{Jacob}My Pen Pal's A Werewolf!{Black}(10)

I am looking for some good feedback! Not just for this story for my other one as well. But rate my story and tell me what you like/don't like for eaither of my stories and if yours stories not way to long I'll do the same.

Created by SilentlyMasked on Wednesday, April 29, 2009

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Nova's POV
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Jake parked his bike and I took off the helmet and handed it to him then got off. I looked at my house, yellow crossing tape and police officers. I walked up and showed them my drivers lisence and they let me in. I stopped when I was in the doorway and looked back. "He's with me." I said as Jake walked in and stood next to me and put hand on my shoulder. I walked around and he followed after me as I looked around. The bodies had been taken put all of the other evidence was there and I was crying the whole way through the house. I got to my fathers room and looked around picking up various things. Jake stood there with me that whole time! I then turned back to him and wrapped my arms around his neck. "I love you and I will marry you, you mean to much and I know you care about me." I whispred and laid my head on his shoulder.

Jakes POV
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I looked over at Nova after she said yes to me. She'd said yes, she'd said yes! I was so happy but I wanted to know why she had. "Why did you say yes? You should really thing about it..." I said. She looked up at me. "I love you and theres nothing to think about." She said.

Novas POV
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"Alright, we have the next two years to plan this all out, let's go back to my home after you finish here." Jake said. I nodded and hugged him and he kissed my forehead. "I'll let you have some time alone." He whispered before leaving. I nodded and walked around and picked up the picture of my mother, it was framed. I gasped, that's why he didn't believe me. I took it and put it in my bag. I then went and got more of my clothes, my room was destroyed and I had a few pairs of jeans and t-shirts. I searched around and found my mothers locket, I had hidden it well. I put the gold locket around my neck then walked out.

Jakes POV
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Sam was yelling at me for being so stupid as I got onto my bike. I mentally attacked him in ways that would make anyone cry, except him of course. I hopped on and put on my helmet and waited for her. I was still letting it all sink in, she'd said yes! We had two years until we legally could get married but it was just two years. I watched her walk out and get on I pulled her close in an embrace and she then put on her helmet. "Let's go!" She said. I smiled at her and then turned and tore out of the driveway and I could tell almost immedtially how much more relieved she was. But my dad was being told of me proposing and her yes by Sam and Paul. I was a dead man riding a motorcycle.

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