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Episode 26# White night:

Jake was stranggling Redmoon, when he thrusted his legs under Jake and kicked him off Jake rolled to the other side and Redmoon smirked at him “so that’s all from the grate Jake Geniusses” he tounted Jake was about to cry but he remember what Atticus said [“hey don’t cry men don’t cry this demon don’t know who he dealing with you’re a tough kid I’v seen you fight”] Jakes tood up but his body couldn’t take anymore of the abuse Redmoon grawled at him.

Annette looked over at Marik and saw he had a wooden stake through his chest “I was wundering when you die” she said giggling, Serenity and the others were faceing problems on the streets minor demons were attack people, Luna faught off the demons while the others helped the people to safty.

Kisara senced Redmoon and Jake’s power and she fell off the window silve Kaiba turned around to her “strong energy forces around fighting each other I can sence it” she said “who is it?” asked Mokuba hopping up and down on the chair “my guess Jake and his alter ego…but another life force is near them it’s faint but strong enough to sence I think it’s Annette” she said getting up, “is she alright?” asked Mokuba getting up with fear in his eyes “I’m not suer her force is faint” said Kisara…. “Kisara take Mokuba to where she is and make sure she is alright” said Kaiba they nodded and ran out of the room.

Thunder cracked in the sky because of the weather demons but it didn’t stope anyone, Redmoon wounded Jake to the point where he could not take much more of it all.

Kisara acrossed the roofs of the builds with Mokuba on her back they went past Jake fight and stopped and watched them.

Jake swung at Redmoon but he stopped his punched and almost broke his fist if Jake hadn’t pulled away…he was painting and sweat ran down his face Mokuba and Kisara looked at each other “he may not win” said Mokuba Kisara nodded and they kept on after them twored Annette.

Redmoon knocked Jake on his butt and he sat there wipped out Redmoon smiled but watched Kisara and Mokuba head for the lab as soon as you could snap your finguers redmoonw as there he stopped them “go away you have no business here” he said with a evil look Kisara fired a white light orb at him but he stopped it and it vanished in his grip they gulped.

Redmoon flapped his wings once and thye both fell from the air to the ground and Redmoon blasted them with a lighting bolt they both were hit head on and were almost fired to a crisp if Jake hadn’t pushed Redmoon in the side of the lab he thrusted his arm through his chest and ripped out a lung but Redmoon was a atler ego of Jake he could live with out the organs, “nothing can hurt me so go on do what ever you want to me” snapped Redmoon “your breath is routed” said Jake.

Kisara got up and limbed over to Mokuba “hey are you alright Kaiba will have my head if your hurt” she said…Mokuba cringed abit but didn’t get up Kisara sighed and picked him up and looked around she saw a bench and ran him over there and sat Mokuba down “stay here I’ll fine the others” she said and Kisara ran off.

Jake thrusted his legs in Redmoon chest and pushed out he landed on the other buildsing roof waiting Redmoon formed an orb of darknes and shot it at Jake his took the hit in the chest and held it for a few but Redmoon slammed his feet in to his stomach, Jake was on his knees in pain and Redmoon rose his hands over his head and a huge light white formed “wait think about what your doing” he said but redmoon didn’t listen, Jake sprung his knees and collided with him and wrapped his hands around Redmoons waist and Redmoon lost his grip and let go of the orb it flew in to the air and exploded in to fire works it had become night and the orb, turned the whole sky white it felt like morning.
Kisara covered her eyes and ran in to someone and when she looked at the person she saw it was Alister with a puzzled look on his face, she kind of laughed and backed away “Serenity Serenity I need help” she cried “Mokuba is hurt and I don’t know how to heal” she said. So everyone followed Kisara back to Mokuba.

Annette could here Jake and Redmoon fighting and she was close to the edge and she looked down and saw Mokuba her eyes popped out of her head and she struggled to get free from the trap she wa sin but her foot was deep under it….crying was the only thing she could do right then but Redmoon toppled beside her “huh…ahh help help” she screaned…Redmoon got up and looked at her, he smiled and grabbed her by the neck Annette was choking as he gripped her tighter……“Jake…. help” she said softly.

Jake grabbed Redmoon by the head and slammed him in to the wall Annette fell over and Redmoon pushed Jake out the hole and they flew through the air and fought each other.

Kisara got to Mokuba and Serenity was healing him….everyone watched her but Valon looked up “ummm everyone we should probly move” he said everyone looked up and saw Jake attack Redmoon…..

 

Jake slammed Redmoon in the the city street Serenity fell back but held Mokuba she had grabbed him before the two demons came down, Jake crunched him deep in to the concrete Serenity’s eyes widen as she saw her brothers face {he is willing to give his life for this fight} she thought.Jake bit him on the neck and sucked his blood but Redmoon shot a fire ball throug his
stomach and Jake flew in to the air and Redmoon went after him.

“It’s a white night” said Sandman the sky was still little up from the orb, Serenity finished healing Mokuba and he stood up “what happen?” he asked “you were hit by a fire ball” said Kisara Mokuba watched Jake fight “how long will they fight?” asked Jaden “untill one of them give or untill they both die” answered Nara.

Syrus looked up and saw the gapping hole in the lab “look what do you think happened there?” he asked everyone shrugged but Alister looked close enough and he saw someone’s hand hangging out side the hole “Annette!!! Annette are you there?” he shouted, Mokuba ran over to the door but there was a fire at the bottom and everything was collapsed in “they did a number to this palce” said Chazz… Mokuba started to climb through but Kisara stopped him “you’ll kill yourself” she said Mokuba shook his head “I have to save Annette” he cried.
Jake was going to give in and he did by landing on the street and falling over {I can’t win every time I attack he comes back with a stronger one} he thought.

