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November 16, 2008

Until the End of Time (Tokio Hotel fanfic)

OK everyone this is my first attempt at a fanfic. tell if you guys like it and i will continue posting them.. i only have one chapter written so far so yea... hope you like it. I might change the name but idk yet <333
Britt




So this story of life starts with my love for Tokio Hotel, my favorite band in the whole world. With that it starts a love for Tom Kaulitz. And meeting some awesome people, my best friend Desiree, Haileigh, and Blair. We are all living in Los Angeles the greatest fucking city in the world. We all enter a contest to win 3 tickets and backstage passes to see TH, and crazy enough I win (I never win anything). So I’m pretty freaking excited this is gonna be my first Tokio Hotel concert! Desi has been to like 6 of their shows, so she has experience with the crazyness ha. So Desi and I get ready at my place, the others are coming later. Geez my mom is annoying, “Brittney what time are you going to be home?” my mom asking concerned. “I have no idea at the moment Mom, geez can I get ready first.” “Fine I’ll leave you girls to it!” “I’m sorry guys, my Mom like to pry into my life ugh” I say with an annoyed tone. “It’s cool, she is just worried about you, she loves you. And she has reason to worry we are pretty crazy!” Desi says laughing. “OH MY GOD DESI!, you look amazing!” I say excitedly. “Danke Britt, you look beautiful. Tom is going to freak out haha!” Desi said with a smile on her face. “Really? Thanks, Well I sure hope so hehe, Bill is gonna shit when he see’s you!” I said. Desi was wearing a Black TH shirt that she customized herself with cuts and rips. She was wearing tight ripped pants, black eyeliner with dark blue eye shadow on the top and bottoms of her eyelids, her hair was down and straightened, and her black hi-top converse. I was wearing my grey TH shirt with Bill singing, dark blue semi baggy jeans, and my favorite pair of vans, I had thick black eyeliner and red eye shadow on my upper and lower eyelids. My hair was down and straightened but kinda messy. You know I just wanted to be comfortable with all of the jumping and screaming. So we called the girls and told them we were ready to go. “Hey Blair, yea we are ready. You guys coming soon?” I asked. “Yea just putting our finishing touches on our outfits.” Blair says. “Okie Dokie see you guys soon, Bye” I said.
So Blair and Haileigh walk in looking amazing (this is Hailz first TH concert too) so we are popping our TH cherries haha. “HOLY SHIT, you guys look amazing!!!!” Desi and I said at the same time. We looked and each other and started laughing… Haileigh was wearing her Bill shirt that his whole face is covered, and tight blue jeans, with some Addidas. Her hair was flawless perfectly straight, and makeup black eyeliner looking like Cleopatra. “I did her make-up” Blair said proudly. “well it looks awesome” Desi says. Blair was wearing her TH LA street team shirt that I made, hair curled perfectly, some black jeans, and black converse. Make-up style like Bill’s. “Uh Oh, my moms coming in the room, she‘s got a camera” “RUN!!!!!!!” I say making a run for it laughing. “Oh B, be quiet you all look so beautiful, Brittney you look so grown up.” she says trying to hug me. “well mom I am 20 now you know.” I say with a smartass tone. “Ok everyone strike a pose!” my mom says commandingly. So me being the little terd I make a repulsive face at the last minute. “Now B, that is so not necessary, one more everyone.” mom says annoyed. “Ok mom you got your picture, we are leaving now!” I say rushing everyone out of the house. “Bye mom, Love You!” I say kissing her on the cheek and hugging her. “You girls have fun now, and Brittney don’t get into trouble!” my mom yells at me. Damn she know me too well haha.
So I’m driving us tonight, in my little 2008 Honda Civic, it’s a good car but it has an even better sound system! So we are cranking TH all the way to the venue, at this point I am so nervous, I finally get to meet Tokio Hotel and this is my first show! This couldn’t get any better. And I also brought drawing I made for the boys I hope they like them.
Mean while at the House of Blues the band was discussing the winner of the competition. “I hot they are HOT!” Toms says with a little smirk. “I bet they are, But I’ve been seeing this one girl at all our California show, I hope she is here tonight.” Bill says hopingly. Georg and Gustav are off stretching for the show. The show is gonna start in 2 hours.
