{You are too COOL to be with me}[A Soul Love Story]-chapter 1 "Seeing Again Old Friends!"-

well here's the first chapter of {You are too COOL to be with me}, thanks to The-Devil-Of-The-Dark for messaging me and ispiring me on doing the first chapter as soon as possible! If you have time, go see her stories, THEY REALLY ROCK! \o/

Created by DeidaraLovesKate on Wednesday, July 23, 2008

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-Haruka’s POV-

Me and my partner, Kaoru, were on Shibusen, in order to see Shinigami-sama, I though that I knew why, but I would just wait for him to explain. But, of course, being me, I couldn’t stop thinking about it, I was so deep in my thoughts that I wasn’t hearing Kaoru calling my name. ”HARU-CHAAAAAAAAAN!! @_@” yelled/whined Kaoru “G-GAAAAH! S-sorry Kaoru, I wasn’t listening, w-what do you want?” (Kate: not in a snob way) I asked “nothing, it’s just that you’re so quite right now, I know you’re quiet mostly all the time, but now you’re different...you are...quieter, if that’s possible” he said worried “oh, i-it’s nothing. I-I’m just thinking...” I said back to him “about what?” he asked curiously “r-random things...^_^” I replied “Haru-chan you seem serious at first sight, but you are pretty random when we get to know you xD” he said laughing and putting his arms behind his head “I-I am?” I asked “yeah, but don’t be sad about it, Haru-chan, because that’s what I like about you. =D” he said happily ‘it would benice if Soul-kun liked me too, but he’s too cool to be with me *puts head down*’ I though sadly (Kate: LOOK! LOOK! ISN’T THAT THE NAME OF THE STORY?!?!? “he’s too cool to be with me” *mocking* (not in a bad way) YEAH I KNEW IT! xD) “HEY LOOK!” Kaoru yelled randomly and pointed to some random place (Kate: GOTTA LOVE THE WORD “RANDOM” xD) “ISN’T THAT MAKA-SAN?!...And of course, her stupid partner, Soul-baka. ¬.¬” he said with anger in his voice, I didn’t know why but he hated Soul-kun. I looked at Maka-chan and Soul-kun, I was scared/interested after seeing them ‘what will they think of me?! After all I’m different than before’ I though confidently (you: butI thoughthat I wasn’t confident of myself o.o/Kate: in your mind you’re a little confident of yourself xD) “MAKA-SAAAAAAAN!~” Kaoru yelled happily, but with all that yelling he startled Maka-chan, it was funny the expression on her face, she looked at Kaoru, but I couldn’t see much of her face now, because I was hiding behind Kaoru, yes I was scared, Maka-chan may be my best friend, but I am still very shy around her, especially when she was with Soul-kun, and that’s mostly all the time so I never talk too much when I’m with them ‘maybe Kaoru is right...I’m always too quiet, maybe that’s why Soul-kun doesn’t like me, GAAH I’M REALLY A MESS OF TROUBLE! >.////< ” I blushed after seeing Soul-kun. “H-Haru-chan??????” Maka asked uncertainly “y-yes, Maka-chan” I said nodding and then suddenly I was glomped by Maka-chan, thatREALLY startled me “OMG! HARU-CHAN YOU’RE SO PRETTY! YOU CHANGED SO MUCH! THAT’S WHY I WASN’TSURE IF THAT PRETTY GIRL WAS YOU! OF COURSE YOU WERE PRETTY BEFORE! BUT NOW YOU ARE PRETTIER! <3~” Maka-chan said, Kaoru and Soul-kun were like \OMFG! WTH?!/ and I was like \OMG! I NEED AIR! SOMEONE SAVE ME! @_@/, but Maka-chan got off me quickly and started checking me and so was Soul-kun (while Kaoru was glaring at him for doing that) I blushed at the sight of him checking me. “Haru-chan, you really changed after all that time” Maka-chan said smiling, I smiled back and nodded happily “yeah! You changed a lot too ^_^”.

-Soul’s POV-

Me and Maka were seeing the jobs that were took and suddenly we heard someone yell Maka’s name “MAKA-SAAAAAAAN!~” sadly, the voice was very familiar, it was Kaoru’s voice, I didn’t know why but he hated me so I started to hate him too, anyway he was coming in our direction, but...one thing wasn’t right ‘where’s Haruka?’ I though curiously ‘I knew her since we were kids, but we got separated because of that Kishin Eggs search’ I though sighing ‘I wonder how’s she looking now’ I was deep in my thoughts, but I could hear Maka and Kaoru talking a little, and then I heard Maka asking about Haruka, “Kaoru-kun, if you’re here where’s Haru-chan? ._.” I stopped my thoughts after that, I was really interested on seeing my childhood friend, I looked at Kaoru searching for a girl apparently shy, with short hair and a tan jacket, but I saw nothing, and then a girl’s head pop out of Kaoru’s back “o-ohayo Maka-chan, S-Soul-kun >////< ” she blushed after seeing me, I just didn’t know why...’wait, is that Haruka?! O_O’ I though. I was going to ask the girl if she was REALLY Haruka, but Maka did this for me “H-Haru-chan??????” she asked very uncertainly of herself and then the girl replied shyly “y-yes, Maka-chan” she said nodding, yeah it was her, I was sure of it, with all that shyness, ‘but she is very different now, her hair is longer, she isn’t using that jacket and those dark blue pants, now she’s using a pretty sexy dre-...I mean a dress, JUST a dress x_x’ I though ‘ugh what the hell I’m thinking?! She’s my friend and...’ my thoughts were interrupted by Maka glomping Haruka, it seemed like it startled Haruka. Me and Kaoru were looking at them like \OMFG! WTH?!/ and Haruka was like \OMG! I NEED AIR! SOMEONE SAVE ME! @_@/ before Kaoru and I had time to do something to help Haruka, Maka got off her and started to check her so was I, but I was checking her in a strange way ‘WOOOW! HARUKA REALLY CHANGED AFTER ALL! I WOULD LIKE TO SEE HER WITHOUT THAT DRESS! *nosebleed*’ (Kate: OMFG! PERVY MOMENT! xD) I mentally slapped myself ‘GAAAH! STOP THINKING THIS KIND OF THINGS! YOU IDIOT!ò.Ó’, I think Kaoru noticed that I was checking Haruka and thinking THOSE kind things, because he was glaring hardly at me, ‘but what can I do? She’s very different now, she was cute when we were younger...but now she’s a heck of a girl’. Then suddenly I remembered when I had meet her...

NYAAA! Sorry, I have to stop some day xDDD, and yes this is kind of a cliffhanger, (you: NOOOOOOOOO) I’m sorry I also don’t like cliffhangers, but I promise that I will write the second chapter as soon as possible, I already have the idea =D. PLEAAAASE!RATE ANDMESSAGE ME AND SAY WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT MY STORIE SO FAR, I’M BEGGING YOU READERS! >.<


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