe you just kissed Neji! You turned around and gave him a quick glance as he sat there, licking his lips as he grinned in amazement.

---

Naruto: Man! If only destiny blessed me so well!

Sasuke: Who knew he had it in him to kiss her?

Rock Lee: Kissing is so youthful!

Kiba: Finally! We all know they liked each other.

Shino: ...

Shikamaru: *sleeping*

Chouji: *munches on chips* She's pretty hot.

Neji: Destiny brought us together... luckily it wasn't like hell.

Sai: She's a good fighter... though, I wouldn't mind kissing her.

Gai: She would be perfect for Lee!
Kakashi: She's a great ninja, really smart, so is Neji.

Asuma: Her dad used to smoke with me.

Kurenai: An excellent student, I'm just glad she finally got the boy she liked.

Tsunade: She's so cute with him! How I'd like to bet those two would end up together.

Iruka: *sigh* I used to date her sister; they look so much a like.

Yamato: She's a very nice girl, she could be the next Hokage if she wanted, though, I think she rather spend time with other things.

Jiraiya: If only she was older... though, her sister is---

Kakashi: Jiraiya?
Jiraiya: Yes?
Kakashi: They're both too young for you!

TenTen: ...I can't believe she kissed Neji!
Ino: Aw, I think they're cute together!

Sakura: ______ was blushing like mad... wait, is Neji blushing, too?!
Hinata: I wish I had enough courage like her.

Pein: She's a very good ninja, just like her father, maybe we'll take her in one day... if she leaves that boy.

Itachi: We can't have someone attached to anyone---in any way.

Pein: ...We could kill the boy.

Deidara: Her body's a real work of art, look at those curves.

Hidan: *busy praying*

Kisame: I wish to cut her up.

Zetsu: After Kisame cuts her up, I'll eat her in pieces.

(Unnamed): She would be good to bring into the Akatsuki... if she was more evil.

Tobi: Tobi's a good boy!

Deidara: So?
Tobi: Tobi want to kiss pretty girl!
Deidara: Not until I kiss her first!

Orochimaru: How I'd love to have her as my toy.

Kabuto: She's all right; her dad almost became Hokage, didn't he?

Haku: She thought I was a girl once and told me I was very pretty.

Zabuza: I think Haku has a small crush on her, well, who doesn't?

Haku: *sigh* Would you stop bringing it up?

Gaara: *death glare*

Kankuro: Man, she's so fine; too bad she picked Neji... I would have done more than just kiss her.

Temari: Finally! I was wondering when those two would pull it off.


Purple

You scratched your head and stared at the purple "X" written on it. At first you scrunched up your face, scanning the room to see what boy it could have been. Temari glanced over your shoulder and grinned, looking straight at Kiba, who was playing with Akamaru.
"Kiba, you're up!" She yelled, catching his attention. Kiba immediately turned to look at Temari, then at you and grinned. He stood up and walked over to you, Akamaru buried in the hood of his jacket. He walked passed you, giving you a small wink before walking into the closet, causing your cheeks to burn a little. Temari placed her hands on her hips and looked at you. "Don't want to keep him waiting."
You sighed and walked into the closet, closing it behind you. Once it was closed, Akamaru jumped on top of you, causing you to fall onto the floor on your butt. The dog looked at you with big eyes, licking your cheek. You laughed at how cute he was and pet him, pulling him closer to your face so you could kiss his nose. When you placed Akamaru down, Kiba was kneeling right in front you, a small grin plastered on his face. You tilted your head a little to the left, making a cute facial expression, though, you didn't do it on purpose; it was just always a habit.

"You're cute when you try not to be," Kiba complimented, the back of his hand pulling your head closer to him. You felt his lips press against yours gently, trying to be as calm as you were. After a few moments you wrapped your arms around his neck, deepening the kiss. Kiba's hands roamed your body, going up your shirt with such slow gentle movements. You sighed into the kiss, eventually breaking it. He looked at you confused before you pushed him to the ground, landing on top of him. You wanted more than just that.

You pressed your lips onto Kiba's again, feeling him trying to take off your shirt. You broke the kiss a few seconds so he could do so before kissing again. Your hands roamed his this time, your hands resting on his stomach, where you felt his muscles contract every time you two moved. Kiba took off his shirt, both of you on top of each other shirtless. He stood up a second, locking the door before continuing what you were doing.

