Strawberry Girl(Fruits Basket for girls) PT 1

Created by demonshadowangel on Wednesday, March 08, 2006

Character Info:Your name is Angel Valentine.Your 15 years old.Your NOT a morning person.You like staying up late.You have Bright sky blue eyes that turn a very dark shade of blue when you get really mad.You have shoulder length brown hair with pink streaks.Your the same height as Tohru with a very nice figure and your very pretty.You have 12 siblings,6 brothers and 6 sisters.You and your sibs are part of the Western Zodiac.If yor wondering why there are 13 Valentine children its because your mom had twins.The twins were born under the sign of Gemini(Haha!).Your Sagittarius and the next head of the family.You change into a centaur every time you blush.It doesnt matter if its a boy or girl that made you blush.If you blush you change,got it?You were born in japan but you have lived all over the world and because of that you speak 8 different languages(sp?).You speak French, English, Italion(sp?), German, Spanish, Latin, Chinese and of course Japanese.You lived in japan till you were 5 and you were best friends with Tohru so you were really sad when you moved.You love Bunnies, Kitties and Horses.You don't like Dogs to much.Its not that you hate them...its just that Dogs scare the hell outta you.Oh and your fav colors are pink and black.You can't stand to be around sad people and you hate to cry and hardly ever cry.You also hate seeing children crying.You have a stuffed Bunnydoll that was your Mothers when she was little,you just love that doll.Your a great singer and dancer.So what do ya think?
Its Great!!(Me:Thank you!Here have cookie.)Thanks*starts munching on the cookie*
It sucks.(Me:YOU SUCK*hits reader over the head with a lamp*)OUCH!!
You wake up to your alarm going of.*STUPID ALARM* you think to yourself as you rip the plug out of the wall.You go back to laying in your bed and are just about to fall back asleep when your 5 year old sister,Mercy(Mercy's the Leo),runs in and hops on your bed."Sis,its time to get up!" she says with a big smile on her face."No!I'm still sleepy,Mercy!How can you have this much energy at 7:30 in the morning?!" you say while pulling the covers over your head."Its EASY,You just need to eat alot of sugary cereal!" she says as she pulls the covers back off you.You look at her like shes a lunatic."C'mon sis!You promised you'd help me do my hair today and its your first day at your new school,too" she whines.You let out a long sigh"Alright already." you sit up and look at your little sister and smile.You give her a hug and get outta bed.You walk into the kitchen and scare almost every body because of of your bed-head.This happens all the time.After you eat your breakfast you go back to your room and put on your uniform (You got the short skirt)and put your hair in a pony tail.You go brush your teeth and put on some light pink lip gloss and your favorite pair of earrings that Tohru gave you just before you moved away and a silver heart-shaped locket that has pink jewels on it,in your locket is picture of your whole family on 1 side and a picture of you and Tohru at Disneyland.You tuck the locket into your shirt and go look for Mercy.You find her in her room drawing."Hey,c'mon lets do my hair now!" she says "What do you think I'm in here for?!GOOD GOD,DO YOU EVER CLEAN YOUR ROOM?!" you scream as you pick your way to the island thats her bed through the 3 foot deep mix of clothes,doll clothes,plushies,papers and barbie dolls."UGH!If this mess gets any deeper I won't even be able to find you next time I come in here!" you yell at her."I'll clean it later!" she says."Thats what you said last time." you mumble.You reach her bed and sit down"So,how do you want your hair?" you ask."Pig-tails!" she yells"Oka-" "NO,WAIT BRAIDS!" "Alrig-" "NO!A PONY-TAIL" you sweatdrop "WILL YOU MAKE UP YOUR MIND,DAMMIT?!" you yell "I CAN'T!" she yells back."THEN LET ME DECIDE!!" The yelling went on for 10 min till you look at the clock "OH NO!SCHOOL STARTS IN 15 MIN" you grab her and brush her hair back and put it in a pony-tail."OW OW OW!THAT HURTS!!!" she yells (Good greif you people yell alot) "Sorry Mercy!I've gotta run if I'm gonna make it to school on time!Bye,kitten"(Mercy's nickname is kitten) you say as you give her a kiss on the cheek and run as fast as you can through mess outta her room.You run to your room and grab your backpack."BYE,EVERYBODY" you yell as you run outta the house.*Thank God I don't live that far from the school* you think to your self as you run down the street.
Okay,keep going!(Me:Alright!^_^)
STOP ,IT SUCKS!!(Me:WHY YOU LTTLE...!!!)
