Natame Kurama Story

Created by Uchihagirl13 on Friday, January 04, 2008

yea im brit thankx for deciding to readmy story i got alot of good comments about it so i hope you like it oh and it was too long so i had to make it into 2 parts.
oh and quizzila might have deleated my awesome pictures so i will have to make another one with the pictures in it k have fun reading ^__^
Natame
The story of the greatest shinobi who ever live

If you havent guessed this is me I go by the name of Natame uchiha
This is me at the age 4, I was hated by everybody they locked me up for days at a time when they let me out it was only to beat me or feed me but at the age of 5 for an unknown reason to me I had a feeling that everybody but me knew...but when will somebody tell me...when will I stop being hated...that is a question for another time I guess? I have a feeling I will find out soon enough...now the darkness surrounds me as I get beaten slowly till I got knocked out
I was so powerful by the age of 6 years this is how close I was to death they shot but for some reason I formed a purple barrier and he died.... WHAT AM I!!! SOMEBODY TELL ME PLEASE! I yelled in to the night sky! Noticing my hair turned purple from the barrier I formed now I sat next to the masked ninja who tried to kill me. I then fainted on the floor not even knowing why...as I woke up I was back in my cell with new found cuts and gashes in my skin dripping out blood I knew eventually I was going to die here and I didn't even turn ten...I then felt weak and I blacked out while my best friend started to beat me telling me she hated me cause the masked ninja I killed was her father and her mom died in the attack of the nine tails...

This is me now at the age of 7 today I am going to set out to find out what happened cause I cant remember why or how got these scars all over my body or even who I really am cause all I can remember was somebody crying and saying you are not natame uchiha you are the devil's daughter! (Not really she say that cause I killed people) I hate you!!! I hate you! Echoed through my head as my best friend forever in the whole world was beating me
I hate you Natame kurama!!
Wait what im not an uchiha was that the secret! I then got knocked into a comma that lasted months. Thats when I woke up yesterday and thats why im going to find answers!
As I walked out people stopped and stared cause I had so many gashes and scars no my body or thats what I think!
Some girl comes up and says "wow the guys really like you today huh satame maybe its because you wore purple and dyed your hair!" the girl said (this is her)

Another girl comes running up saying "hey Rukia!!" with a smile on her face (this is her)

"Oh ya hey satame...Wait Satame then who is this!! Rukia said
im really getting bored of this I said -_- im Natame kurama and I need to find answers to my past so can I go now! I said
"wait you said your last name is kurama right?"Rukia said,
"Ya so what I said
"wait thats my last name! Are you by any chance my long lost sister?"
Satame questionly hoped
"maybe I lost my memory I just woke up from a comma today and cant remember anything only that day where my friend...wait why am I telling you this? I said
"0-0 OMG! You are my sister!!"Satame said happily!"
(-_- Wow only here for an hour and I meet a whore and apparently my long lost sister, wow this is a great day!) *note sarcasm*
"wow now can you tell me what I need to know satame." I said
"wait can I get a picture?" Rukia said.
No! I said
sure satame said!
You need a happy pill! Satame said
I have one Rukia said!
*Makes me eat it*
^-^ lets take the picture now! I said
this is how the picture came out!

