That's Wrong. [Pete Wentz] Eleven

STD Layouts i'm sleepy.

Created by choclatez on Saturday, May 03, 2008

Pete
I stepped in and saw Rachel was hugged by Anthony and Rachel's eyes were glossy.
"Rachel?" I said.
She ran to me and hugged me tight. I hugged her back and led her cried in my chest.
And the rest of the scene was the same that was in my dream.
This was really weird.
"You're using her," Anthony said. "You're using her for your own pleasure!"
"I don't," I said, "Life's about decisions, and the things I've done in the past are the ones that I've chosen; even though I regretted some of the decisions I've chosen. About using Rachel... I never thought to use her. I didn't know what to do and led confusion took care of it. I was an idiot. I shouldn't leave her and go on with Nicole but then broke-up with her."
Rachel looked at me and said, "You broke-up with Nicole?"
I nodded and said, "We're better off as friends."
"And what do you wanna do?" Anthony said, arms were crossed across his chest.
"To be a responsible dad and never leave the mom of my child," I said and hugged Rachel tighter.
Anthony looked at me for a while, huffed, and said, "You win. Rachel never looked to another guy; only you that she always sees. I give her back to you."
I was about to jump and scream in happiness when he said that. Was it like I was asking for a permission to parents to date their daughter?
"But if you leave again... Don't you ever expect to meet her again."
"I won't," I said as he walked out the aparment. "I won't," I mumbled and pressed my lips on Rachel's forehead.
She released the hug and looked at me. "I love you Peter. I always do," she smiled.
"And I do too."
And this time, I pressed my lips against hers.
---
I was still at Rachel's apartment. Shauna and Ryan haven't came back from the things they were doing. Maybe Shauna was on a date with Patrick after college?
Rachel was asleep on the sofa with her head on my lap. She looked tired so I told her to get a rest. I was thinking about the dreams that I had... They were like, telling me what will happen if I do this or that.
Maybe if I didn't come back to Rachel, the same thing will happen in the first dream; Rachel will marry Anthony. Glad I came back to her.
I looked down to Rachel that was fully asleep. I bent down and kissed her forehead.
I will always be yours, always and always will...
feedback would be great <3

this isnt the end of the story; i'll probably write a prologue.

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