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In a world barely living.
I'm in a world barely living.
Hardly visible, hidden in this life, that is a prison.
I'm missed like beef stew after, thanks-giving.
Another face with out compisiton putting myself in this position for no reason.
I'm barly breathing cooking in hells kitchen with gas mask on.
Night and day like the season.
My long arms barely reach the dream that i'm dreaming.
If i should die today with out any reason today would you cry today.
If i would try today would you stop by and say hi today and stop me from what ever i'm thinking.
If so, then would you please hurry.
I'm low with my eyes blurred and sinking.
My breath, like fire dragons stinking.
My heart is 56k and lagging, looking up out of a hole that i'm burried.
When it gets cold with skys of flurries.
I know I'm getting old My eyes sagging.
What the hell happened and axsactly.
I'm in a world barely living.
Posted at 10:25 AM EST on Wednesday, May 2, 2007
Comments
@ 10:52 AM EST on Wednesday, May 2, 2007, life.is.pointless said:
thats really good, i wish icould write like that@ 10:44 AM EST on Wednesday, May 2, 2007, ProngsGroupies said:
That's really good! do more!