Oh ha I got something important to tell you now that I remembered! Satame said
*we sit and talk for hours*
(it takes to long so I will sum it up)
I natame kurama
The Kurama clan is a clan of extremely skilled genjutsu users, introduced in the anime. This talent in genjutsu is due to the unnamed kekkei genkai that the clan possesses. However, once every few generations, a member of the clan will be born with such enormous skill in genjutsu that their illusions can actually produce tangible effects that occur in reality. They were originally one of the more prominent clans in Konohagakure, but their numbers have severely dwindled.
And im that one person
oh and dad told me to give you this if I ever found you. *Evil grin* stabs on my heart *poof* what a clone? Well she is the best shinobi of the moon village well I have no purpose I am tired of this world! These are my last words I hate you Natame Kurama!! And I always have!
Um...the happy pills should ware off so I should be going now oh but you need to find a true husband to be and a true friend only then can you really extend to your max. And you cant run its your destiny and you cant die till then so dont even try it.
Oh and here is your fathers real present its the mark of gojou (hatred) which will go away once you find both people. Oh and it will glow once you find one but you can lose them so be careful cause you only got one shot. Be careful and you can read minds now that you opened stage one of your mark there are 4 stages the rest you will figure out in time. Rukia said as she disappeared and floated away
0_0 k she was a guardian angel hehehe she was ugly anyways If you heard me sorry!!!

And set out into the forest for a true friend. When a girl (she looks like this)
she was running as fast as she could. (Wow I will try it on her first I thought) *huff* huh huff I got to get away dang why did I steal his ramen! * (0-0 ok kinda weird) so when I turned around and started to walk away she bumped right into me "whose ramen did you steal? I said,
"I didn't steal anybodys ramen!
Wait how did you know? Suki said
"0-0 um im a mind reader I said
"really cool im suki! suki said
" ^-^ im Natame Kurama" I said,
"Why did you say your first name first?"Suki said,
"Why didn't you say your last name?"
Those are meant for another day!
Then the mark started to glow
yes ^-^ I didn't have to go far either! I said
"._.? what" suki said
"for another day I said
"um...are you a friend" I said
(im going to read her mind I thought) *umm.. I really didn't have many friends myself only danna*
"really me to I gotten beaten" I said
"dont read my mind" suki said
"but fine I will tell you about my past" suki said.
(Time skip)
"you are tokudan shinobi!!" I shouted
"shhhh I didn't even tell deidara danna im only telling you cause I trust you." suki said
"thats worst than mine im going to try to get this curse mark off of me so I can become stronger than anybody I am already as stronger than the moon village." I said
"sorry but this mark is said that im to be the strongest shinobi"she said
"well...I will become the 2nd strongest! and I will try to defeat you one day when I get strong I said.
"I will show you my house"suki said
"ok ^-^" I said (maybe he will be my husband)
)hen we got there I didn't expect deidara to be a really cute boy age 13.i thought)
"dont get your hopes up!" suki said
"how did you know? are you a mind reader too?" I said
"no but when I said his name you started drooling" suki said
(I blushed and wiped the drool away noticing deidara watching the whole thing)
"um natame can I talk to you in the kitchen" suki asked
" ^-^ sure" I said
well ya I will tell you the rest of my past I wanted to before but ya I didn't want to ^-^" suki said
(time skip)
"wow that is bad" I said
suki started crying
you didnt need to tell me if you didn't want to I said
no thats what true friends are for right suki said
oh the mark started glowing
"oh hey suki you want to come see me new power" I said
sure we can spar" suki said
we go outside and start fighting
"wow I have water based jutsu" I said(that makes sense cause im from the whirlpool country)
when sasuke comes running
"can we help you" suki said without looking
awkward pause
whatever then" suki said
wait who are you guys? sasuke said
"im suki" suki said
"im Natame Ku...just natame" I said
(I wonder what he is thinking?)
*sasuke-wow that suki girl is strong I like her I dont know about that other girl*
what im strong too!!" I said
"am I missing something?" suki said
"duck butt here likes you I read his mind" I said
suki blushed slightly
sasuke flushed red
"is that so?" suki said
"of course not I just met you" he said still blushing
"eeeeeeeeeewwwwwwww!! gross duck butt how can you think that you just met!" I said
sasuke's mind (crap why did she say that I just thought it crap*
"heard that!" I said
"fuck yourself!" sasuke said annoyed
"somebody is grumpy!" I said teasing
"you want to fight!" sasuke challenged
"fine but you are going to lose duck butt!!" I yelled
"STOP! dont fight gosh what do I have to do to get you to stop fighting!" suki said
"I hate you!" I said while pouting
"whatever bye suki and.....Natame."
sasuke said as he started to walk off (me- this is not part of the quiz but suki's last name is shizuka I found that out right now)
~*Quiz start*~
"hey whats that supposed to mean!!" I shouted
"nothing I just dont like you now dont talk to me anymore you are weak and worthless!" sasuke said
"you did not just say that!! you want to fight uchiha!!" I said
"no point but fine" sasuke said
we both get into a fighting stance
ready uchiha!! I yelled.
(the next few parts may contain mature language such as cursing)

