oo-aniki - refers to a respected person, like an older brother, or in Bankotsu's case, a leader. tatami - straw sleeping mat
I have an odd feeling of deja-vou....
Jakotsu's eyes flew open in surprise. Instantly, though, another emotion regestered on the man's face. His eyes searched Bankotsu's hungrily. "Oo-aniki...you must be sure, before..." Bankotsu swallowed hard, his own eyes caught in the lustful gaze of the other. "Yes, Jakotsu. Yes..." Jakotsu needed nothing more, and probably wouldn't have been able to hold back any longer anyway. He leaned over and entrapped Bankotsu's lips in a long kiss, sliding his tonge into the warm entrance. Bankotsu moaned, and tentatively returned the kiss. Suddenly, Jakotsu tore off the kiss, and grabbed Bankotsu by his collar. He half dragged him over to the tatami that they had quarrelled over the night before. Bankotsu found himself pinned on the tatami by Jakotsu, who was lying on top of him and grinning. Bankotsu's eyes grew wide. What did this man have in store for him? Well, it was far too late. Jakotsu would not stop now until he had had his full. Besides, he had actually asked for Jakotsu's attentions, and that included everything... Well, just the thought that he had no choice now filled him with fire! He writhed underneath the weight of Jakotsu, who leaned over and cut the struggle short with another kiss. At the same time, Jakotsu began to pull the clothing off of the man below him. Bankotsu was melting within the kiss, feeling any last traces of resistance fade away. Soon all clothes were cast aside breathlessly. Jakotsu sat on the stomach of and looked down at the younger man with a look of consternation. The firelight made both Jakotsu's pale skin and Bankotsu's darker shade glow and flicker as if dancing. "Hmm...Ah! I know!" He said, and reached down to undo Bankotsu's braid and free his long, wild black hair. It now framed his face like a dark halo. "Oh, Bankotsu no-oo-aniki! You look so...innocent." With that last word, Jakotsu licked his lips, and his eyes glinted in the firelight. He bent down and kissed Bankotsu passionatly. Then Bankotsu felt sharp teeth bite into the soft flesh of his lower lip until both men tasted blood. He broke the kiss off with a cry of pain and surprise, and saw with wide eyes Jakotsu smiling down upon him. Jakotsu returned for another bloody kiss, and Bankotsu could feel soft hands expertly sliding across his chest. Then nails were biting into skin and being dragged across ticklish ribs, creating long parrallel gashes. Bankotsu jerked, and tried to yell, but Jakotsu's smiling mouth was pressed tightly against his, and he was unable to do anything but writhe underneath the delicious weight of the taller man. Jakotsu freed Bankotsu's lips at last. "Wiggly, aren't we?" He laughed breathlessly. Jakotsu sunk lower and licked seeping drops of blood from the other's ribs. It hurt, it tickled; what perfect torture! Bankotsu moaned. Growling, spurred by the unconcious sounds from his leader, he rose and bit, deep into the flesh of a shoulder! A scream was heard throughout the mannor, but Bankotsu was far too gone to care who heard, and Jakotsu never cared in the first place. This is what he had wanted all along. Jakotsu was not gentle. He was possesed with lust and passion and acted upon his desires in his usual fasion, causing the man below him to scream and cry out with pain. But this time, for the first time, the screams held more than just pain...They were screams of passion and pleasure as well. Jakotsu was finding a new pleasure in this, along with Bankotsu. Silence, except for heavy breathing. Jakotsu, nestled beside Bankotsu now, was delicately nibbling away the other's tears. Bankotsu couldn't move, couldn't think. His shoulder and ribs throbbed, his lower body was completly sore, so that he didn't want to move. Besides, lying here, unmoving, next to Jakotsu, was just fine by him.
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Heehee, I put up this pic as a special treat! Well! This story has signified many firsts for me: first fanfic; first story posted on the net; and first story that was actually naughty *snicker* I hope everyone enjoyed it! Usually I can't stand fanfiction, but the BankJak couple is so obvious, don't you agree? I do wish more fanfics kept with Jakotsu's sadomasachistic personality, though. They often make him go all mushy *yuck*.
A BankotsuXJakotsu Story ::part four; finale::
Again, same warning as before(BL/yaoi material, and sadomasachism), except definately a harsher warning. And now...the FINALE! (Many thanks to Anda for helping me with figuring out the backgrounds for my quizes!) Background photo by Sweet Chaos on Undying Devotion.Did you like this story? Make one of your own!