We arrive at the venue 2 hours early to get a good spot in line, it was weird because there weren’t very many people here yet. Considering the show is gonna start soon. So we got 10th in line. And about a hour and a half of us freaking out, they finally let us in by then the line was huge it was going around the corner. We ran to the front of the Pit! “Ok you guys, each one of us is gonna get lifted during each one of the songs for a pic and to see the guys, and so they can see us!” I say anxiously. “Ok who is going to go first???” Blair questions. “BRITTNEY!!!!” they all say. “Well you did win the competition!” Desi says with a smile. “I guess so, I hope I don’t throw up.” I say nervously. So the curtains finally draw! And we see the boy. Everyone starts screaming. “How is Everyone tonight!?” Bill yells over all the screams. “That is awesome, we are gonna start with a song you all know Monsoon!” Bill says enthusiastically. Right after I catch my breath from screaming my head off, I feel like I’m being stared at. So I look around then I look to the stage and Tom is staring straight at me, I blush and flash him a cute smile and a wink. He winks back and gives me one of his melting gorgeous smiles. Everyone is singing along! And Tom and I can’t take our eyes off each other. This is like a dream come true for me. And not even paying attention they all lift me up and I scream! “AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH, Shit you guys I almost fell!” I say angered. The y just start laughing. Tom gives me a wave, Bill just smiles, and Geo and Gusti are to busy concentrated on playing to see me. “Next is Desi!” I scream. “hahah OK, I will thanks.” Desi says gleaming with joy.
Next they play 1000 Oceans, so we lift Desiree up and Bill is practically singing to her making all the other girls jealous. So one girl pushes me over, and we all drop Desi. I get up real fast and say “WHAT THE FUCK IS YOUR PROBLEM, BITCH” shoving her and she falls to the ground. Cause others to join in, a huge fight breaks out. The girl attacks me, and me being very angry punches her in the face. The guards break it up, taking the girl who started the whole thing and kicking her out of the club. After that we decide no one else will be lifted, so we don’t get hurt in the process. TH goes to an intermission.
While Backstage Bill is ranting “Oh Mein Gott, that’s the girl I’ve been talking about, I hope she is alright!” “Did you see that blonde who was flirting with me, damn she is so hot. She beat the shit out of that girl” Tom says without taking a breath. “Wow, that was crazy I hope no one got hurt.” Georg say with concern in his voice.
Back to the show “Brittney, are you alright you punched the shit out of that girl!” Hailz says giggling. “Hell yea, but my hand hurts a little, did you see her fucking push me. What the hell, she was just jealous cause Bill was singing to Desi.” I say. The Band comes out finishing the show with By Your Side, everyone swaying and singing along. The show finally ended and we all went backstage with the passes I had won. We walk into a room with a piece of paper taped to it, it read “Tokio Hotel”. “You guys lets knock em dead.” Bair says. “Oh shit I forgot my drawings, I’ll be right Back!” I yelled running out of the club. I finally got to my car and grabbed the pics, and ran back in record time. Finally reaching my friends before they even walked through the door. But they opened the door and we walked in, I was so out of breath. I looked up and they were staring at me. “Are you ok??” Bill asked. “Yea, I just ran to my car to get something for you guys!” I said smiling handing them their pics. “This is amazing work, what’s your name????” Tom asked smirking. “Brittney” is said blushing. “These are really great, Brittney” Bill gleamed. “Well Thank you very much, Bill and Tom“ I said blushing again. “Let me introduce my friends, Desiree, Haileigh, and Blair!” I said giggling. “Hi Desi, you don’t mind me calling you that?” Bill said walking toward her. “No I don’t mind at all, all my friends call me Desi.” she laughed. “You guys can sit down if you want” Gustav said caringly. “That was quite the scuffle out there!” Georg said. “Yea but we are alright, right guys?” I said proudly. “YES!” they all said. We all took a seat sitting on a huge couch. Georg came over and asked Blair to hang with him. She left without a sound ha. Tom asked me to sit with him, so I joined him on the smaller couch. Sitting rather close to him which he liked. The Bill got up and walked over to Desi and started talking to her. “So I’ve seen you at our shows in LA, you are very beautiful.” he said looking into her deep brown eyes. “Well Thank you Bill, you can sit if you want.” she says leaning closer to him. In the other room Hail is talking music with Gustav. We were all very busy, each of us with each band member. “So do you live here in LA, Brittney?” Tom asked staring into my light blue eyes. “Yea I just recently moved here about 4 months ago to live with my mom.” I said drifting off into his chocolate brown eyes. Suddenly my cell starts vibrating, I take it out and its my mom. “WHAT DO YOU WANT!” I say angrily. “When are you going to be home???” mom says in a nagging tone. “I don’t know late.” I say right before Tom grabs phone and closes it. Then he kisses me so passionately, it was filled with everything a kiss should be. Just then Blair runs up and says “It’s getting late.” “Do guys want to come to the Hotel with us?” Bill asks. “Well yea!” Desi yells. “Ok then we are off!” Tom says standing up. “What about my car?” I say sadly. “We will have one our guards take it to the Hotel.” Tom says convincingly. So we head off to the Hotel. I call my mom to tell her im not coming home tonight I’m staying at Desi’s. So to recap everyone is hitting it off. Bill with Desiree, Gustav with Haileigh, Blair with Georg, and me with TOM!!!! My dream come true, ive had a crush on him forever and it seemed he liked me back.



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