"who are you calling weak and worthless now huh!!!"i yelled in victory!!
He had an OMG! face because he had no scratches yet
"1...2...3..."I said
on three he was like
"uuugggg! how did you do that!! you didnt touch me!!"sasuke moaned in pain
then dont mess with me you bitch I scowled "ha if you didnt act like a dumbass to start with mabye we could have been friends" I said
"like I would be friends with a dirty whore you bitch!!"sasuke yell
"wow watch your language you bad mouth so now we are enemies!! You better watch out I can kick your ass anytime!" I said
"ya right you just got lucky!" sasuke yelled
Like I even care I spat.
Do you have to hate everyone just because your brother killed your clan!! I said starting to tear up.
how did you know that!! Answer me! sasuke yelled.
I have mind reading powers! And why wont you answer my question why do you hate everyone just because of what your brother did!! I said with tears dripping down my face. I dont hate everyone I just dont trust them! I cant trust anybodynot after what itachi did he said with sadness in his voice. thats so sadbut I had it worst I cant trust anybody anymore but I gave people one more chance and they tell me the truth!! I yell now crying. why are you the one crying if I have the problem? sasuke asked. because you had a great life compared to mine I have the freakin scars to prove it!!! I yelled crying hard. (sasuke's thoughts: wow she must have had a bad lifeI know that wasnt the only reason she was cryingwait did she ..oh no she read my thoughts!! She knows why she is cryingI should make it up to herWAIT! Why should I help her for some reason I fell like I have to) hmm..i have to go I have stuff to dosuki dont follow me I need to be alone. I said trying not to cry anymore. (sasuke was luckydamn why do I have to get the crappy life!! I said as I walked away.
*~*~*Time Skip:1 hour later*~*~*
Hoping suki didnt follow. As I arrived at my secret place that nobody knows about I go here at special times like now
I started to cry againdo I have feelings for him how did I do that I should tell suki...but I dont want to hurt hernot like they did to me!! Im not going to be like thatI will see what happens in the next couple of yearsyea. That should be enough yearsI go to the bush next to me and I dig out my knifeI held it up to my heart*stab*I fell to the groundI black out or what I think I did anyways

*Sasukes point of view*

Damn why did I just sit there!! I should have ran after her! I said.
she might have done what I would have done! I said in a worry.
lucky she left a trail I said
~*~ Time Skip: 2 hours~*~
*Natames point of view*
(I woke up in the hospital)
how did I get here? I asked how did I get here? I asked wanting answers!!
(lady at the hospital): umm..well actually that boy kiba inuzuka found you and brang you here..
oh ok thank you can I go now? I asked yet another question.
(lady) : no! you are in critical condition you shouldnt even be moving right now!
hmmpis suki here? I asked
(lady) yes do you want me to get her?
yes please I said
*suki comes in*
hey oh my gosh! What did you do?! suki yelled questionly
ummwellyou seeI will tell you later!! I said
no you tell me now or I wont heal you! she said
I went to my.*mumbles* and *mumbles* and kiba inuzuka brought me here!! I said
hmmp dont tell me all the story then but I will heal you anyways! suki said
yea! (chibi face) I said

