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Another Vampire Story[chapter 3]

Chapter 3: Surprise!

Created by caramelldancen21 on Sunday, December 21, 2008

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Edwin.jpg< That is Saito
Andhere is Tatiana.> Tatianatheone.jpg

KarishiManinona.jpg< and this is Karishi

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chapter 3: Surprise!


I awoke to Saito whispering, "Tatiana...Get up." I was curious what he was staring at until I looked down to see I was in my underwear; I had fallen asleep without the blankets on. I quickly put them over me, "Who do you live with? I mean who bought this house?" Saito thought about it then answered, "My dad, he is usually away on a business trip." That was when I heard the front door close and a deep voice say, "Saito!I'm home." Saito darted out of the room.

SAITO'S P.O.V.

I darted out of Tatiana's room. WHY THE HELL IS HE HOME?! OF ALL TIMES HE DECIDES TO COME HOME NOW! My dad looked stressed. But he greeted me with a half smile. "Hi dad," I said, "why are you home I thought you would be gone longer." He laughed "The client accepted faster then expected!" My dad's face flooded with worry, "You have a girl over!" My eyes wandered until he was walking to the room where Tatiana was staying, I blocked him. Tatiana came out in a robe and said, "Hello, I'm Tatiana. You must be saito's dad?" My dad nodded and grunted; he turned to me. "HAVE YOU HURT HER?WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HER?"I growled slightly, "She just has a bad family! I am just taking care of her!" That was when Tatiana asked, "Why is your dad so suspicious?" I looked back over at my dad and his eyebrows raised and panic filled my body, "He hasn't told you yet?" Tatiana was confused, "He hasn't told me what?"
"No dad, please, no!" I pleaded.My dad ignored me and said, "He's a vampire." Tatiana's eyes widened, "I thought those were m-m-myths." "They are!" I quickly stated."What are you talking about Saito? You have been a vampire for four years!" I couldn't argue with that."I'll just leave, I've caused problems!" Tatiana was almost into her room when I pulled her back. "My dad is telling the truth, I am a vampire." I quickly flashed my one inch fangs to show her. "Show me real proof!" she shot at me. I grabbed her wrist and pricked it with my fang. She colapsed to the floor. "what's wrong?" I said sitting down by her. "I wish I had your freedom, to live forever." "w-w-what?" I choked out, "you want to be a...a vampire?" Tatiana looked at me and mumbled, "as long as I am with someone I love." My eyes widened,"what are you saying?" "I love you" Tatiana said to me here eyes looking into mine.


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now a few of the big secrets are revealed! But more is coming folks!
RATE AND MESSAGE PLEASE!
Hope yu enjoy one of my more dramatic chapters and sorry about thte spacing, I type it directly on to the story body area.Once again, RATE AND MESSAGE! The more you message, the more I will want towrite!
See ya!
Caramelldancen21


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