~FLASHSFORWARD~You make it to the class room just as the bell rings.(Your in the same class as Tohru,Kyo and Yuki)*Made it!* you think.The teacher walks in behind you and walks over to his desk."Class we have a new student today.This is Miss Angel Valnetine." you smile at the class.Tohru stares at you*A-Angel V-V-Valentine!Could it be possible...* Tohru thinks to herself "Miss Valentine,why don't you tell the class about yourself?" you nod at the teacher and you haven't seen Tohru yet "Yessir." you turn to face the class "Well my name is Angel and I'm 15 and I skipped a grade to be in this class.I was born japan ,but I moved over seas when I was 5" Tohrus eyes keep getting wider."I speak 8 different languages,I'm a Sagittaurius and I was born in the year of the Rabbit.I have Twelv-err-make that Eleven siblings and I love animals.I like to sew and draw." you say.You still haven't seen Tohru even though her eyes are almost popping out of her head*Its HER!ITS REALLY HER* by now Yuki,Kyo,Uo and Hana are staring at her wondering what the heck is wrong with her now."Alright Miss Valentine.Take your seat next to Miss Honda." *Honda?!NO WAY!IT COULDN'T BE!* you think. "Miss Honda will you please raise your hand." Tohru just keeps staring at you "MISS HONDA!!" "HUH?!WHA?!What did you say Sensei?" Tohru asks finally snaping outta of her bug-eyed stare. "Miss Honda will you please raise your hand!" "Yes Sensei." Tohru raised her hand and you walked down the isle.You and Tohru stare at each other for about 5 min."Tohru?" you look at her wide eyed."Angel?" Tohru says.By now the whole class even the teacher is staring at the the both of you."AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!" You and Tohru scream at the same time.Tohru shoots up from her seat and grabs you into a bone-crushing hug."Tohru...I can't...breath!!" She loosens her grip "I can't believe I'm seeing you again!" Tohru says "Yeah, me too!" "MISS HONDA!MISS VALENTINE!IF YOU DON'T MIND ITS TIME TO START CLASS!!" The teacher suddenly yells scaring the both of you."PLEASE TAKE YOUR SEATS!!" You and Tohru take your seats.
Your not gonna end it here are you?(Me:No.)
END IT HERE!!(Me:NO!)
~FLASHFORWARD~Your first class is over and you walk outta the room with Tohru,Yuki,Kyo,Uo and Hana."Ok,so how do you 2 know each other?" Uo says getting right to the point "Angel-chan and I were Best Friends when we were little,but then she moved over seas." Tohru said. "Ohhh." Everybody said."Miss Honda, are you going to introduce us?" Yuki asked "Huh?Oh yes.Angel-chan this is Yuki Sohma..." *Sohma?That name sounds familiar..* You think "And Kyo Sohma.Sohma-kun and Kyo-kun are cousins." She says "Oh,I see." You say."And this Arisa Uotani and Saki Hanajima.My best friends." Tohru smiles "Its nice to meet all of you." you say."Your waves seem alot like those of the Sohmas,but different somehow..." Hana says.You stare at her.(My, you stare alot don'cha)Yuki,Kyo and Tohru are staring at you now."What?!"You ask."Nothing,nothing at all,Miss Valentine." Yuki says.Oh!Can I see you scheduale(sp?)?I want to see what classes you have." Tohru says."Alright.Here." You give it to her.Uo and Hana look at it too."Well you've got 2 clases with Tohru,1 with Yuki,2 with Carrot-top,2 with me and 1 with Hana." Uo says.~FLASHFORWARD~Its Lunch Time.You look around for your friends*They must not be here yet* You think."Angel-chan!" you turn around and see Tohru,yuki,Kyo,Uo,Hana and 2 other boys that you haven't met before walk to you"Hey,guys!" you say.All the sudden you here a loud rumbling sound *Hmmm?Thats not my stomach.It sounds like a stampede..." Then you see whats making the noise...Behind Tohru and the others is a stampede of boy *OH,NO!!* You think.Before you can warn them your friends are trampled and they mob you.'Will you go out with me?' is the 1 thing that you keep hearing."DAMMIT,THAT MUST HAVE BEEN HALF THE MALE STUDENT BODY!!!" Kyo yells as hes gets up."HALF?!THAT WAS THE WHOLE MALE STUDENT BODY!!" Uo yells."I wanted to have lunch with her..." Tohru says.You look at your friends and mouth the words 'Help me!'."Alright,I'm gonna go help her." Uo says as she cracks her knuckles."Yes" Yuki says.Next thing you saw was boys flying through the air.Kyo,Yuki,Hana and Uo were making a 'path' to you.Kyo,Yuki and Uo were throwing boys and Hana was scaring them.