TIME SKIP: 2 days
Sukis point of view
Why wouldnt she tell me? I wonder what it was hmm whatever I have to go meet my new team!
Natames POV
at least she didnt find out!! my new power must be kept secret and nobody must knownobody will ever know its my secret forever!! I said making a promise
now im going to go meet that kiba guy! I said

(some guy): umm thats my name you looking for me?
Umm yea you kiba inuzuka? I asked
((Some guy): yes thats my name! so what do you need me for?
I just wanted to thank youfor saving me I said
Well it really wasnt me sasuke found you and gave you to me and asked for me to take you too the hospital so it was really sasuke! kiba said
oh k thank you for telling me I said walking away to find sasuke
TIME SKIP: 3 hours (its now 5:00 pm in the naruto world)
hmm I cant find him! I said getting mad
find who? a dark voice called
who are you? What do you want? I asked in no fear of what might happen
im a friend dont worry the man said
(I wonder if I can trust this guy I will give him one chance)
k what do you want I asked deciding to trust him
I am pein the leader of the Akatsuki Organization pein said
(oh this is what he looks like)

(some girl drew this and it was the best pic I could find)
*BACK TO THE STORY*
what do you want from me? I said
simple I just want you to join my organizationpein said
why should I whats in it for me? I said
you can have world domination and control over all these pathetic humans! he said trying to bribe me
fine, when do I have to go? I asked tomorrow morning we also have another opening so if you have a friend as strong or stronger than you convince her/him to join I will send 2 members to get you I see you have already met deidara he is a fellow member of this organization. Leader said one questionwhat do I call you? I asked you can call me pein or sir leader thats a choice I only gave Konanbefore she died he said
I got itI have a perfect new recruit her name is suki I said
PerfectI will see you tomorrow along with suki pein said before he disappeared.
TIME SKIP:1 hour (now its 7:30)
Ummsuki I have to go to this Akatsuki organization I was wondering if you wanted to joinpein said it would be perfect if you could come and I dont want to go alone!! I said
Natame its not a good time I have to go somewhere right now I will answer you tomorrow morning! k suki said
ok just think about itthey are an evil organization so we have to watch out! I said
k got to go bye!! suki said in a rush.
TIME SKIP: tomorrow morning
Sukis POV
hmmgood morningoh right sasuke left to go with orochimaru that b@$tard why did he go oh right I have to answer natame I said
I guess I will go I said
TIME SKIP: 2 hours later
NATAMES POV
yea you will come join! ^-^ I said J
yea I guess she said
He said 2 members will pick us up I wonder if one of them will become my true husband I said
I doubt it. Their evil! suki said
Hmphyou never know! I said wondering
look it that them! I said
I think sothey walk slow!! suki said
use your telekinesis to bring the here! I said
fine!* suki said *brings them to us *
member 1:dont do that again!!
Member 2:shut up deidaralets go I hate waiting!
Deidara: fine Sasori danna
hey deidara!I said
hey Natame! dei said
deidara! Lets get going! Sasori said angered
fine danna who is going to ride with me and who is going with danna! dei said
Suki you want to answer the fun way! I said sure
(Sukis thoughts: k who do you wanna go with? I want to go with danna so you get to know Sasori! ^-^)
k fine with me suki! I said
Sasori and dei:? what?
I have the power to read minds! And she goes with danna and I go with sori!
sori? What kind of name is that! Sasori said
its your new name! and your gonna love it! I said I guess I dont have a choice! Fine come with me and deidara you go ahead with your bird. Sori said
ok danna and you have to be nice if you want natame to love you backdeidara said teasing thats silly deidara I dont love natame! Sasori said I just met her! he said
hey suki this sounds a lot like when we first met sasuke! And he likes youbecause I read his mind! I said
did you say sasuke itachi hates sasuke and yea im not getting into the whole storydeidara said
well we better get going! I hate waiting! Sasori said
TIME SKIP: half way to the hideout
umm Sasori can I ask you something? I asked
you just did but ask another one Sasori said trying to make a joke
well I can see the future andoh never mind! I said
fine even though im dieing to know not that you said thatand you can see the futurethat would be a great help to the Akatsuki. Sasori said
umm thanks and what do you really look like? I asked
well that I will show you another dayand how did you know that this wasnt what I really looked like? he asked
well deidara told me about the Akatsuki well some of them anyways I said
oh umm what did he say about me? Sasori asked
Oh he said you are fun, nice at times, smart, and you hate waiting and I already seen all of those qualities in you. (Natames thoughts: no why did I say that stupid stupid me! )
(Sasoris thoughts: I hope natame doesnt read my mind as I thinkshe is so prettyand she thinks im nice, smart, and fun! I think I might like this girl wait this is the Akatsuki and I can love anybodywe are forbiddenyou know what I dont care anymore I will test this girl and see what I think I hope she passes my test she is already im the Akatsuki so she passed the first one!)
oh thank you he said blushing under his puppet so I couldnt see it
oh and just to let you know you and suki are the only girls in the Akatsuki so guys might try to hit on you so watch out Sasori said ok thanks for the heads up! ^-^ I knew you were nice! Suki thought deidara was lying! I said
are we almost their Sasori? I asked hoping we were almost there.
kind of we are an hour away why you tired? he asked
yea kinda its like a desert and im not usually used to walking far distances I stated
you want me to carry you on my back? he proposed (soris thoughts: why did I say that now I hope she didnt think love her!not yet I cant let her know)
umm..you will do that? Um sure that would be great I hope im not heavy
trust me you cant be as heavy as deidara! T-T he hurt me! Sasori said
I giggled as I got on his back your funny when you get the chance too! ^-^ I said
*he blushed again and I couldnt see it*
TIME SKIP: when we arrive at the Akatsuki
k we are here natame. He said
ok where is suki and deidara? I asked already in the hideout knowing deidara he got lost so we have to find them he said
k we better get going! ^-^ I stated