But when Redmoon walked over to Jake he stood up and he was so tired that he could barily keep his footing, Redmoon swung at him and Jake fell back {this is it I just need to face it} he said in his head…Jake layed there [“fight fight fight Jake you can do it” Annette, “I’v seen you fight and duel there’s no one who can beat you” Zane, “fighting you is like fighting a bear” Jaden, “you may be young but you got a good head on your shoulders” Bastion, “never give up” Syrus, “don’t let anyone put you down” Alexis, “my brother don’t let this demon defeat you” Serenity] Jake opened his eyes and looked at Redmoon he smirked.
“Redmoon forget about winning” he said Redmoon turned to Jake and growled…

Jake charged him and kicked Redmoon in the chest, he tripped him and slammed his foot in to his stomach “never let your guard down” said Jake as he nons topped pounched him, Redmoon piked blood and fell to his knees {how did he get so strong} he asked himself.

Jake grabbed him by the arm and swung him in to the concrete and kept doing that untill Redmoons face was all bloody Jake elt him go and Redmoon flew over to another Building Jake followed him and slammed his fists in to his chest and punched him in to the air and kept punching Redmoon, Jake kicked him in the side and Redmoon slammed in to the biling stair way enterce Redmoon stared at Jake and could see the blue energy {I’m watching his every move but can’t see what will happen next} he thought.

Jake charged him and kicked Redmoon in the jaw and as he wa sin midd air Jake slammed his fists over his head “I’m under a spell and I’ve been over my head and you know I’m going all the way to the end” said Jake as he pulled Redmoon close to his face and skull bashed him in to the roofs floor, {why, why can he touch me but I can’t touch him with one punch?} Redmoon asked himself.

Jake broke his nose and gave him one black eye but trust me it was worth it Redmoon couldn’t land one punch on this kid.

Redmoon tripped Jake and grabbed him by the enck but Jake bit his arm and ripepd the skin off it Redmoon backed away and held his arm “why? Why can you now fight me and not beable to metly fight me?” he asked holding his arm as blood dripped through his fingers.

Jake was about to answer him but he held his face Redmoons tared at him Jake’s eyes bled like they did the first time Redmoon was puzzled what’s happeing to you?” he asked, Jake even thought Redmoon was right there was becoming a Redmoon demon….Redmoon is not just his alter ego but the Redmoon demon is real to any Jenova who is borning under the red moon like he was.
Jake was full of energy and he didn’t let up on his attacks on Redmoon…

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Oh crap Jake is taking controle now but why is his eyes bleeding we will find out next time on Narux; Episode 27# The true red eyes of the demon.

Please comment thank you…

Jake was full of energy and he didn’t let up on his attacks on Redmoon…

Redmoon tripped Jake and grabbed him by the enck but Jake bit his arm and ripepd the skin off it Redmoon backed away and held his arm “why? Why can you now fight me and not beable to metly fight me?” he asked holding his arm as blood dripped through his fingers.

Jake charged him and kicked Redmoon in the jaw and as he wa sin midd air Jake slammed his fists over his head “I’m under a spell and I’ve been over my head and you know I’m going all the way to the end” said Jake as he pulled Redmoon close to his face and skull bashed him in to the roofs floor, {why, why can he touch me but I can’t touch him with one punch?} Redmoon asked himself.

Jake charged him and kicked Redmoon in the chest, he tripped him and slammed his foot in to his stomach “never let your guard down” said Jake as he nons topped pounched him, Redmoon piked blood and fell to his knees {how did he get so strong} he asked himself.

But when Redmoon walked over to Jake he stood up and he was so tired that he could barily keep his footing, Redmoon swung at him and Jake fell back {this is it I just need to face it} he said in his head…Jake layed there [“fight fight fight Jake you can do it” Annette, “I’v seen you fight and duel there’s no one who can beat you” Zane, “fighting you is like fighting a bear”

Redmoon flapped his wings once and thye both fell from the air to the ground and Redmoon blasted them with a lighting bolt they both were hit head on and were almost fired to a crisp if Jake hadn’t pushed Redmoon in the side of the lab he thrusted his arm through his chest and ripped out a lung but Redmoon was a atler ego of Jake he could live with out the organs, “nothing can hurt me so go on do

Jake swung at Redmoon but he stopped his punched and almost broke his fist if Jake hadn’t pulled away…he was painting and sweat ran down his face Mokuba and Kisara looked at each other “he may not win” said Mokuba Kisara nodded and they kept on after them twored Annette.

Thunder cracked in the sky because of the weather demons but it didn’t stope anyone, Redmoon wounded Jake to the point where he could not take much more of it all.

Kisara senced Redmoon and Jake’s power and she fell off the window silve Kaiba turned around to her “strong energy forces around fighting each other I can sence it” she said “who is it?” asked Mokuba hopping up and down on the chair “my guess Jake and his alter ego…but another life force is near them it’s faint but strong enough to sence I think it’s Annette” she said getting up, “is she alright?” asked Mokuba getting up with fear in his eyes “I’m not suer her force is faint” said Kisara…. “Kisara take Mokuba

Posted at 2:31 PM EST on Friday, October 20, 2006

Comments

@ 4:40 PM EST on Friday, October 20, 2006, knightnettie said:

Aw, Mokuba wants to save me! That's so cute! ^_^ Anyway, good job...again!
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