Ok.
It sucks!(Me:WILL YOU LEAVE?!)
Uo,Kyo,Hana And Yuki have now made a 'path' to you.Tohru walks up to you "C'mon,Angel-chan we're gonna have lunch on the roof" Tohru says."Alright,Tohru.Who are these 2?" You ask looking at the 2 other boys that you haven't met. "I'm Momiji Sohma!" Says the shorter blonde boy.*WOW!HE'S CUTE!* You think."And I'm Hatsuharu Sohma.Haru for short." Says the taller white and black haired boy."We're Yuki and Kyo's other cousins." says Momiji "Its nice to meet you."~FLASHFORWARD~ Your sitting on the roof eating lunch with everybody and talking. "Tohru,how is Kyoko-chan?" you ask.Tohru's eyes sadden "Mom died almost a year ago" Tohru says. "Oh Tohru,I'm sorry!I didn't mean to-" "Its alright,Angel-Chan." "So,who do you live with?" you ask."Oh,I live with the Sohma's" Tohru says smiling.Your jaw drops.*SHE LIVES WITH A BUNCH OF GUYS?!* You think. "She lives with Yuki,Kyo and Shigure.Me and Haru don't live with them." Momiji says."I see..." you say.-Silence-"Angel-chan,how are your parents?" Tohru asks.*I can't tell her what happened.She'll worry.I don't want to tell her* You think."Uh...They're fine" You lie.~FLASHFORWARD~School is over."Oh,I need to go pick up Mercy." you say as you look at your watch."Who's Mercy?" Tohru asks "Oh yeah,you haven't met her.She's my little sister,she was born after we moved." You say "Oh.I'll go with you if you want." Tohru says."Oh...uh...No.Its alright I'll go by myself." "But-" "I've gotta go.I'll see you tomorrow.Bye,guys." You say as you start to walk away."Well,that was weird..." Kyo says."Yeah..." Everybody agreed "I've gotta go to work now" Tohru says "Bye Tohru." Hana says."Yeah,see you tomorrow Tohru." Uo says "I'll come pick you up later Tohru." Yuki says "Bye Tohru." Kyo and Haru say."I'll go with you to work,Tohru." Momiji says as he starts walking with Tohru."I like Angel.She's nice and she's relly cute!" Momiji says.-Back to you-Your on your way home with Mercy.*I can't let Tohru find out what happened.I don't want her to know.* you think. "Sis,is something wrong?" Mercy asks."Huh?What did you say,Kitten?" You ask."I asked if something was wrong.You were totally spacing-out." "Its nothing Mercy.Do you remember me telling you about a girl named Tohru that I was best friends when I was little?" "Yes.Why?" "Because she go's to my school." "Really?Cool." ~FLASHFORWARD~ Tohru is walking home from work with Momiji,Kyo and Yuki,talking about you. "Momiji told me earlier(sp?) that he thinks Angel-chan's cute." Tohru said "Really?Momiji's got a crush!Momiji's got a crush!" Kyo started to tease."WAH!Kyo's picking on me!!"-Back to you- Your playing with Mercy and the other kids when the ball go's over the fence "I'll get it!" you yell-To Tohru- "Will you shut up already,you Stupid Cat?!" "MAKE ME,YOU DAMN RAT!!" All the sudden Kyo got hit in the face with a ball."Kyo-kun,are you alright?!" Tohru asks "I'll get it!" You out of the yard and around the corner to get the ball.You see it on the ground and go pick it up. "Angel-chan?" *Oh no.Please god don't let that be...* "Tohru?What are you doing here?" "I'm walking home from work."Tohru asks "Why are you here,Angel." Momiji asks "Yeah,why are you here?Last time I checked this was an Orphanage." Kyo asks *No!I didn't want to tell them!Its my problem!But they're my friends I should tell them!I have to tell them* You think. "I REALLY didn't want you to find out,but now that you know where I live I guess I have to tell you now...
Oh no!DON'T END HERE(Me:Sorry,but,I'm gonna end here.)
YES,YOUR ENDING HERE!(Me:OH, GO TO HELL!!)
This is the first fic I've ever made.I hope you like it.I promise it will get better!I'm gonna start part 2 soon.Let me know what ya think,okay?
Okay.
Whatever.(Me:Oh,shut up!)
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Thank you for being so nice.Let me know what ya think,Okay?
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YOU SUCK!!!>_<

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