TIME SKIP: after we find deidara and suki
hey deidara and suki! ^-^ you guys have fun! I said
well we got lost -_- again! deidara said
danna you better get it right next time! I dont wanna get lost! suki yelled
Sasori remind me never let deidara lead me into the Akatsuki without a map! I said
well I wanna see where I get to sleep! Im tired! I said
how can you be tired when you rode on my back half of the time!Sasori said
suki and dei: natame you did what 0.o with Sasori!
Me and Sasori:whatever! We are just tired!!
I know 2 people who are really grumpy! and need sleep!
Sasori and me dont need sleep!!
natame I think you like Sasori!! suki yelled and all of the members heard.
All the members except sori and dei:WHO LIKES SASORI! o.0
I dont like him I just met him! I said trying to cover it up.
then why are you blushing! she said IIIwait why are all you guys watching me! It not a soap opera or something!! Gosh people go away!! I yell covering it upfor now until my vision comes true
enough! Natame and suki come to my office now pein said
Come on suki lets go I said
TIME SKIP: when we get our rings and other stuff
yea im an Akatsuki now! ^-^ I said putting on my ring
you get konans ring and suki you get kisames ring because you killed him you shouldnt be here but you are strong and you accepted to join pein said
hehehe I gots his sword ^-^ I said
ok since kisame is gone suki you will be itachis partner and natame I will make you my partner because zetsu would eat you and konan is dead suki you have a choice you can live in itachis room or live with another random member. Pein said
um I think itachi might rape me so I am going to take my chances with another member suki said taking her chances.
well lucky you get to chose who you live with and you cant live with natame pein said
ummI dont know anybody other then deidara so he would be a good enough choicesuki said
then natame suki just made it so you have to live with Sasoriif you dont like your choice then you would have to live with me knowing you. It would be best if you live with Sasori you already got to know each other so you need to meet the other members Sasori and deidara will introduce you to them now you both may go. Pein said
Suki and me: hai!
TIME SKIP: 10 min later