After about an hour and half you two walked out sweaty, your hair looking like a total mess. You tried to brush it with your fingers as best as you could, but it didn't work that well. Everyone stared at you two wide-eyed when you came out; noticing that instead of you having your shirt on, it was Kiba's. Your sister had a fit when she found out what happened, but secretly congratulated you. You took a seat between Sakura and Ino, both of them asking what happened. You blushed and looked away, only to end up staring into Kiba's. He gave you a small wink before talking to Shino as if nothing happened.

Naruto: You know, something tells me they...

Sasuke: Naruto, they did.

Rock Lee: They took so long; I didn't think they would come out!

Kiba: Whoa. (He's amazed.)

Shino: Kiba you hound, you weren't supposed to do that.

Shikamaru: *yawns* They took forever.

Chouji: *munches on cookies* Maybe they were eating.

Neji: Those two were meant to be together... they have a bright future.

Sai: So this is what people do for fun these days; who knew?

Gai: So young! Yet, so youthful!
Kakashi: I never taught her that while training.

Asuma: ...Okay, that was... wow.

Kurenai: Okay, if you're all looking at me, I did not teach Kiba that.

Tsunade: Young love, how cute.

Iruka: Not to long ago I use to baby-sit and teach her!

Yamato: Training is going to be harder now, I have to keep her eyesight away from the boy.

Jiraiya: I should put that into my research... *sly grin*

TenTen: I can't believe they... Oh my gosh!
Ino: ______, your hair is such a mess. *helps you brush it*

Sakura: I can't believe you went with Kiba!
Hinata: *sigh* Now my teammate's going to talk endlessly about it.

Pein: I've never seen her before, though, I heard her sister looks just as good as her.

Itachi: Didn't you use to like her sister?

Pein: Use to are the key words.

Deidara: I don't really know her, but if only I could have action like those two.

Hidan: *sigh* This has got to be against my religion.

Kisame: She looks tasty.

Zetsu: I agree, though, I wouldn't mind being alone with someone as fine as her.

(Unnamed): I don't know who she is.

Tobi: What did they do Deidara-sempai?!

Deidara: ...Something you'll never get to do.
Tobi: Fly to the moon?
Deidara: ...You could say that.

Orochimaru: A perfect toy indeed.

Kabuto: Teenagers these days, I didn't even do that

Haku: There's no use talking about them.

Zabuza: Haku's just jealous because guys hit on him all the time.

Haku: *glare* That's not true.

Gaara: *death glare*

Kankuro: Who knew the boy had it in him?! I would have done the same thing.

Temari: I hope her sister doesn't kill me.


Orange

"Orange," You mutter, glancing around the room to see who you picked. No one moved, making you frown. Temari suggested you pick another one, but once you stuck your hand back in the bag, Pein, the leader of the Akatsuki, grabbed your wrist, causing you to look at him. You both stared at each other blankly for a few seconds before you freed yourself from his tight grasp, walking into the closet rubbing your wrist.

Shit, I'm dead, you think to yourself, hearing the door click shut behind you. You were never scared of the Akatsuki, you really weren't, and they knew it, too. Though, you always felt uneasy around Pein. You only saw him a few times, often going to your house to talk to your dad about murder plots. Your dad wasn't evil, it was just his job. No one actually knew what he did except for your family and the Akatsuki; most people just thought he helped your grandmother in her store.

You felt Pein's chest press against your back, causing you to tense up. He wrapped an arm around your waist, hugging you slightly from behind. You were going to protest to him, telling him that he was a little older than you, but within a flat second he spun you around, making you look him in the eyes. You were caught in a daze staring in them, both of your eyes locking, never turning to move. You never minded a guy with piercing, well, actually you thought they were pretty hot, especially on Pein, but you would never admit it out loud. Heck, it was even hard admitting it in your head.

"Pein," You managed to let out. Your voice wasn't trembling; it was more on a warning side. "I don't think this is right---"
"No one will find out," He cut you off, grinning just barely. His arm around you became a little tighter, trying to dominate you as if he didn't want anyone other than him to touch you. You didn't feel threatened though; you thought it felt nice.

