Empty Shell (A Sasodei one shot)

After Sasori dies (damn that bitch Sakura) deidara visits his broken body. But it's just an empty shell... (The lyrics I put in it are from Fix you by Coldplay. It's a good song but it's really sad. :( And the bits in bold are flashbacks.)

Created by femininexdaydream on Tuesday, March 31, 2009

When you try your best, but you don't succeed
When you get what you want, but not what you need
When you feel so tired, but you can't sleep
Stuck in reverse

He just lay there, he didn't move, he didn't speak, he didn't tell him what he was doing wrong, he was still...
And the tears come streaming down your face
When you lose something you can't replace
When you love someone but it goes to waste
Could it be worse?

Deidara knelt down and pulled the body up onto his lap. He was empty. His Danna was incomplete. Sasori was gone... deidara's tears dropped onto Sasori's hollow face.
"Danna!!" Deidara cried out. "Danna!? Why did you die?? Why did you die and leave me here on my own?!"

***
"Dei? Dei are you there?"
"Danna!!"
"Are you ok?"
"Danna, you've been missing a whole 2 days!! You didn't even say goodbye, un! Where did you go??"
"I just needed to steal some papers from Konoha for Leader-sama."
"But I was so worried, un! I keep thinking you'll disappear any day now..."
"Why? You know I can live forever. I can just be rebuilt over and over."
"But...."
"Remember what I say. True art stays forever."
"That's not true, un."
"If we love eachother, if that is art..."
"But Danna....! It's not the same!!"
"No buts, Deidara. I'll stay as long as you need me for."
"....I love you Danna."
"I love you too, Dei."
"So you won't leave, un?"
"I'll stay with you forever. I promise."

***

"You lied!!!"

Lights will guide you home,
And ignite your bones,
And I will try to fix you

"You didn't stay forever!! You left me here and you forget that you had a weakness!..."
His shoulder suddennly felt cold...
"Danna......"

High up above or down below
When you're too in love to let it go
But if you never try you'll never know
Just what you're worth
"I won't leave. Don't forget, true art lasts forever, I'll stay with you."

"Danna...."


Lights will guide you home
And ignite your bones
And I will try to fix you

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