Wow I look good as an Akatsuki member! ^-^ I said
This is what I look like but with purple hair and it longer

come on suki! Lets go meet the other members!! I said eager to see them.
gosh im coming! suki said
hey Sasori hi deidara! ^-^ I said happily
(sasoris thoughts: wow she looks hot!)
hey can we go meet the other members! I said
k lets go deidara said
some of them are creepy! deidara said
and like we arent natame and suki are the only normal people here! Sasori said
whatever I said im tired now I said while yawning
TIME SKIP: after we met all the Akatsuki members
(if you dont know all of the members then too bad!)
oh I forgot to tell you guys deidara you and suki will live in the same room! I said.
who gets the room with me then? Sasori asked
oh you get to live with natame in the same room! suki said
we all win! I said im tired im going to bedum where is it -_-? I said
I will show you Sasori said leading me to his now our room.
k thanks umm there is only one bedlooks like we sleep together! I said slightly happy.
Then I basically fall on to the bed and fall asleep dreaming of the day I had.
Sasoris POV
(my thoughts: wow I got lucky I got to sleep with the prettiest girl in the worldnow that you mention it I am tired now I will go to bed)
TIME SKIP: the next morning
Natames POV
(my thoughts: wow I had a good sleep! I wonder where Sasori went?)
I then get up and change my clothes and go look for Sasori
hey deidara where is Sasori? I asked
He said he had to go somewhere and he didnt even say where. Deidara said
k thanks for telling me! I said as I walked away
TIME SKIP: when Sasori came back
hey Sasori! I said happily
hi how are you doing? Sasori asked nicely
im doing great! I love the Akatsuki so far! I can get used to this! I said
hey Sasori can I see you in your true form? I asked
ummsure I didnt let anybody see me in my true form not even deidara and we have been partners for 2 years so you are lucky I have known you for 1 day but I trust you. He said come into our room he said as I followed
I then sit on the bed as I wait eager to see what he looks like does he look ugly or hot I need to know!
k you ready he asked
yes I want to see what you look like. I said waiting
I watch as he gets out of his puppet to show me his true form.
see this is what I really look like Sasori said hoping would hug him and junk like that.
wow you trusted me this much you only known me for a day! I said wondering why he did this.
IInever mind I will tell you another day.sasori said
ummSasori can I ask you 2 questions? I asked
yea you used 1 now for the other one. he said
umm since you are a puppet have you ever wanted to be human again? I asked
well normally no but lately I have been regretting what I have done and I want to be human againbut that will never happensorry im going to go for a walk. He said depressed like.

Sasoris POV
Why did I do this? Why did she do this to me? Im not supposed to love im not capable of it.or am I? how was she able to make me have emotions? I dont have any am I getting them back? I need to know? I want to know more about her I need to I dont have a heart but its still theresomewhere and its taking over I need to tell hershesheshe is to amazing for words she is something else if only I was human againbut that would be a miracleI really need one
Natames POV
I sat there reading his mind and listing to what he said
Does he love me that much? But my vision is it coming true?
So many questions unanswered none of my and his questions can be answerednot yet
TIME SKIP: a couple years laterim now 15 im still in the Akatsuki and still living in mine and sasoris room. Pein died from depression because konan was dead suki is the new leader

wow thanks suki! I have the powers of a tokudan shinobi!! I said
yes you have all the powers that I have except telekinesissuki said
oh and bye I have to go suki said
go where? What do you mean! I said getting in a panic
im going back to the leaf village right now you are the new leader. She said
no you cant go!! I said crying
Im still your friend but I cant stay here I have to go back I tought you well you and the Akatsuki that is good luck and I am not happy to leave but im happy to go back and see my friendsgood-byeI hope get to see you again suki said

-_-' nothing here
yea -.-
um so how did you like the story so far? ^_^
k read the next part :P

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