"Yeah, but wouldn't this affect... your job?" You asked, feeling a little odd that your chests were pressed up against each other. He shook his head and leaned in to kiss you, but you turned your head quickly, causing him to kiss your cheek. He looked at you with a slight glare and you grinned, wrapping your arms around his neck. You pulled his head down so that your lips were right by his ear and whispered, "I'm in control."
That surprised him, seeing as how he looked at you with slightly confused eyes. You grinned and pulled him into a kiss, your tongue running along his own. You both tried to fight over dominance, but knowing him, you let him dominate you. You felt Pein push you up against the wall, your legs wrapped around his waist. He pressed his lips harder onto yours, biting at your bottom lip. You moaned into him, trying to bring him closer. Your hand ran up his shirt, stopping at his chest as he covered you two with his coat. Pein's hands were roaming your body, begging for more than just a kiss. Though, after minutes of endless dominance over you, Temari and Kankuro opened the door, staring at you two with wide eyes. All she saw was Pein's back, his coat still covering you two. He looked you in the eyes, giving you a small peck on the lips before putting you down. He walked out of the closet as if nothing happened, his face blank as ever, except for that hint of annoyance from when Temari interrupted what could have been more than a kiss.

Damn, he's good, you thought, straightening out your shirt. You walked out a few seconds after him, Temari looking at you as if you'd gone crazy. You sighed and smiled slightly at her. "Nothing happened, we were just hugging. You know, gotta love a cuddler."

You felt Pein glare at you when you called him a cuddler, causing you to laugh. You knew he wouldn't do anything to you after that. Though, two weeks later when he came to your house to meet with your dad, you could feel him eyeing your every move when you walked around the house, where he eventually caught you in your bedroom alone.

Naruto: I can't believe she kissed the leader of the AKATSUKI!

Sasuke: As long as he wasn't my brother, I'm fine. They're all bastards though.

Rock Lee: He isn't youthful at all, and isn't he... old?

Kiba: He creeps me out, though; I wouldn't mind having ________ around me.

Shino: ...Fooling around with the enemy isn't good at all.

Shikamaru: *blank stare* I can't believe she had the guts to go with him.

Chouji: Wow, she came out alive!

Neji: They can't be together, their destinies are way different. (He's slightly jealous.)

Sai: So he's the Akatsuki leader...

Gai: Isn't he just a few years younger than me?
Kakashi: She's a very smart student, but flirting with the enemy is strictly prohibited.

Asuma: *lights cigarette* I wonder what her sister would say.

Kurenai: I'm surprised he hasn't killed her, isn't that what the Akatsuki do?

Tsunade: I don't like that guy, but the girl is cute, she deserves someone... less evil.

Iruka: I thought I taught her fooling around with the enemy was bad.

Yamato: She's an excellent student, though; I wish she would come to training more often.

Jiraiya: A bad boy and a good girl? That would make a fine story!

TenTen: She... he... what?!
Ino: She had more guts than I did.

Sakura: I was so scared she'd end up dead when we opened that door.
Hinata: He... he's a bit... scary.

Pein: (No comment, he's keeping his thoughts to himself)

Itachi: Isn't she little to young for you?

Pein: *glare* Age is just a number.

Deidara: Well, if leader likes her, I guess she's okay.

Hidan: I wonder if I could sacrifice her...

Pein: *death glare*

Hidan: ...Kidding.

Kisame: I think she's one of the first girls to ever take a liking to his piercings.

Zetsu: I don't know why he keeps on insisting we watch over the girl, she's already a good ninja.

(Unnamed): She should join the Akatsuki, she could be the next Hokage if she didn't spend all that time in her grandmother's store.

Tobi: Leader got the pretty girl.

Orochimaru: A perfect trap to bring the Akatsuki into.

Kabuto: I tried fighting with her once and she almost killed me, but Pein stopped her. I don't know why though, he certainly wasn't helping me.

Haku: Such a pretty little thing, too bad that guy took her.

Zabuza: She is quite cute, too bad she wasn't older.

Haku: She has a sister...

Zabuza: Really? *huge grin*

Gaara: She's the only person that truly cares. (He's likes you because you helped him once when the Akatsuki tried to kill him for the monster in him. You begged Pein to leave him alone because you overheard his past and felt a connection with him.)

Kankuro: What's there to say? Did you see her body?! Smoking hot--- *Gaara glare at him*

Temari: I wanted her to marry Gaara, but it looks like she likes Pein. *Gaara glares at her, too*


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