Bryan Donahue\ Fate

alive-tonight Yeah, this is first attempt ever at writing a story. I'm all new to this and I know this story sucks, but hopefully they'll get better as I actually learn what the hell I'm doing :]

Created by immunity25 on Monday, December 10, 2007

"Maggie!!......MAGGIEEEE!! Hurry up we're going to be LATE! And I am NOT going to miss seeing Paul DiGiovanni because of your damn slowness!!" shouted Christina as she was walking out the door.
"Oh I'm coming geez keep your pants on, you think meeting Bryan Donahue is any less important to me?" said Maggie
"Shut up and get in the car" she said as she smiled.
"Hehe, Boys Like Girls here we come for the second time." Maggie said with a huge grin showing all her recently brace removed teeth.
They arrived at the concert about an hour before it started. Yeah, they were fans. They got their tickets and stood in line, but it was worth it. Then at 7:01, it began.
The crowd was roaring, the place was a lot bigger than the first place they had seen them in concert. They all walked out and Maggie swore she saw a saint on stage. It was Bryan Donahue. They screamed as they played all their favorite songs until they couldn't scream any longer. Finally when it was over, they headed back for the signing.
"OMG WHERE'S PAULL!!! Christina said in a type of hyperventelating voice. Maggie sort of smiled and rolled her eyes but that's when she saw him. She could've spotted him out of a crowd with a million people in it. There was Bryan, her adreneline shot up so much her head ached. But that's when she heard:
"Oh look Maggie, there's Brya.....PAUL!!" And just like that Christina dove into the crowd of people after Paul Digiovanni who was trying to sneak back to his dressing room hoping not to be noticed. But so much for that.
Maggie walked forward to meet him, her heart in her throat. She stopped dead in front of him and almost though about going back, but before she could he looked at her and saw what she was waiting for. After all she was holding a camera.
He smiled and said "Would you like a picture?" She kind of let out this squeak that sounded like a yes. He pulled her close and she swore she was going to faint. Being taller than she was, he took the picture. Then he looked at her with a funny look and said: "Little bit tense are we? and smiled
She let out her breath and said "Yeah, sorry" while smiling and laughing softly.
Immediatley after she smiled, he said "Wow, your teeth are beautiful."
Which made her blush even more (Like she wasn't blushing enough already) and said "Oh thank you, I just got my braces off"
He smiled. She looked around him and noticed a mob of girls going "Bryan can we have your picture pleaseeeee" and he was ignoring them, all he was doing was staring down at her, and all she could do was look at him.
Than he said, "Hey how would you like to meet the rest of the band, I'm guessing by the Boys Like Girls shirt you're wearing and the fact you got here an hour early for the concert, that you're a fan"
"Ohh, that would be wonderful" she exclaimed a little too excitedly.
"Did you come here alone?" He asked curiously
"Uh, no I came here with my friend who's...around here somewhere. She caught glimpse of Paul and took off after him." she said
"Oh great, another girl after Paul. There's been so many of those, we're talking about hiring him his own personal security gaurd" he laughed
"Ohh, if she ever gets hold of him, he'll need more than that" They both laughed, smiles never leaving their faces.
I got my hands in my pocket and my head in a cloud <3
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